The Zhang Clan’s Immortal Lineage: I Have a Stele of Enlightenment

The writing is okay, but a foundation-building family has both a patriarch and a family head. It's very confusing. After reading so many family stories, there is no such thing as a patriarch and a family head at the same time. Shouldn't the family head be the patriarch?

I can only say that it is very classic, and there are three unexplainable chapters in the first 10 chapters alone. As an elder, I can't see a person who has just realized the spiritual energy of the first level of Qi refining. Aren't you curious about where the protagonist's skills come from? And knowing clearly that it is the Five Spiritual Roots, how could it be possible to achieve a successful breakthrough within a month? And within the clan, the clansmen did not recommend these newborns to go to the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion to find skills. It's strange. The protagonist has just been cultivating for 5 years, broke through the fifth level of Qi refining, and then hid on the third floor to take on the mission about the spirit stone veins. It may not be certain. The disciples stationed inside are all higher than the hidden realm of the protagonist. What's more, what's revealed now is only the third level on the outside. What's the use of going? This brother is also very arrogant and has such a low level of cultivation. If he doesn't recommend some assistance for small tasks to the protagonist, why would he recommend such a larger task? Do you think the protagonist is getting impatient?

It's a decent fairy tale, and the overall writing is very idealistic. Except for the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists, the emotional expressions of everyone else are more or less stiff. In addition, there are many contradictions in the context of the novel's content, and in many places it feels like the above text is being ignored.

To give you an objective evaluation, if you really don't know how to write, you can read The Mortal's Journey to Immortality. What did Han Li do when he met a female cultivator? You can't even walk when you meet a woman. I can't stand it anymore.

I can't walk when I see a woman. Don't even recognize him. Just give her the ancient spiritual seed. You fool, I hate this kind of dog-licking article. 🤮🤮

It's well written and beautiful. I can't move when I see a woman.

Very good-looking, very good-looking!!!!!! Five-star praise!!!

Personally, I think the content is good, but the protagonist is naive and has a personality that is not suitable for cultivating immortality. People who just met him believe it and almost died. When I first met the woman named Shen, my eyes were filled with eyes 😅. There is a problem with the character development of the protagonist.

The foundation-building forces and the golden elixir forces are not equal to each other, let alone sacrifice for them. It's understandable to self-destruct to protect the family, but it's just a mission. Such a sacrifice cannot be explained. The protagonist and a similar heroine reveal that their spiritual bodies are extremely different from each other, and the other party's reward is that they also cultivate spiritual bodies, which made me even more speechless. It seems that the family has not talked about spiritual bodies. The main character being stabbed in the back wasn't cruel enough, I believe the person was too fast and it was difficult for the beauty to pass. Of course, there are also some overly deliberate descriptions of the two of them. In the end, the words similar to "nothing in return" appeared at least three times, and I was speechless. The presence of the golden finger is too low, and the descriptions are few and weak. Even if it is a five-element spirit, it does not necessarily have to be a sword. It can just highlight the advantages of the five-element magic and combine it with the golden finger.

In Chapter 27, I saw that the woman couldn't walk.