Star Rail: Second Home

There is no cliche harem entanglement, and the whole process focuses on the counterattack and innovation of the protagonist. From the building materials logistics department to the market development department, from company workers to star core hunters, every step of growth is based on excitement. The visual sense of the red paper umbrella reflecting the golden and red divine light, and the eerie atmosphere of the afterimage of Pinoconi's dream, perfectly combine the grand narrative of the universe and the delicate rhythm of workplace advancement, making it exciting and immersive to read.

Thanks to the author for bringing such a good work. The perspective of the story is very unique, and it is written in a very logical way without stretching the crotch. Coupled with the author's sophisticated writing skills, it is truly a rare masterpiece on Tomato and is worth reading.

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As for the original protagonist, given that the Star Iron worldview actually has a lot of room for development, some original settings will be added for the development of one's own imagination and script. And please family members please leave more comments! [Cry][cry][cry] The original plot occupies a large part and the pace is slow. We respect the original setting but use it more as a tool for the plot. Please understand. If you don't like the content, please be merciful🙏🏻And please be sure to give more suggestions and comments [crying], no one has given me suggestions, I don't know what my poisonous point is!

This article cleverly weaves together the interstellar workplace and the cosmic conspiracy to form a very tense science fiction picture. The writing style achieves a delicate balance between the cold cosmic narrative and the delicate psychological description, and the plot setting can be called "subversive part-time work literature". The author uses the workplace identity of "P47 Supervisor" as the anchor, and implements the grand settings of "Star Core Power" and "Extermination King" into sophisticated maneuvering games and departmental struggles, which is worthy of recommendation.

This is a very good novel that is worth reading. The author has built a grand and spectacular world. The characters in the book are three-dimensional and full. The plot development is both reasonable and unexpected. It combines science fiction and workplace. The writing is smooth, the setting is novel, and the author is very thoughtful.

It is a very innovative article that perfectly integrates the world view of Star Iron, the interstellar workplace, and the cosmic conspiracy. It is really beautiful!

This work has a novel setting and a full sense of contrast. The plot focuses on the protagonist's growth and revolution. There are no redundant emotional lines that slow down the pace. Every step from company employee to star core hunter is written with tension, the writing style has a sense of picture, and the characters are established. It is the ceiling of hardcore cool writing among Star Iron fans!

