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I like it very much. I like the character of the protagonist very much. At first, I thought it was just a routine. But after joining the sect, I felt a leap forward and everyone became more alive. College student Pai Long Aotian is very real, interesting, and also has growth. At first, the protagonist thought it was a traditional plot of a vicious male protagonist awakening, but later he discovered that his self, the high-spirited look in red clothes, was not the stiff feeling in many stories, but the demeanor of a royal child. The group portrait is excellent, and I like the senior sister very much. She looks towards the "Tao", and looks indifferent and cute. Moreover, there is also a clear explanation of the core of cultivating immortality, which means cultivating Taoism. The writing style is also very good, and the slow growth of the plot struck a chord with me every time. After all, I have read many traditional immortal novels. This is what novels about immortality should be like, in order to present a magnificent and colorful world. So, the author must finish the book well. It is so short, if he had to write a thousand chapters for me, I could finish it.

The writing is super strong, not like a book on a foreign persimmon, and the characters are created very well. Regarding the description of the First Palace of Taishang Dao and the apprenticeship, it can be seen that the author is serious about describing the cultivation of immortality, rather than a fast-food upgrade.

The story of this book is very attractive to me. Lu Heyun's character and his arrogant little moves are crazy on my xp. I also like his interaction with Lin Hefeng. It is really like the daily life of cats and dogs. Of course, it is not only about describing them, but also like Gu's Taoist heart and the common people. Like Mo, he is loyal to his friends, and like Du, even if he is usually cunning, he is always consistent with others at critical moments. The friendship between several people is enviable. It can be regarded as a micro-group portrait, and I also like this. In short, I can't finish it in a few words, and I have to go and savor it myself. Highly recommended, hurry up!

It took me a while to rate it! How should I put it? I rewrote it twice. This is the third time. I found that my expression ability is very poor, but the teacher wrote it very well. The one who had a deeper feeling was Lin Xianglu saying that he had nothing to compare with him, it was nothing. I think what he was talking about was that he was mainly from other worlds, and the sense of alienation in other worlds. Although the expression was not deep, it was there, and it was similar to what Wen Xian said later,

I hope Xiaolin can mature soon a I feel like I'm feeling springy (bushi) every day now, and I hope I can grow up as a person soon.

It's not so pretty, hehehehe, this threesome is so cool (referring to friends!) The group portrait is so good! Fragrant rice ~ Hehehehehe

Ahhhh, Ah Feng has trained Long Aotian into a dog, it's so sweet [Adoration]

It's so beautiful, His Highness's character is so cute, I like it (*´ω｀*), I want to put a sack in it and catch him~

Well, it looks good. I hope it will look better later.

It looks great, good luck to the author!

It's good to read. When I saw the title, I thought it was a cliche. But as soon as I saw that the male protagonist is a college student who has traveled through time, I knew that this book was different. As I read on, it became more and more interesting.

Good luck, good luck, I look forward to how the two of them fell in love! ! ! Write quickly!

It's very interesting, but the progress is a bit slow. Judging from what I've written so far, the author probably plans to write a long article.

The book written by the teacher is very beautiful (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤～

It's very well written and beautiful. Come on, teacher, I hope I can keep following it.

Maybe it's because I've eaten too much fast food, and I feel that my progress is really slow (or maybe it's because the author didn't update too much. The author updated it very quickly [crazy]). When will I be able to transform into a dragon? Although it's already at 10% now, it seems very fast, but in fact my cultivation is only in the Qi training period [smile]

Who hasn't come to see the young couple fall in love? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

How can I bear to blame you for making a mistake? I gave you too much freedom. (Brainwashed)

Cute, cute, such a cute little couple

It's okay, I'm a little curious about the protagonist's past story.

The content is wonderful and the emotions are gradually developed.

Very nice group portrait. The protagonists are not just swordsmen, they are all very strong.

It's a bit nice to read, the writing style is very relaxed and pleasant, I'm looking forward to the plot behind it

It's beautiful, I love watching it, I like this setting very much [crying], I finally found my favorite setting among foreign persimmons, I'm already crying