[The rating just came out, and it’ll rise] [Multiple heroines + System + Redemption + Love triangle drama + Cohabitation]
When sophomore Sang Xun was bound to the “All-Purpose Dating System,” he thought he was about to start a carefree life of flirting with girls. Then he looked up and saw a countdown above the campus beauty’s head: [Time Until Death: 71 hours]!
They were trapped in an abyss, and Sang Xun was their only light.
With the System at his fingertips, he could turn anything into data: use his Insight Eye to expose the real culprit behind a smear campaign, use digital forensics to take down a corrupt company, and use elite fighting skills to tear apart a perverted stalker!
Jiang Ran: A shy, socially anxious roommate who tries to stay invisible. Behind her black-rimmed glasses is a stunning 96-point beauty, and only in front of Sang Xun does she blush with embarrassment beneath her skirt.
Su Nian: A decisive corporate CEO who, when the power goes out on a snowy night, boldly climbs into Sang Xun’s bed. “I’m the client. What’s wrong with borrowing your legs to warm me up?”
Xu Wan: A cool, abstinent genius school doctor who loves studying Sang Xun’s veins. “Your veins have excellent elasticity. I’d like to invite you out for braised chicken.”
Qiao Yi: A goddess hated by the entire internet. During a livestream in a haunted house, she gets so scared that she clings to Sang Xun like a koala, and millions of viewers go wild shipping them.
On his journey to save these beautiful women, Sang Xun casually becomes a trillionaire! They are surrounded by the world’s malice, and he is the only one who can tear fate apart and rescue them from the brink.
Personal review: Shangjia Liangcao has finished reading the current catalog. The writing of the three characters is quite good. The writing of the female star is a bit bad. She is under great pressure and oppressed. The agent and assistant are not paying attention to it. Suddenly there is a box of high-end wine. She must be in a state of abandonment. There is a bit of a loophole in the logic. It's fine to keep the persona of being tough-talking and hard-working, but suddenly having more money becomes a bit redundant. . Classmate Xiaoran's evolution is still a bit uninteresting. Design not only clothes but also trinkets for Yuzi and the female star. The acting is probably a foreshadowing, but I suggest you leave a bug (stay in the play state for 30 minutes). The system is a good thing, but it won't be fun if it's invincible. I feel a sense of security now, and the humor is pretty good. If the other person respects you, your character will actually come alive. Then maybe I read it too quickly. I haven't seen it before but it was mentioned suddenly. Hope to continue to update. There is indeed little feedback at the moment, but I am reading 1.2W and I don't know how to calculate it.
The character Cheng You makes this book come alive and gives readers another possibility. Usually with this kind of title and this kind of subject matter, the female characters in it are basically the harem of the male protagonist. There is definitely a harem in this book, but there are also blue threads like Cheng You who end up in the mountains, rivers and seas instead of surrounding the male protagonist. Who says that the redeemed must fall in love with the redeemer? After all, authors need to eat when writing books. In the current market environment, many people don't want to use their brains when reading novels. There are endless harem novels with redemption themes. However, the essence of redemption is to make each other better people
Dear author, from the curiosity of clicking on the first chapter to the concern of following the update, without knowing it, your words have accompanied me through many days and nights. The anticipation every time I refresh the page, the excitement when I see the wonderful plot, and the emotion when I read the delicate emotions, all make me want to say to you: Thank you for using your pen and ink to build such a vivid world for us.
The emotional drama is readable, but the author, are you the one with the favorability value I set at the beginning? I forgot, what's the use of your favorability value except for 20,000 yuan? The setting of the red line and the blue line is very good, but what about the doctor? , But as a free novel, this novel is still edible. I read it when I have nothing to do. If you like this type of reading, you can read it if you are a book reader. Come on, author, keep writing. By the way, author, when will you fix those poisonous points? For the sake of following you for several days, I'll give you a supplement.
It's awesome💕💕, the plot is not cliché, maybe the protagonist is a little emotional in the early stage (I think it's just arranged by the system), but later on he becomes more like a human being, already eaten, not a eunuch. Anyway, I think it's a pretty good book in Tomatoes. Now that I've seen the latest, I'm looking forward to the future. Dude, I'm really not asking for help 🙂 🙂
Later, everyone became the leading figures in various fields. One day, Sang Xun disappeared. When he found it, he only had a blood-stained black jacket. In order to save them, Sang Xun never came back. Jiejiejiejie🤔🤔 Next part: Everyone is reborn to save Sang Xun
After reading Chapter 56, this book is relatively novel in concept, which is eye-catching. It has also opened up some other ideas, such as not just having sex with a girl, but also having a happy ending. However, the current overall description is more dreamy, with female CEOs and female celebrities as fragile as eggs. This situation is like watching a Vietnamese version of a palace drama. Generally speaking, it feels like you are just playing house, and the author has no description of daily life or plot. He constantly enters the main line and meets new people. He has a lot of skills. To be honest, I can't see their use. It is worth encouraging, but I suggest the author not to think too much and just practice his skills. If he feels that he is in place, it will be more suitable to open the next book.
It's pretty good, not bad. The emotional line is a bit slow. Compared to the traditional redemption novel, it seems to have opened up a different path of its own. The writing is pretty good. Come on, author. Su Nian's line may indeed be a bit poisonous. After all, he is a red line person. Writing it like this can really cause people psychological discomfort. It was directly changed to a female security guard. As a woman's jealousy, she monitors and sneaks into Su Nian's house from behind. It's quite effective to kill Su Nian. Come on, author 🍉
I like it. The feeling at the beginning is just average, it is a very normal redemption story, and there is a lot of brainstorming process. Later it is on the right track. I like the plot of a group of people going to their hometown in the snowy mountains. It is popular. The biggest problem now is that the book has too little exposure and few reviews. I always feel that the author can't finish it🤦Come on
The writing is very delicate and the writing style is very good. Good luck to the author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]