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Personal review: Shangjia Liangcao has finished reading the current catalog. The writing of the three characters is quite good. The writing of the female star is a bit bad. She is under great pressure and oppressed. The agent and assistant are not paying attention to it. Suddenly there is a box of high-end wine. She must be in a state of abandonment. There is a bit of a loophole in the logic. It's fine to keep the persona of being tough-talking and hard-working, but suddenly having more money becomes a bit redundant. . Classmate Xiaoran's evolution is still a bit uninteresting. Design not only clothes but also trinkets for Yuzi and the female star. The acting is probably a foreshadowing, but I suggest you leave a bug (stay in the play state for 30 minutes). The system is a good thing, but it won't be fun if it's invincible. I feel a sense of security now, and the humor is pretty good. If the other person respects you, your character will actually come alive. Then maybe I read it too quickly. I haven't seen it before but it was mentioned suddenly. Hope to continue to update. There is indeed little feedback at the moment, but I am reading 1.2W and I don't know how to calculate it.

The character Cheng You makes this book come alive and gives readers another possibility. Usually with this kind of title and this kind of subject matter, the female characters in it are basically the harem of the male protagonist. There is definitely a harem in this book, but there are also blue threads like Cheng You who end up in the mountains, rivers and seas instead of surrounding the male protagonist. Who says that the redeemed must fall in love with the redeemer? After all, authors need to eat when writing books. In the current market environment, many people don't want to use their brains when reading novels. There are endless harem novels with redemption themes. However, the essence of redemption is to make each other better people

Dear author, from the curiosity of clicking on the first chapter to the concern of following the update, without knowing it, your words have accompanied me through many days and nights. The anticipation every time I refresh the page, the excitement when I see the wonderful plot, and the emotion when I read the delicate emotions, all make me want to say to you: Thank you for using your pen and ink to build such a vivid world for us.

The emotional drama is readable, but the author, are you the one with the favorability value I set at the beginning? I forgot, what's the use of your favorability value except for 20,000 yuan? The setting of the red line and the blue line is very good, but what about the doctor? , But as a free novel, this novel is still edible. I read it when I have nothing to do. If you like this type of reading, you can read it if you are a book reader. Come on, author, keep writing. By the way, author, when will you fix those poisonous points? For the sake of following you for several days, I'll give you a supplement.

Hao Kan [Send Heart] [Send Heart], the plot is not cliché, maybe the protagonist is a little emotional in the early stage (I think it is just arranged by the system), but later on he becomes more like a human being, already eaten, not a eunuch. Anyway, I think it is a pretty good-looking book in Tomatoes. Now that I have seen the latest, I am looking forward to the future development. Dude, I'm really not asking for help [smile][smile]

After reading Chapter 56, this book is relatively novel in concept, which is eye-catching. It has also opened up some other ideas, such as not just having sex with a girl, but also having a happy ending. However, the current overall description is more dreamy, with female CEOs and female celebrities as fragile as eggs. This situation is like watching a Vietnamese version of a palace drama. Generally speaking, it feels like you are just playing house, and the author has no description of daily life or plot. He constantly enters the main line and meets new people. He has a lot of skills. To be honest, I can't see their use. It is worth encouraging, but I suggest the author not to think too much and just practice his skills. If he feels that he is in place, it will be more suitable to open the next book.

Later, everyone became the leading figures in various fields. One day, Sang Xun disappeared. When he found it, he only had a blood-stained black jacket. In order to save them, Sang Xun never came back. Jie Jie Jie Jie[Thinking][Thinking] Next part: All members are reborn to save Sang Xun

It's pretty good, not bad. The emotional line is a bit slow. Compared to the traditional redemption novel, it seems to have opened up a different path of its own. The writing is pretty good. Come on, author. Su Nian's line may indeed be a bit poisonous. After all, he is a red line person. Writing it like this can really cause people psychological discomfort. It was directly changed to a female security guard. As a woman's jealousy, she monitors and sneaks into Su Nian's house from behind. It's quite effective to kill Su Nian. Come on, author [eating melon]

I like it. The feeling at the beginning is just average, it is a very normal redemption story, and there is a lot of brainstorming process. Later it is on the right track. I like the plot of a group of people going to their hometown in the snowy mountains. It is popular. The biggest problem now is that the book has too little exposure and few reviews. I always feel that the author can't finish it [face covering] Come on.

The writing is very delicate and the writing style is very good. Good luck to the author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

. . . Not bad, the best part is that you don't have to worry about the economic situation, and the props given by the system can be used as a warm little theater, which is quite interesting. The main reason is that the entry point to contact girls is a bit stiff, and then it feels a bit like AI, and the plot in the front is a bit cliche, but the rest is okay. 7.8 Or above, I want to see the ending

I really think it looks good Why is it gone! [Cry]

The author writes very well, keep up the good work

Well written, step by step

If you're not a billionaire, why haven't you started a business yet? It's really strange. Could it be that the Su Group was eaten up by eating soft rice?

It's very novel and looks better than the traditional ones. You really might as well take a look.

It's very interesting. I read the latest chapter in one go. The author continues to write [Admiration]. It's very interesting to read. The only problem seems to be how do you feel that the favorability indicated by the system is different from the actual favorability?

Not bad, not bad, not bad

(｡･ω･｡) I think it's pretty good [shy]

A very nice book When I read Cheng You, this book was already a very good book. My personal feeling was directly sublimated. It was like a love apartment. Some people left and some came. Some good matches were in the mountains, seas and lakes, and some were in Room 201, which made me feel deeply.

Feeling fine so far

It's good to watch at night

The male protagonist has a good personality

Keep up the good work [Learned]

Nice, nice, very nice

It's pretty cool, keep up the good work

Why isn't anyone watching?

The further back you go, the better it looks

It's beautiful, but why are there so few people?

It's okay, but it's too short, and it's gone without seeing anything.