There Is Indeed Something Wrong with Ryo Amamiya's Tokyo Love Story

The author should consider deleting Renya or marginalizing him as soon as possible. I really don't want to see this person in the fandom [crying]

Not bad. The views and evaluations of An Yilunye do not follow the current mainstream. Although there is a certain degree of beautification, it is innocuous. Some actions of the protagonist, such as "touching the nose to express embarrassment" and "wry smiles" are best reduced. So far, it seems that the writing is smooth and the foreshadowing is OK. The protagonist has to repay his debt, which doesn't mean he can't do other things he wants to do. From this point of view, I thought it was quite understandable to agree to An Yilun's role as a non-staff member. The above is just my personal opinion

The writing is very good. The writing style and plot settings have surpassed 90% of the comprehensive comics on the cat platform next door. In today's era of various weird styles and styles, it is rare to see such a retro-style work with a warm and everyday feel. Can I take the harem route? Can I take the harem route?

In fact, I feel that it has the style of an old book from more than ten years ago (not in a derogatory sense). It is rare to see such a typical old fandom style haha. In fact, I still miss the era when Asasi male protagonists were popular. Although it is not popular now, it is still a childhood memory of Xiaolao [crying]

It's not bad. I just read that the total of the author's three books does not exceed 400,000 words. I can't say [face covering]

Collect lotus flowers? I would like to say thank you to the author. I like Lianhua very much.

It's pretty good, to my liking [like] but the author needs to work hard to update [shy]

It's ok to write about emotions, but it's not about time-traveling man and it's all about publicity. However, Kasumigaoka has not seen other female protagonists in the plot so far. Is it a single female protagonist?

It's still very good. I saw a similar outline in a certain cat next door, but I feel that this character is more attractive to me.

Protagonist's character issues

Come on author, I believe you can do it

It will be fine after modification

Unexpected, so well written

Why did it end suddenly?

It was still well written, but it was a pity that it ended suddenly, so let's leave it at that.

I haven't finished writing yet, so I don't know, but I'm basically qualified.

Not bad, I hope I won't be a eunuch [punch out]

An Yilun's writing there is average, but I feel like the author has noticed it, and the rest is pretty good.

Needless to say, five stars, despite its flaws

It's quite good-looking, about 8 points, giving it full stars.

The writing is still very good. Worth recommending.

It's not as bad as I said. I quite enjoyed reading it. I hope I can write about it.