HP: There Are Teeth Marks on the Collarbone, You Are Mine

It's good-looking, but there are too few of them [crying]. The young master with rich and changeable emotions and the little baby with dull emotions and incomprehensible emotions complement each other very well [Thinking], the young master is going to be so angry, and we, Cynthia, are not in the mood yet.

Very nice! ! I really feel sorry for my sister [crying] because she blocked her emotions in order not to hurt her family! This really hurts me, I can't stand this kind of family affection! ! The plot is well written, and I really like watching this kind of daily school life! Xiaolong and sister Bao really match each other hahahahaha! I really like the way the heroine is cute and a little bit human. It makes Xiaolong so angry every time [note] [note] There is also Xiaolong's distinctive and twisted character! Five full stars! ! Come on!

It's a super nice novel!!! I've read a lot of hp fanfics, and there are no common hp clichés. The characters are very three-dimensional, everyone is vivid, and there is no single description. Neither the protagonist nor some of the minor characters are black and white, and the characters are not OOC at all. The author's writing style is particularly delicate, and the details are well described. Although the story line is drawn slowly, it does not feel boring at all. When I read it, I can feel how much effort the author has put into this book and the characters. It makes people immersed in it and makes them feel that their stories are real. And I am lucky enough to be the audience of this story. The human-machine heroine baby and the tsundere dragon are super cute ૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა♡ It looks good, I love watching it, and I love eating it! The author must insist on making more updates.

Very well written! Why is the rating so low! First of all, the heroine is not an exaggerated golden finger, which may be attributed to the author's writing style. Secondly, I also like the personality development of the characters. There is basically no OOC. It gives me a natural feeling that if this character really existed in the HL world, it would basically develop like this! It's not offensive to anyone (in my opinion), and it's not OOC. The writing style is so childish, it can be considered a 🍅 rare hp masterpiece! Looking forward to writing a full-length novel! Just a few words, I really like the treatment of Pansy. She really won't become sober all of a sudden, because the education she received since childhood is deeply ingrained. I think this is why I like it very much. In other novels, the protagonist may be awakened by the protagonist at once and become a follower. In my opinion, it is a bit unreal, because human nature cannot change so much all at once, and I also saw that there will be changes in the later period in the text. I am looking forward to the next plot! Another one is Xiaolong's growth. You can really see that he is slowly changing day by day. Recognize the strength of the heroine and work hard to become mature and think. And the friendship between Theodore and Blaise makes my heart melt! ! ! Friendship is the best! (When everyone asked the heroine if they could choose her as a family member, I really cried and laughed! I was so happy! Our heroine is such a shining existence! No one will not be attracted!) The Harry trio are also growing up, and Ron is not ignorant of the stereotype of "she is a Slytherin, and Slytherins are bad people!" He is also a Weasley after all! Even if you were prejudiced before, you will change in the face of the heroine's help and kindness again and again, and you will not become a stereotype! Hermione! Our smart baby! Be considerate! Maybe because they were both born as Muggles, I don't have a very stereotyped impression of Slytherin, a very smart baby! Harry too, I love every author who writes about Harry's vicious tongue! Hhhh I really like the venomous Xiao Ha. When he changed his mind and regarded the heroine as his sister, I really wanted to cry! She is the family you choose, baby! ! Our heroine, I can really see little by little that she has changed from a "human machine" to now I can feel the emotional changes. Maybe she hasn't noticed it herself yet. It's really not easy! At first I was glad that she couldn't feel the malice, but now I'm sorry that she couldn't feel the kindness [I almost cried] We are all good children! I look forward to seeing this group of Hogwarts wizards do great things under the leadership of the heroine! Thank you to the author for writing so well! ! ! Don't stop updating, baby! I will click in every day to remind you of the update [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] (This is my first long review, so I wrote it in a long way)

I really like Cynthia's character. A child who grew up in love is really beautiful and makes people cry. I like her sincerity and the natural stupidity of the little human machine. But now she shows her leadership temperament at a young age. Sometimes I am so excited by her cute face and her cleverness. Yes, I am Mu Qiangpi😎. As for Decorah, it was the first time I saw the author analyze him like this, and I was very impressed. I also liked this character because of the movie actor (but later the movie was too ugly and I discarded it). It is really amazing to see this kind of psychological growth, and the complexity is well displayed. Also, I really want to say that your life is so good, I am really jealous (bushi), but only this kind of child surrounded by love can love it passionately [shy] Regarding the emotional line: The only partner I have is in the best condition right now. I really look forward to what will happen when Cynthia gradually understands feelings. When will the introductory plot appear [shy], I really want to know. I just realized that I typed Xiaolong's name wrong, Draco. It's so embarrassing.

