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Reader comments
It's the best sequel I've ever seen.
I think the writing style is very similar to the original work. Some things developed that I never expected. The author has put a lot of effort into it.
To be honest, I have been reading it from the beginning. This book is already a well-written continuation. I don't understand why some people complain that this book does not have the flavor of a real person. They said it is a continuation. How can it be exactly the same as the real person? If it is really the same, is it possible to publish it? The author is also very humble. I made suggestions and the author changed it the next day. Support the author, okay?
In the early stage (within one hundred chapters), except for some differences in the division of forces from the original work (not big, specifically the delay in the establishment of the Great Love Alliance of Heaven and Earth, and secondly, Wu Yong defected to Fang Yuan in the original work, but in this article the Southern Xinjiang Alliance was established. However, this change highlights Wu Yong's ambition, but there are shortcomings - it feels a bit too hasty).
Generally speaking, the group portrait scenes are well written. Some settings are also good, such as the Chaos Mark. Most of the fairy tales basically pursue the highest level of cultivation, but some settings are not made up for, such as the birth of the world (a bit utopian or philosophical...)
The Dao Mark of Chaos is the beginning and the end of the world, which corresponds to the characteristics of the internal cycle of the Gu Realm's Heavenly Dao - all things are renewed, and reincarnation is endless.
Secondly, the second recommendation is because the names of the killing moves in this work are well chosen and have the style of real people.
Compared with the original work, this book still has some loopholes, such as; the people in the East China Sea did not know about the Great Love Alliance in the early days, the people in the Southern Xinjiang did not know about the Southern Alliance, and Fang Yuan was too bold and not as cautious as the original work. But overall this book is good, and "New Yuanshi" alone is very informative.
It is very high-level and a breath of fresh air. It is far more wonderful than those system articles and harem articles. Not only the efforts and growth of the protagonist can be seen, but also the efforts and growth of the supporting characters can be seen by readers. Treat the protagonist and the supporting role equally, don't favor one side, that's great
Personally I think it's a good follow-up to Tomato
True or false, who knows? The inheritance of blood sea will never be extinct
This book is actually very good. Objectively speaking, as a continuation, it is similar to the writing style of a real person. The sentence breaks are just right, which makes people feel very comfortable. But it is understandable that there are still some details that have not been handled well. Among all the sequels I have seen, he is also the most high-quality and completed one, which satisfies everyone's regret of discontinuing the series.
The writing is indeed good. Except for some errors in details in the original work, the other plots are pretty good, and the image of the house has not collapsed.
Great Love Immortal Lord is resurrected
Author's account? So well written!
It has surpassed many continuations.
It's been changed very well, it looks great.
Absolutely real trumpet
Very beautiful, not bad, not bad
This is the only one that looks good among fics
Very well written. But the Great Love Immortal was written into a situation similar to a horror novel
Great, the author is so good!
Very real person style
It's pretty good, and has the flavor of a real person.
This is the best sequel I have seen so far. The characters are not broken and the plot is good.
Finally saw one that can be completed
It's a very good sequel to the series and worth watching.
It's the best sequel I've ever seen. I think the writing style is very similar to the original work. Some things developed that I never expected. The author has put a lot of effort into it.
To be honest, I have been reading it from the beginning. This book is already a well-written continuation. I don't understand why some people complain that this book does not have the flavor of a real person. They said it is a continuation. How can it be exactly the same as the real person? If it is really the same, is it possible to publish it? The author is also very humble. I made suggestions and the author changed it the next day. Support the author, okay?
In the early stage (within one hundred chapters), except for some differences in the division of forces from the original work (not big, specifically the delay in the establishment of the Great Love Alliance of Heaven and Earth, and secondly, Wu Yong defected to Fang Yuan in the original work, but in this article the Southern Xinjiang Alliance was established. However, this change highlights Wu Yong's ambition, but there are shortcomings - it feels a bit too hasty). Generally speaking, the group portrait scenes are well written. Some settings are also good, such as the Chaos Mark. Most of the fairy tales basically pursue the highest level of cultivation, but some settings are not made up for, such as the birth of the world (a bit utopian or philosophical...) The Dao Mark of Chaos is the beginning and the end of the world, which corresponds to the characteristics of the internal cycle of the Gu Realm's Heavenly Dao - all things are renewed, and reincarnation is endless. Secondly, the second recommendation is because the names of the killing moves in this work are well chosen and have the style of real people.
Compared with the original work, this book still has some loopholes, such as; the people in the East China Sea did not know about the Great Love Alliance in the early days, the people in the Southern Xinjiang did not know about the Southern Alliance, and Fang Yuan was too bold and not as cautious as the original work. But overall this book is good, and "New Yuanshi" alone is very informative.
It is very high-level and a breath of fresh air. It is far more wonderful than those system articles and harem articles. Not only the efforts and growth of the protagonist can be seen, but also the efforts and growth of the supporting characters can be seen by readers. Treat the protagonist and the supporting role equally, don't favor one side, that's great
Personally I think it's a good follow-up to Tomato
True or false, who knows? The inheritance of blood sea will never be extinct
This book is actually very good. Objectively speaking, as a continuation, it is similar to the writing style of a real person. The sentence breaks are just right, which makes people feel very comfortable. But it is understandable that there are still some details that have not been handled well. Among all the sequels I have seen, he is also the most high-quality and completed one, which satisfies everyone's regret of discontinuing the series.
The writing is indeed good. Except for some errors in details in the original work, the other plots are pretty good, and the image of the house has not collapsed.
Great Love Immortal Lord is resurrected
Author's account? So well written!
It has surpassed many continuations.
It's been changed very well, it looks great.
Absolutely real trumpet
Very beautiful, not bad, not bad
This is the only one that looks good among fics
Very well written. But the Great Love Immortal was written into a situation similar to a horror novel
Great, the author is so good!
Very real person style
It's pretty good, and has the flavor of a real person.
This is the best sequel I have seen so far. The characters are not broken and the plot is good.
Finally saw one that can be completed
It's a very good sequel to the series and worth watching.