Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles: Becoming a Disciple of Nezha

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good! One more thing is to update as soon as possible! ! !

CP Qingquan, written in Chapter 26, is a lightning protection for people who don't like CP in the article. The article is very interesting.

It's very interesting to watch, and it's well written based on the original plot. It doesn't force the protagonist to prefer humans, regardless of his identity or position. But I suggest you mark the cp [face covering], I thought there was no cp, the emotional line is so abrupt, and the protagonist in the setting is still a child, in terms of age and Xiaohei are both young fairies, even if the transformation is big, it is very strange, it feels like a forced emotional scene, let's see how it is written later, if it looks good, then add stars

It's really super pretty! The writing is smooth, the logic is clear, and the idea is very profound. The writing style of other Luo Xiaohei fanfics I read is relatively childish. I don't mean childish, but I am a bit tired because I always deliberately focus on warmth. Sometimes I can say one thing several times, and there are many repetitive and meaningless psychological or environmental descriptions, or large paragraphs are copied from the original text. This one is different. The words and sentences are very clean and neat. There is a clear plot and main line, no nonsense. In just 70 chapters, it has completed the plot of the first movie and very smoothly integrated at least half of the original plot. It is already paving the way for the plot of the second movie. I felt so happy watching it. Everything the protagonist does is well-founded. For example, he was originally a human but dressed up as a goblin. Many of the stories are probably hesitant between humans and goblins, because I've seen a lot of similar ones. The way this book is handled is refreshing to me. It's handled very well and naturally! The emotional lines are neither greasy nor obtrusive. Mainly, there are not many characterizations. You can skip it if you don't like it. The content is also very in-depth and does not rely solely on warmth. From time to time, it will give an opinion on something, and even keep up with current events, haha, and secretly reflect on certain things, and the idea suddenly becomes profound. Anyway, I like this very much, because the movie originally did the same thing, and this book continues to expand, which is very comfortable to read. The above are the points that I remember deeply after reading it. I recommend everyone to give it a try!

It finally doesn't look like it was written by a novice author. The sentences are finally smooth and the logic is finally clear. I will no longer be confused when listening to the book. The plot is also reasonable and very beautiful. I recommend it with 5 stars.

Nice! At present, I feel that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very appropriate. It is not like the male protagonist Long Aotian in the male fanciful article who accessorizes the female protagonist. Also, be sure not to stop updating. Several Luo Xiaohei fans I read have stopped updating.

It's super beautiful, the writing style is very good, it's level and fits Luo Xiaohei's daily style. The protagonist is a fairy, which is more three-dimensional. The other characters are not flat and have the feeling of a group portrait. [Like][Like][Like]

Not bad, but it's too early to fall in love. I'm the same age as Xiao Hei. Doesn't it mean that the soul is an adult and the body is not taken into consideration? The protagonist himself said that Tianhu is not too old even when he is about 100 years old. Why did the protagonist start wanting to fall in love at the age of six [Shocked]

Wisdom and beauty coexist, gentleness yet fortitude, high-end atmosphere and class, low-key luxury and connotation, unrestrained and foreign style with depth, and cool and awesome. There are warm daily emotional lines, reflections on the coexistence of humans and monsters and attitudes towards life, and a deep understanding of the setting. It feels like compiling the setting collection of Luo Xiaohei, and it feels like reading the 10,000-word analysis. The character creation is very three-dimensional, and the protagonist is free (not) fond of fishing. The character design is very friendly, the intensity is moderate and the promising young man has unlimited interesting skills, and the ambition is to save Fengxi Xiaohei. It is my favorite book

The protagonist was so moved that he cried when he interrupted Feng Xi San Ling with one punch! Super pretty! !

The setting of Luo Xiaohei has been carefully reviewed, so many fanfics written by Luo Xiaohei may have some conflicts with the original work. However, this book is the best one I have read after reading six Luo Xiaohei fanfics. Even though the rating is not very high, the full text does not use too much of the plot and lines of the original work as it is. Unlike some works that completely ignore the influence of the protagonist on the plot. At the same time, reading the comments, you can see that the author may have typos, but they are very obedient. The characters outside the original work that appear are also very consistent with the logic of Luo Xiaohei's world. Worth recommending. The most important thing is that it is different from other fanfics that add systems or too bad character designs. This is like a story that will really happen in Luo Xiaohei's world.

This book is biased toward male readers. It's very descriptive and not awkward. Most of it is OOC-free, and the story is smooth. There is no physical description of the main character, but the CP emotional scenes are well written, but I only watched half of it. Hmm... ❗️Things you may have: There were also harmless and ambiguous interactions with original characters. For example, "Jingyi raised her hand to stop her, but was a step too late. She watched Nuomiao pour all the leftover tea from Xinglan into her mouth." (Apologies for copying the original text) There have been "vulgar homophonic memes". Although they are not obviously mentioned in one sentence, they do have such meanings. Although the above may be the author unconsciously using "classic Internet novel plots" to increase plot tension, I personally don't like it very much.

4.6 Horns It is 4.3 In itself, but taking Luo Xiaohei's fandom into consideration, I still give it a 4.6. It's a very good fanfic. The thinking is in-depth, or too in-depth, and the other parts are less interesting. Then after finishing it, I come back to the last episode of tv (the mission of the gate of all living beings failed), which is relatively sloppy, but overall it is pretty good. I saved the people in Dasong No. 1 And I have a partner, but I prefer Senior Sister Luye [laughter] [laughter] Overall, it's not bad to be a little foodie.