I haven't watched it for a long time. First of all, it is worthy of recognition that the author's writing is very smooth and the plot is well connected. It is worth watching [Love] The heroine has a very distinct and unique character, with an online IQ, calm and friendly, but her IQ drops a little when she encounters the male protagonist. The heroine is a Slytherin, and her shrewdness and refined egoism are her usual style. In this book, the heroine's counterattack is in line with the characteristics of the academy, but it feels a little aggrieved. She has a natural filter for the male protagonist, which of course may be related to the heroine's personality. This book is very good, very detailed, thank you for the food [love]

Highly recommended, it made me feel like I was watching LOFTER. Not to mention the writing is good, the character plot is completely okay and very interesting. It makes me feel that it is not just a fanfic, but I am watching the heroine's experience in the magical world. The heroine has a very strong personality and behavior, and there is no rigidity and rigidity like a "camera" at all (ps: I am not attacking anyone...) All in all, it's very pretty! ! ! !

The heroine is very special. Blindfolded, I feel particularly handsome. I really felt sorry for the heroine earlier, about the heroine's childhood experience. And Slytherin's 80's are really easy to feel depressing. Fortunately, the heroine doesn't care and is able to protect herself. The heroine is really strong. It's very well written (but I want to make a complaint. The title of the book is tacky. I remember I read it before, but I didn't read it after looking at the title. I thought the writing was not good...) For Draco. I think it's well described. Although based on his character setting, he has always been unfriendly to the heroine, but he only said a few words in his mouth and heart, and did not take any 80 actions. I can accept that. And group portraits actually put me off. But every chapter in it has a female protagonist plot, which is very good and I like it very much. Professor Snape wrote this which warms my heart.

The first time I saw this setting, I loved it so much that I didn't want to continue watching it. It's really beautiful. Everyone has shortcomings and bad tempers, but they are all changing and improving. It's not a one-man show, it's a group portrait. I really like it. I love it. I hope the author can continue to make more. I have followed a lot of interrupted updates [crying], author, come on [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

It's very interesting [shy] and a relatively in-depth article, but I still hope that the heroine can avoid a series of things such as Voldemort's occupation of the Malfoy house. In fact, the heroine's golden finger is open enough at this time, so it should be possible. Don't abuse me😭 Can the author show some love to Xiaolong?

Welcome everyone to watch the love story between our "little human machine" heroine and the irritable little dragon. In order not to hurt her family, she took the initiative to experience hypnotic closed emotions. In her daily interactions, she mostly communicates with people according to the survival manual (?) Given by her father. She likes to use data to speak for many things, but should she say that she is worthy of being a Slytherin? Why is she purer than Xiaolong? Her parents love the heroine very much and work hard for the heroine. Although they don't know much about the wizarding world, they will still try their best to do their best for the heroine for the sake of their daughter. They are the leaders in the direction of the heroine's progress. They carefully care for the heroine but are not over-protective. They are worried but proud of the heroine. Every time I write a letter back, my parents may be worried but proud of the heroine and teach the heroine seriously how to take the next step. As for Xiaolong... We won't say more about this arrogant and unenlightened guy. I am curious when he will become enlightened. Although he has already begun to secretly possess him before he becomes enlightened, what happens after he becomes enlightened? [Shy][shy][shy] In general, is author explosion better? I can't wait

It's quite interesting... The first-grade story is quite long, but it's not boring. Anyway, it's not the kind of original plot that revolves around a trio. The heroine has her own thing to do and is always learning new knowledge. Most of the time she is like a mini-human machine. She is very cute. The silent wandless spell is very cool (>^ω^<) The name of this book is so outrageous [laughs] (I thought it was some ancient Mary Sue)

The author's writing style is really delicate and touching, and the characters are vivid and warm. Especially the heroine in the novel is beautiful, gentle, and has a positive outlook on life. She is the most ideal appearance in my heart. She is so sensible that it makes people feel heartbroken. In order not to hurt her family in the early stage, she shielded her emotions and hid all her softness and worries in her heart. Such a family line is gentle and heart-wrenching, and every detail makes people moved. After entering the campus, the cherished yet ignorant youthful friendship between her and her friends was particularly touching. It was clean and pure, full of the most beautiful aspects of youth. The male protagonist is awkward and arrogant, but has been slow to realize it, but he has already revealed his possessiveness and care inadvertently. Paired with the female protagonist's always gentle and tolerant attitude, the interaction is delicate and easy to tease, which completely touches the heart of the female protagonist. What moved me the most was the heroine's parents. They knew nothing about the wizarding world, but they were willing to do their best to find out and understand it for their daughter, and they tried their best to pave the way for her. They are the leaders in her life, carefully caring for her as she grows up, but never restricting her too much. They are concerned and worried about her, but at the same time they are proud of her. Every time I see the clip of the heroine writing home, I can feel the deep and restrained love, gentle and powerful. The whole article is impeccable in terms of writing style, characters, and emotional portrayal. It is gentle and healing. The more I read, the more I read. I didn't want to go to bed until midnight. I really liked it!

