When I Came to the Love Apartment, I Lay Down Directly

The writing is mediocre, and reading the novel alone is not a big problem, but there are many problems with the fanfic. First of all, the author has set up a lot of content. If it is to serve the plot of the novel, I can understand, but many of the second set ups in this book have no use except to make the original work different. For example, Erniu and Yifei are friends in college. Xiaoxian clearly said that Tiezhu and Erniu were neighbors when they were dating online. This also resulted in a famous scene, but the author described that Erniu met Yifei after meeting Tie Zhu and moved here. Secondly, Yifei was Xiaoxian's classmate. However, in the original plot, they did not know each other before they rented together. The protagonist should be a native, so the farce of the wedding was not changed. It is true that the plot should not be changed, and the things that should not be changed are changed again and again, which is a bit inexplicable [what]

Generally speaking, there are too many private settings. It's true that Yu Mo and Hu Yifei are classmates. Then came the private setting. The protagonist and Yu Mo knew each other again when they were little chubby girls. The protagonist didn't know Hu Yifei, but Hu Yifei and Zeng Xiaoxian knew each other when they were in school?

Look good, come on

No one commented? The writing is okay