HP: Become the Boss Among the Death Eaters

This book is beautiful, but the reason I gave it four stars is that it didn't meet my expectations. Because of the title and introduction of the book, you may want to see the game between some of the protagonists and Voldemort, or the heroine developing her own power. In other words, there is a delicate balance between the Order of the Phoenix and the Death Eaters. But in fact, there is very little written about this aspect, and it takes up very little space. The protagonist basically just takes one side against the Order of the Phoenix, and Voldemort's side is really very small. Well, let's talk about the heroine. She is labeled by the author of Slytherin, and she is also ambitious. But actually, regarding the character design and Slytherin, I didn't feel that the character was well developed. The heroine can witness the death of some people because of her prophecy, and for some reasons from childhood, she cherishes the people she has been with, but she feels too kind and gentle. That's not to say that the protagonist can't wear the mask of kindness, it's just that he is Slytherin and a descendant of Gaunt. Therefore, I am more expecting that the protagonist may go crazy (I feel that if he is not a descendant of Slytherin, he can be in any house). The character design is actually good, but the writing is a bit too flat. In fact, I feel it has something to do with the story line. I can try to adjust the outline for future writing.

Good looking Del is a very gentle girl, she is really tolerant, the kind of person who will be as tolerant to the people she likes as she is to her younger siblings (she will directly fight back against those she doesn't like) The heroine is very capable, and the Gunter family has always been eager to learn and study + good at teaching. The plot lines are those in the movie, and the protagonists will not be described in detail. Some of the plot lines were heard by Dale later. The plot lines were mainly about her own money-making scheme and being obsessed with Malfoy. No major characters were injured Love line Malfoy » Others, it even feels like how Harry suddenly fell in love with the heroine, mainly Malfoy + Theodore, mixed with some Geminis

Give it a five-star support, it's all for nothing, there's nothing particularly eye-catching, and there's no big surprise. Those who don't like to read personal stories may not read it. Many places are different from the original novel, so don't join the party. There are also some private settings that serve the plot, but my personal feeling does not affect the viewing experience. The overall pace of this article is relatively fast. It does not focus on the original main line. Many places are briefly skipped. I feel that the main text has little to do with the title of the novel. At first, I thought it was a cool article about being able to mix among the Death Eaters, but it is not. There is less writing in this aspect, more about daily life, and it feels like it is not able to arouse people's emotions. The heroine is a descendant of the Squib who was named by the Gaunt family. She is mixed-race, has the gift of prophecy, and is very good. It is not a time travel. Although the introduction states that there is a love line for the male character, it can be seen, but there is not much description. It is a single arrow, and there is no ambiguous plot. It is considered a non-CP novel. The main text has been finished. I don't know if there will be more emotional if endings later. I want to read it.

It's pretty average. You can use it to kill time when you're bored. There's nothing wrong with it. It's quite delicious. [Note]

Super pretty! ! ! Del is a gentle and strong person. This strength is not only in strength, but also in spirit. She is tenacious, smart and studious. All the beautiful words in the world can be used to describe her. She is like the bright moon hanging high in the sky or the jasmine flower blooming at night. She is elegant and unassuming, but still attracts the attention of all things and leads the lost lambs out of the night. She is like Mother Earth, tolerant yet sharp, with a hint of humanity in her divinity. I hope Del will be happy in her future life and her worries will go away! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The author describes the protagonist and the story line very well, and it is very comfortable and smooth to read. However, Dale does not feel like a Slytherin, too gentle and tolerant, and feels a bit like a tool that the author regretfully set up to save the HP world, and has lost his own personality. And it can be seen that the author is very partial to Draco. Xiao Long gets along too much, which makes him feel a bit noisy, disrespectful, and not respectful enough to Del. It also highlights Del's tolerance and lack of temper.

It's pretty good. The character design is basically not too broken. The author writes it very well. The plot is interesting, at least for me now

There is no OOC in the characters, they are delicate and flesh-and-blood.

Beautiful! I like this kind of plot where the heroine is very motivated and smart... The romance is interspersed with it and it doesn't feel boring.

It's very interesting and the plot rhythm is okay.

Very nice, the characters are not OOC, and the heroine's design is very interesting [Blow kiss]

It's not bad and pretty. You can come and watch it together🍏😍

The heroine's character is very interesting, and the author's writing is very good. Very beautiful

The plot has twists and turns and can touch my heart.

[Crying][Crying] It's so beautiful. I really like the career line. I really like Dale! I was so nervous as the end came to an end, but at the end it was he. Read this article carefully [crying][crying]