The Foundry Won't Pay? My Price Backstabs the Original Manufacturer

After reading it, it's okay. I'll just write it now. There are a few questions. The first one is that the protagonist is not called cheap father. If the background is strong, it is said to be cheap parents, etc., If it is an orphan, etc., And why others are called emperors, generals, rich second generation, etc., Why am I an ordinary person. The second one, at first, I thought that the relationship between the female anchor and the protagonist would gradually change, but it turned out that the relationship was still the same as a normal one, so I said it would be fine. Now there is another woman. She was an artist before, but she is no longer an artist, so I hope to be the same as the anchor. It's not that you can't be with a woman, it's because you don't want to read many novels once they mention women. If men and women fight together to fight life and death, the result is that we should be together, so you understand the meaning. When writing a heroine, it's okay to be normal, but it's not good if it's too exaggerated. The third one seemed like the system said it had money at first, but it turned out that the system said it was a disabled system, so the rewards changed. If it really gave money, it could be finished now. Why, because it's not fun to wait for tens of billions just to give it casually, so just give it the blueprint, but the blueprint shouldn't be too advanced. Just give it to what you have now, and you don't need to give it to cross planets. It's nothing like cultivating immortals, so just slowly write it to the top 500. The fourth one hopes that the protagonist's father is capable and does not rely on the protagonist for everything. He hopes that the father and son will work together to manage their own company, and then write that the company will become stronger and the protagonist will get married and have children, and then the children will help the protagonist. At this point, it will be over. Or granddaughters and grandchildren, just call the protagonist a grandfather and the protagonist's father Grandpa Zeng. Therefore, the rewards cannot be very high-end. The fifth one is good to write like this in court, three sentences. The first is the plaintiff, please abide by the court discipline. The second plaintiff continues to speak and be careful not to curse. The third plaintiff, don't imitate the defendant. Try not to say anything that has nothing to do with this case. It's quite funny. So... Finally there is a problem. Fortunately, this is a small problem. Although it is a small problem, it will definitely not work if you keep repeating it again and again. The celebrity said he wants to fight on the assembly line. Take a look, this is okay, but if he does something wrong, you must scold him. If you don't scold him, he will think it's easy. Wait, even if you don't scold him, you still have to say it, otherwise you think it's easy to work. Also, I don't live in a hotel anymore. I live in a dormitory. Can you pay me the same amount? Etc. In the end, it's okay, but the problem can't happen again. If it happens five or six times, why do you still do this? For the time being, this is my personal opinion and suggestion.

The settings are pretty good. The various characters are quite vivid, but the writing is a bit too hasty. The content is not detailed enough. Time flows too fast. There is too little development process.

If you write well, if you don't write well, will you be worthy of your readers and fans? Come on.

Come on everyone 👏. Hope it gets better and better in the future