In terms of imagination and slow pace of the plot, it is highly recommended. It should be noted in advance that the author tends to be more original, and has linkages with character settings in the tokusatsu universe and other types of universes. Five stars are encouraged. If you are tired of reading mindless cool stories, tired of the same old harems, pornographic characters, tired of clowns and dragons, gods and demons, numerical monsters and other outrageous types of fan fiction and protagonists, this book is worth reading (of course, if you still feel like you can't finish reading it after reading several chapters, you don't have to force it, everyone has their own preferences, I can accept it subjectively + I really like this book) The following is a long review, both good and bad. It is subjective. I apologize in advance. I have seen episode 29 so far. As a non-gamer who is not even a cloud, reading fan works is quite a headache. To some extent, it may be considered as a review outside the circle (not). Many setting terms and characters are not known to be existing in the game or original by the author. I read it in a blur, but I can see that it was carefully thought out. There is some ingenuity in the plot and character setting. I can confirm at a glance that the protagonist has a hidden identity and what the author probably wants to express. I can also feel that there is more than enough intention but not enough writing power. According to the character setting of the protagonist, he has a lot of experience and his ability to deal with things is indeed good, but when it is written specifically, I don't feel that it is implemented. The troublesome thing about dealing with this kind of protagonist is that the values ​​in all aspects have been capped. It's hard to think of how to set off/make him perform better, otherwise it won't be so consistent with the setting after writing it. The current problem is that the protagonist's reaction to events or the appearance of a certain character is a bit homogeneous/thin. The resulting problem is that the characteristics/charm of the protagonist cannot be highlighted. The personal ability of the protagonist can be seen. After all, the setting is left out from the beginning. I quite like the protagonist's personality type, so the writing skills are acceptable. But the writing power is not a big problem. I hope the author can make great progress in the future. Although the plot is not a refreshing flow, it is naturally not fast enough. It is quite qualified as a slow flow. It has that flavor. The current rhythm is well controlled. No one can achieve it overnight. There will be progress step by step. The flaws are not hidden. It is really good. These are basically the questions. If you want to be good, restrain yourself first. Personally, I tend to forget about it after reading it. It's hard to say whether it's good or bad, but I can't decide whether I like it or not. But I really like this book. The minimum standard for online reading is to be able to read it. It's just right. It covers both points. There is no particularly outstanding plot in this book. It may be suitable for gamers or non-gamers. It is slow and slow. Reading the first few chapters may be confusing. Occasionally, you may be confused. And because I clicked on the points that I could get, I couldn't help laughing, and I laughed knowingly, and I walked into the plot without knowing it. When I walked into the plot, it was naturally easy to follow the emotions. The protagonist is the kind of strong and self-aware that I like. He is confident in his strength but not arrogant. He hides his identity and strength and does things humbly. He pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger to make a fortune silently. He does practical things and saves people. While going around to save the world, the plot and doubts are unfolding, and the protagonist's identity gradually becomes clear. The abilities and the origin of the protagonist have yet to be explored. Although I don't understand the game, I can still see that there is a connection between the author's own original forces and the world (because there are special photos of the characters appearing, it is absolutely impossible to be in the game. Besides, it is also mentioned in the introduction.), Most of the original creations are actually quite friendly to non-gamers. There is no need to make up for game settings. If you don't understand, you will not understand. If you can understand, remember a few sentences. When walking through the plot, you suddenly think of it and you will suddenly understand. I understand, the writing style and lines are a bit like traditional two-dimensional games/novels/Japanese comics. It is comfortable for gamers to read, but it may be a bit awkward for non-gamers. If you can accept it, you can read it. If you like to watch anime and play games, this article is worth reading. Some plots may be a bit routine and "secondary", but the core is always "I understand" that can make people laugh. Non-gamers who like original fantasy comics (?) Can also give it a try. A thousand-word review may not be very nutritious. I will make a map after reading it and then add some comments on the plot. My memory is poor. I wish you smooth writing, rapid progress, whatever you want to write and achieve, and I hope it will get better and better. ^I will update after catching up with the progress.

Pinoconi's dream-building border hides the most touching "second hometown". The encounter between Liuying and the pioneers unfolds amidst the meteor shower and the sounds of nature's songs, turning the sadness of the destruction of hometown and the plight of terminal illness into the cherishment of existence. Dream scenes are intertwined with delicate emotions. Under the metaphor of "antropysis", it is a redefinition of "home" - even if it is just a dream, a sincere connection can become a light against loneliness. It has both narrative depth and humanistic warmth, and is full of stamina.

Science fiction and workplace are two of the hottest genres currently combined. The story is novel and logically rigorous, especially the universe in which the story is set is huge.

The Star Iron fanfic has a novel setting, in which the King of Extinction changes his job to a company worker. The power of the star core is undercurrent, the mortal body rewrites the rules of the universe, there is no harem to focus on the career, it looks good

This is a science fiction novel with a novel theme, describing the story of the protagonist Xiao Fei solving a cosmic conspiracy in an interstellar workplace. Rich imagination and vivid plot. A very successful novel.

The author has built a grand and spectacular world. The characters in the book are three-dimensional and full-bodied. The plot development is both reasonable and unexpected. It is worth following.

The writing flow is silky smooth, the storyline is novel and beautiful, highly recommended [like]

The writing style is smooth and delicate, the story is wonderful, the plot is full of ups and downs, the wife, the wife, the wife is so beautiful, I highly recommend it.

A very good novel with a western theme, good luck to the author!

A very nice novel, combining science fiction and workplace, the writing is smooth, the setting is novel, the author is very thoughtful, I like it ~ I have decided to read it ~ [Top post][Top post]

The story is wonderful, the writing is high-quality and the plot is exciting. It is a novel worth recommending.

The perspective is novel, the concept is clever, the logic is strong, the imagination is big, and it is consistent with the original work. It is good

The author is awesome👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍It's imaginative and reasonable, worth looking forward to...

Looks good, looks good, looks good. It got bumpy. Five stars for delivery