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Absolutely beautiful. The Peter created by the author is cute and timid but values ​​​​love and justice. He is a good baby who deserves to be loved and cared for. The story of Lao Fu's absence from school in the early stage was very heart-warming. The plot of the fight in school was a little confusing but innocuous. In the early stage, Sirius and the protagonist were already addicted to each other, and they felt that Lao Fu's emotional line may not be as good as friendship, but! But when Voldemort came out after more than 60 chapters, wow, the emotional drama was very enjoyable, very good! ! ! It really made me laugh like an aunt. Peter is a timid and honest kid who doesn't know what he's doing. It's so delicious to watch Lao Fu fight and struggle by himself. I look forward to the follow-up!

Recommended, a very delicate hp novel. Although it is my first time to come across CP, but the writing style makes me like it very much, so I will accept the CP in the article. Comparing novels with thousands of novels, parallel worlds will be wholesaled. Everyone's understanding of CP is different. I am only a reader of novels. I hope to see CP articles. I can't read be and eunuch, so at present I will follow the article. My character can only read. I want to see if the CP in the article can reach the end of the world (completed)? I'm looking forward to it

The writing style is very delicate, and I can see that there are no subtle points. It does not make Petru too cowardly like other articles. It portrays Petru's character very clearly but not disgusting. It is a very comfortable article.

It's good to watch. The relationship between Lily and Sev is unexpectedly not too serious under Peter's adjustment. Then there is the emotional scene between Peter and Tom. We generally don't care if our wives are called pets here. In fact, Sirius and Peter are also surprisingly able to fight each other (?) Finally, SS is still a very reliable presence in this novel, especially after the death of his mother and the fight with Bella. The last thing is, every time I see the exciting part, I can't help but think that this is a noseless thing, not a diary soup, help me🆘Once the braised eggs are brought in, I can't continue thinking [crying][crying][crying] Either way, after the second brush, I found out that Tom's nose in Chapter 94 is back, and all the minced meat in the back will be eaten again😋 Jazzy deliciousness

A great article, detailed and full of warmth. And there's the Dark Lord, why did he mention it?

Speaking from now on, I haven't skipped any of them and have been watching them. This is what I feel now about what he said. I'm a little depressed now. It was fine in the early days. At least I still feel a little lively and happy. It's just a little suffocating. It's still funny and warm. But after meeting Lao Fu, it became a bit depressing. In the past, it was sometimes a bit depressing, but at least I still had friends and my mother. I don't feel like now, but I still have a sense of redemption and hope for life. In the middle and later stages, it was so depressing. Now I just hope that the birth of the child will bring hope to our little mouse. The writing style is really good and I like it very much. But the later words are really a bit depressing. I hope the later words will be sweeter. In fact, up to now, I feel that there is no unconditional word in the whole text. The person who chooses him, his friends have other people who can be the first to choose. There is no complete right or wrong in his mother choosing his father in the end, and Lao Fu Nei just treats him as a plaything. I hope that the person I met so far is a good person and can make our dear protagonist happy. Let's say it together [laughs] I wish baby Peter safety and happiness🎉

The author gave us a new Peter and gave us a different perspective on this character. In particular, he reshaped the relationship with the Marauding Four and Severus Snape, making the passion of the original work warmer. This is the charm of the fandom. But CP didn't break out, especially when Peter ran away and reconnected with Tom, which tended to be "bland". The rest of the story was good. Peter's story was the most acceptable I've read. It didn't deny a person from the very beginning, but rather laid the foundation for his background, just like Scarlett in "Gone with the Wind". If she didn't have flesh and blood, she would be criticized for being completely disfigured.

This book is really super good-looking and the whole story is fast-paced. I originally thought that the main character studying at Hogwarts would be described in a long paragraph, but the author didn't! The writing style is concise and not procrastinating. The Hogwarts learning career is described in just a few strokes. Although the character of the protagonist is cowardly, he is not stupid. On the contrary, he is very smart, but lacks courage. The author describes this very well and does not write the stereotype of the protagonist as stupid and stupid. Voldemort is not too OOC. It is quite in line with Old Voldemort's joking psychological process. The writing is very good! Watching the whole process, I am full of expectations. I feel so sorry for Mouse after watching it. Although the death of his mother has brought him growth, it is not a kind of forced growth. It is really easy to cry [crying]