This book is really well written. The topics are very in-depth. There are many very interesting views and sentences here that are really profound. It even goes deep into the social system and governance level in the world view. The viewpoints on the conflicts between fairies and humans of different races are really well written (I'm out of words) [I'm about to cry]

This book is quite good, but Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles itself is a spiritual story, which is not suitable for the protagonist's somewhat boring temperament (a typical time traveler who has a heavy heart due to a lot of things). However, the author has a good grasp of this aspect, and some cps are not very objectionable, so it is not a big problem. Our Luo Xiaohei also has a good cook.

Read it on April 17th This is the first book by Luo Xiaohei that I have read completely. Other books feel a bit weird to me, either because they are too powerful and feel very illogical, or because they are the favorites of all the members, it feels weird, but the author handles the writing very well, and the characters of each character do not have an OC feel. It feels like this is what happens when the protagonist joins in. Let me say it again, I think it is very good. The second point is that his ending is quite abrupt in the whole book or novel to be honest. But that's what makes it more interesting. The original work has no follow-up content up to this point. If it continues, it will be a bit cumbersome. Although it introduces the poem of a certain character in the incident, if it ends here, it will give people the feeling that they will continue their daily life, and finally break the dimension to interact with us. I think it is a good point.

I have read fifty or sixty chapters, and it looks pretty good. The writing is okay. The plot does not follow the original work. It has its own original parts. It is relatively smooth and there is no feeling of discontinuity in the middle. The protagonist joined the Wind Breath team after traveling through time and became a goblin. In the end, the Wind Breath team was rescued, and everyone had a good ending. Moreover, although the protagonist is quite young, he is quite mature and has his own opinions and views on how he behaves and does things. In terms of love line, the cp is Qingquan, which is really rare. I have basically never seen the heroine Qingquan. Maybe it's because her life ended too quickly in the movie [crying]. However, Qingquan's lack of description in the original work means that most of the flesh and blood has to be filled in by the author. Currently, I have watched Qingquan's character design is pretty good, it fits her appearance quite well, she is self-reliant, has high combat power, she is a bit cold on the outside but hot on the inside, although she is not very cold on the outside [laughing] And the emotional line progresses relatively slowly, it is a slow-heating type. The characters of the two protagonists are quite well matched. I hope they will get together naturally.

Good! ! ! Look! ! ! The original plot is very beautiful, and the important plots are well connected. The emotional lines are smooth and not abrupt. The whole story revolves around the peace between humans and fairies. It is also very deep. It completely conveys the same concept as the original work. It feels like Luo Xiaohei develops like this in his daily life. I enjoyed reading it. It's finally not a mindless and enjoyable article. The author is so strong. This book really suits my taste.

The author is very strong, and the later development of the guild hall is very natural and logical. He writes very clearly about many complex concepts, political situations, systems, emotional relationships, interpersonal interactions, and characterizations. In particular, the reasons for the shortcomings of the hall were written down to the point, and a very feasible implementation plan was provided.

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Come on, it feels good to see this. How will you write the second part of the movie? I feel like there may not be any knives. Everyone in Liushi should be well. [Blowing kiss]

The writing is very good and the male protagonist is very good. Luo Xiaohei has started to follow the plot since his first big movie. Except for the plot of Lanxi Town, the first and second movies and the TV version are all gone. The content of the game world also has its own story. Why is his partner so late? There are also many characters added, which makes it a bit confusing, but it does add a lot of fun and interest.

It's okay, it's good to watch, there's nothing wrong with the plot, the settings are interesting, the logic is self-consistent, and the protagonist's remarks are very well written. I quite like it. Just to avoid thunder for everyone, the one with the female protagonist is Qingquan. I'm not saying it's bad, but I still prefer to read this kind of novel without CP (don't scold me o(≧口≦)o I hope the author adds a lightning protection in the introduction)

It perfectly fits Xiaohei's style, and the details are well handled. Like it! It's completely in line with Xiao Hei's tone, and the details are handled very well. I like it! 👍

It's nice, nice, nice. What you wrote has the feel of the original novel. It's reasonable and more enjoyable than other novels of the same type.

It fits Luo Xiaohei's world view very well. The content is deep and the author's writing is good. However, the ending ends with the failure of the mission in the Gate of All Living Beings. Xiaohei wants to go to school. It's too sudden. However, it is easy to get stabbed in the back when writing rashly. This is not good when a fanfic encounters an unfinished original work.

It's great to watch, the plot is very smooth, the characters are not cheating, and the regrets are made up for. After rescuing Feng Xi, it didn't interfere with the subsequent plot and it was not OOC. In fact, I wanted to write a longer review, but I couldn't hold it in, so I finished it three times. This book is very nice

It looks good, but it's a pity that I can't give it 4.5 Stars. Now I know the reason for the low score. It's a classic, but other brainless novels are foreign and Chinese. This is humans and fairies, okay, okay, fairies are good, and humans have shortcomings that far outweigh their advantages. Okay, then my shortcomings will shine, and I'll give you two stars🖐️

Personally, I think it's quite interesting. I haven't seen Luo Xiaohei, but I can totally understand it. I seem to have been kicked into a trap by this book. I will go back and make up for it [sending my heart] I changed it from five stars to four because the ending was too sloppy.

When I was at school today, the class played Luo Xiaohei Zhanji 1. If I didn't fall into the trap, I immediately fell into it. I couldn't calm down the wind. I think this book is very good. I want to read Luo Xiaohei Zhanji 2 too. The author would like to update a lot