Honghuang: All My Attendants Are Goddesses

The writing is very good, it just needs to be able to focus on the key points and not be wordy. It's not just about the number of words, but the content should be exciting and beautiful. For example: The little thing about Shi Ji, Taiyi Master, has been written for more than ten chapters, and it will not be finished until the end of the Conferred God. A dozen chapters are not enough, then the Jiuqu Yellow River Formation, the Ten Thousand Immortal Formation and the Four Saints breaking into the Immortal Killing Sword Formation... Then there will be dozens of chapters to start, and then there will be a Journey to the West to measure the tribulation, and it will not be possible to finish thousands of chapters! ! ! I personally feel that the author is just trying to make up for the word count, repeating too much without mentioning the key points. The male protagonist should control the direction of the calamity and focus on improving the strength of himself and his maids, or changing the tragic ending of the Wudang Jinlingguiling... This is the key trend of this novel. As for measuring the calamity under controllable circumstances, That is secondary. After all, it can be seen from the name of the novel that the maid is an important part, and the calamity is an auxiliary part. Otherwise, even if it can write 100 million words, it is not a successful work, and it cannot escape the repeated wordiness. The words are not many, but the essence... I hope the author can understand... Some suggestions, don't blame me

We haven't even started to confer gods yet. Where do we get the soldiers from? Where do all these inner dramas come from? I think too much in my mind.

This book is good!