It was the first time I came into contact with this pair of CPs who might not be able to compete with each other. I originally came to see it without any hope, but the plot turned out to be unexpectedly good! So sweet, so sweet😭. When I saw the part about Peter's mother's death, I felt so sad that I even posted a complaint on WeChat about it. The plot will not make people fall in love with the protagonist all of a sudden. The interaction between them is really delicate (for me). Although the protagonist Peter is timid, he does not feel uncomfortable and disgusting. He wants people to care and protect him willingly. 😭😭😭He is also using his own methods to protect the people he wants to protect. The protagonist's character is so attractive and he grows up step by step🥺🥺🥺

It's very interesting to watch. It's really special that the protagonist didn't travel through time. I like to see the changes of the aboriginal people (*´I`*)

It was so good that I didn't click on it at first because the CP of this article was too weird. There's nothing wrong with the pairing of Voldemort and Peter, right? ! Before I clicked in to read it, I was thinking that I wanted to see how weird it was. I didn't expect to see the ending as soon as I started reading it. As soon as I started reading it, I was waiting for an update. This article is really good, isn't it? The interaction between Tom and Peter is so cute. Isn't this a snake-rat family? I wasn't interested in what they were doing, but when they started to kiss each other, I felt a surge of excitement in my heart, ahhhhh, it was so good.

Teacher, the words you wrote are so heart-warming and really beautiful [shy][shy]. At first I found it among a bunch of tweets. I was wondering if I could find something different. I flipped through it until I found the teacher's book. Here I saw a different Peter from other books. He was not a despicable whistleblower, but the kind who, although timid, would work hard to fight for his friends. The teacher wrote about the weakness but bravery in Peter's character. Of course, this article is also inseparable from the way Tom treats Peter's love like a flower [cool] [cool]. Finally, I wish the teacher a happy day. Although I am not a person who often posts comments, teacher, I will always follow up [shy][shy][shy]

This is my first time reading this cp. When I first saw it, I really had the face of a subway old man with a question mark. I opened this cp, which is a bit niche for me, with the mentality of trying it out. Unexpectedly, I was slapped in the face. The author's writing is so good (if I guess it was deleted by my own imagination), I really finished reading it in one go. It was not enough to read. I highly recommend it, and please ask for more [admiration]. Please ask the teacher politely, how many chapters are there? Is there an approximate number of chapters? So far, it's very interesting. I hope the teacher doesn't have to worry about the number of words later. I only have this humble request.

Oh my gosh, I can't describe this book by the author. It's a perfect marriage. The wonderful writing directly solved my previous prejudices. I thought how could Voldemort and Peter be in love in the original Harry Potter books. Before I read it, I simply dismissed it. After reading it, I just rolled on the spot. It seems that in the future, I don't care about the CP when reading books, but I still have to go in and have a taste. I love it so much, I can't get enough of it! [Grass has been planted][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I thought it was very interesting. I watched it at first because the CP was relatively new, but after watching it, I found that the content was very novel, the characters were well portrayed, the little mouse's image was amazing, his inner changes were reasonable, and his interaction with Voldemort was also very good. Anyway, I was fascinated by it. But one bad thing is that the author updates it too slowly, and it is not enough to read. I finished reading the more than 40 chapters that I finally saved in two times. It is very updated. It is really good. This can be said to be a very, very good work. Come on! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

No abuse, Sweetie [laughs] The author has such warm words, it made me a little bit dead. Warmth is because Peter is kind and gentle, but the whole world is not kind. Peter needs his own imaginary company to survive alone. His heart is the softest, but the world will always like to stab him with the sharpest sword. Lao Fu is unwilling to leave the beautiful memories in the diary. Peter can only rely on the habits and pain he left behind to get a glimpse of memories that have long been erased. In the end, I have to trample on this feeling that I will never find again in this life. Tom I am penniless now, but it seems that you are really by my side again and I can live on.

I really like to read the whole book in two days. I think it is perfectly written. Whether Peter is timid or brave, he goes with the flow when he is with Tom. However, he also goes with the flow. In fact, the ending of he is very fragmented, but it is reasonable. I will not continue reading because I like he. Hehe, the reality of the second move wants me to escape⚆_⚆ But it's bad to instill *** or something, hey, Tom threatened the author and didn't give my wife the Avada Kedavra waiting for me😋

A very nice book and a very heartwarming story. It's just that there are too few. Make it longer. It's rare to see such interesting little stories🥹🥹🥹

When I saw this rating for the first time, I didn't come in to read it. Then I read it because I ran out of books. I didn't expect it to be so well written. The writing is not a novice and the emotional description is delicate. The character's personality is almost the same as the original work (some people may think Lao Fu is OOC, but this article is very interesting). There is no malicious and ugly talk about the Order of the Phoenix just because the protagonist is on Lao Fu's side. The writing is particularly good. I hope I can stick to the end. I'm so happy [crying].