It's very interesting. The heroine's shining point, the hero's struggle with identity, and the advantages of Draco's character are all very good. But but but, teacher, it's really too slow, the writing is too slow, the delicate analysis of feelings in writing is really delicious, but you can't analyze it all the time. I've already read Chapter 190, and I've just gone to the Forbidden Forest to find unicorns.

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The image of Xiaolong is really well portrayed! ! ! Very cute! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The plot is also very interesting! ! The Great God has come! ! ! ! !

This article exceeded my expectations. I have clicked on it many times before but never read it completely, because I actually suggested that Muggles be sorted into Slytherin. Recently, I was frightened by the only Muggles in Slytherin on Douyin. But I read this article with the mentality of giving it a try. It was very different from what I expected, and the characters were not strictly OOC. It is heavy, and there are many thoughts from another angle that I have not discovered before, such as Snape's confinement. Before reading this article, I thought confinement was a kind of punishment. Now it seems that confinement is also a way of learning. I have consolidated and learned knowledge in different ways. This article is indeed very different. I hope the author will continue to write it. I would like to add that Cynthia's little human-machine baby is really cute, and Xiaolong's inner drama is really rich. His sometimes awkwardness and self-advocacy are also a bit funny. This arrogant young master hahaha

It's so good. Someone finally raised this point. Why do witches and wizards learn such powerful magic and want to find a pure-blood man to marry? Author, if you change it, I will fight with you! ! !

A very wonderful novel. I rarely see deeper thinking beyond the story in HP worldview fan fiction. I look forward to keeping up with the quality updates, and don't run out of food! I heard that if you give it five stars, it will easily be deleted by the platform. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but I still couldn't. Such a good novel does not deserve four stars!

It's great to watch, Cynthia's human-robot baby is so cute, and Draco is portrayed very well. It's slow paced but not boring. It mainly revolves around the heroine, who has both career and life emotions, without recreating the plot of the original work too much. It's very interesting. There are so many more updates, not enough to watch

Super cool. When the heroine first appeared, she was considered a Muggle, but in my opinion, the process of Draco falling in love with the heroine step by step is not OOC. If there really is such a person as the heroine, I believe she will really fall in love with him. It is powerful and convincing. The plot is not groundless, it is well-founded and complete, and it is very logical and interesting. In fact, the heroine hasn't fully figured out the love yet, but there is no unpleasant part. My career is also super great and smooth. And what makes me feel very comfortable is that this is not an awakening of only the protagonist group, but an awakening that affects many people. Many outstanding women should have their own careers, and they should not be imprisoned by such ideas. I feel sorry for Snape's mother. I thought that he had such a high talent, but chose to marry a Muggle. I have hidden my identity for more than 10 years. Are you also affected by this kind of thinking? And although it is a group portrait, it is not uncomfortable. Everyone is surrounding the heroine. The feeling of awakening around the heroine is that if one day the heroine really reaches a high position, they will be the heroine's most solid support.

It's really super pretty. The characters are not OOC. I haven't finished reading it yet. I just want to know when the male protagonist can see the female protagonist's eyes. It's really beautiful. I feel that Nott is also interested in the female protagonist. I hope there can be more scenes between the female protagonist and Xiaolong. I wonder if there will be a car in the follow-up, is it he? Must he.

I can't bear to finish reading it. The writing is so gentle. Even the supporting characters have taken the time to show them vividly. I haven't seen such delicious writing in a long time. Come on, teacher! Write slowly at your own pace [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

The characters are three-dimensional and have their own characteristics. The complexity and fullness of the world view are also outstanding among all fan fictions. The pace is very slow but not boring. There is no sense of rush that insists on following the main line. Jazz is a great novel! [Like][Like]

Overall, it's okay, but I don't know why there is an aggrieved rush [exploration]

Cynthia is calm, rational, and has a delicate emotional line. Both parties love each other and have no ambiguous relationships except each other. Her parents have always used adult methods to teach her how to get along with others.

Very good, the heroine setting is very strong, but now she looks a bit human-like hahaha It should be a long novel, it took me a long time and I was only 12 years old.

Nice! A very good HP fanfic! It's slow to catch on in the early stage but the content is solid, the characters are not whitewashed, and the group portraits are comfortable. The score is underestimated. If you like two-way growth, you must try it! Also, cheers for the author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Wow wow wow! It's beautiful, I really like the heroine's baby! I hope she can regain her emotions as soon as possible, control her magic power, and have a rich and beautiful life as soon as possible!

Very nice! Then there is no OOC, and the plot development is also logical. Particularly fond of [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Very nice! Can you ask the author how many thousand words this book will be finished?