Fate Became the Master and Defeated the Holy Grail War

To be honest, it is not as bad as the comments say, and there is no doubt that the subject of Ritsuka's Tomorrow Talk has great potential. The shortcomings are obvious. In my opinion, the author does not want to write a cool novel, but there are many problems with the control of combat power. However, it is understandable that even professional creators dare not say that they will not make mistakes in this aspect. This is why the writing threshold of Shuangwen is low. It is also a common stubbornness of Yue Chou, who is unwilling to be brainless and wants to write something of his own. Overall, so far, it is worth reading. After all, there is still too little future talk about FGO. Most of the fate fanfics on the market are from the Fate series rather than focusing on FGO. Moreover, there are too many FGO fanfics that have not been tested at all, which makes people uncomfortable. The author's understanding of the moon is qualified for fan creation. After all, the ultimate seniority is in the minority, which is enough for most people who read this book.

The writing is okay. Will Director Olga Marie appear in the plot later? It's hard to comment. Not to mention the plot development, Guda is already OOC.

Is it really killing him? I've only seen dozens of chapters where it's quite difficult to defeat a Master [thoughts]

It tastes pretty good. It's average in terms of a meal. If it's a complementary food, it's still very good. There are currently quite few chapters. I can't say how good it tastes. When the amount is increased, it should be between 7.6 And 8.3. I would like to give it a five-star encouragement.

After the modification, the plot and character settings will be more reasonable, and you can still look forward to it.

I came here because of the reputation. The author's writing is worth four stars, and I will give one to Gumo. It's nice to be able to smell some fungi. The characters' actions are in line with the original work and don't feel too abrupt. The rest of the self-set combat power is a bit strange, but it can serve the plot and is acceptable. Then, the religious description is a bit too much and makes me tired after reading for a long time. In short, as a monthly fandom, the advantages of humanities are obvious enough that people can skip it and read on. Before watching it, I thought it could be a little more astringent, but it turned out to be so conservative. Sister Wang's role is still too small and it's not enough, boss (disappointed)

Nowadays, there are not many people and the ratings are low. Believe me, this is really beautiful. The author's words are absolutely amazing.

Come on, the author is great

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but I feel like I can get stabbed in the back easily, but that's not a big problem for now.

Fully support the author to become FGO3.0 Orthodox

Good health, love health, give me more

Actually I quite like it

The beginning was average, but after Summoning Morgan, it got better and better.

Let's just ask, can we summon the old director in the future? (It's Olga Marie [eating melon] [eating melon])

It's okay, not as bad as the comment section says, it's just much better than the ending of a certain fungus

It fits the personality of the characters in the game very well. Come on

It's really good, the author must write it down.

It's very good, please come on, author.

I feel like it looks okay, maybe it's because I'm watching the revised plot. It's a work with a score of 7.5 To 8.

A rare high-quality FGO, it must be five stars.

Author Author I like you [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Keep it low, protect it~(￣▽￣~)~ rare moon article

Why is this rating so low?

The front looks so beautiful

Yes, I am Ai Leichu and I will give you five stars [sending my heart]

Author, keep writing, what if you can leave your name in history and be engraved in history [laughing evilly]

It took me a day to read it, and I felt it was quite good. At least in this version, I didn't find it as poisonous as the previous comments.

Very good work, very good HE, sweet and sweet

The writing is good, I love you [sending my heart]

Wine Bottle Chapter 7, full score