Nice! I just want to see the development of Tom and Peter. It's hard to find articles about this couple. Please keep updating.

It's beautiful and I love watching it. I, a local dog, like to watch this kind of thing~\(≧▽≦)/~. Maybe the time line for some of the previous school days is a bit blurry, and the pace is accelerating. But the writing behind it is really good [adoration][adoration]

It's really good to read. The author is in poor health and can update a chapter in three days, but don't stop updating. I really like this book. After reading this book, I can't read other books. How can I put it, Peter's character is a bit similar to mine, but he is different from me. This book is deeply touching to me, author, come on! I really, really like this book No way, after reading this book, I looked for other books to read, but I couldn't read any of them.

I've finished reading it. This is the first book I've read from beginning to end since I downloaded Tomato. While watching, I felt happy, felt, puzzled, angry, sad, and had something to say. But in the end I didn't say anything. I just watched silently, watching Peter's life, and that was enough. Dear author, I am very grateful to you for writing this article, and I am honored to witness Peter's growth. I believe that this gentle, kind and brave boy is living happily in another world. Goodbye Peter and best wishes.

A very logical one. There is no sudden reconciliation between the bully and the bullied. There is no sudden love

The author's writing is very good. I have been following it for a long time. I really like the warm atmosphere at the beginning. I like the author's Peter very much. He is kind-hearted and has strong empathy. Although he is a little timid, he will stand up for the people he cares about. I really hope that he can get his own happiness. Finally, I also wish the author good health [Like]

So pretty! The protagonist is a very warm, kind-hearted person with a very strong core who has his own will and knows what he wants. He and Lao Fu's cp love relationship male protagonists are absolutely superior. Lao Fu's entire career line is behind his shadow, and Lao Fu's love is also cultivated by him little by little. Love is only a part of the male protagonist's life. He is very rational and sober, and has family and friends who love him. He can be a very sharp person, but he restrains his sharpness for the sake of family and friendship. Cowardice is just his illusion [face covering] The first branch of this book is BE, but the author is too gentle and loves the protagonist. It could have been more sadistic, but the actual version is perfect like a bubble; the second branch is from Lao Fu's career line to the top, and the male protagonist gently gives Lao Fu a perfect marriage, just like going to work [face covering] I think this is also a BE (although I think this kind of BE is the most perfect one. The male protagonist has an independent soul, takes care of everyone around him, gives everyone the illusion of being loved and happy, and sinks in sobriety), but the author still gave Lao Fu a chance at the end, allowing the male protagonist to truly fall in love with him [crying] So the author is a particularly kind person [crying] [crying] The protagonist of this book is really like an angel. He is wise and foolish. He is clearer than most people and knows what he wants. He is like an angel and like a beam of light that the sky brings to the world [crying]. When I read novels, I usually fall in love with the protagonist's CP through the perspective of the protagonist. But in this book, I fell in love with the protagonist through Lao Fu's eyes. He really deserves all the good things in the world.

The writing is very good and the story line is complete and reasonable. , The plot is fascinating, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, super, very good-looking. Please keep writing and give me more chapters. The author is greatly [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

I read a lot of Voldemort stories on Tomato. I didn't dare to read them at first because of the name and setting. I didn't expect the writing to be super good. The plot didn't have too many flaws. The writing was excellent and the emotional lines were also very delicious😋. I think the personalities of all the characters need to be restored. Don't hesitate. Enjoy the good writing!

Yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, yum, too delicious! ! ! This is the better article about Peter that I have ever read! ! ! ! 😋😋😋😋😋😋The author is great I love mud٩(◦`꒳´◦)۶

I've finished watching it, a heart-warming daily HE. The other male protagonist only appeared in chapter 60. The previous protagonist can compete with anyone! I thought he would be disliked by thousands of people, but turned out to be a fan of them all. Being good friends with Severus and "fighting for peace" with Lily reduced bullying. I thought it was forced sadomasochism, but it turned out to be a sour and painful story. The plot with Voldemort developed supernaturally, and I felt that my relationship was on the right track, but in fact I was racing without wearing a seat belt.