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Haokang is a rare novel. I really didn't expect that the plot would develop in this direction at first. This kind of complex emotional entanglement and denial of self-perception is what I wanted to see. [Blows a kiss] Now death is really worth the price of admission. Can an author write novels for a lifetime? I really can do anything. Otherwise, you don't want to see me crying and fussing in your comment area [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][crying][crying]

The author's concept is very interesting, but there are some problems in the design of the protagonist. For example, the emotional changes when transforming from "entertainment puppet" to "human" are not reasonable enough. Overall worth reading

Full marks because I also write about spring things. Let's talk about the advantages first. Both the heroine and the system are unique. In fact, apart from the formatting and segmentation issues in the full text, the rest is not a big problem. Even this issue is not something that readers really care about now. Most people just read the content that took an hour to read in just two clicks. As a fan fiction, there is basically no way to avoid the incident of Mr. Da's composition and cookies, and one should not be too harsh on such a work that uses love to generate electricity. The negative reviews are basically because the stories of people who love to watch movies generally tend to be light-hearted, and they are two different groups from the heavier philosophical speculation style of the original work. After clicking in, they found out that it was not a novice and ran away. Although the tone of the original work is heavy, the self-destructive solution is not to solve the problem at all, but to serve the purpose of making the article cool. It is not very clever, just a simple and cool point of a reasonable commercial novel. There are a lot of cool things about this book, but it's not as direct and brutal. The original work of Chunwu is an emotion-driven novel. The story itself is relatively simple, but the emotional entanglement is more complicated. This one is more event driven. If the full text follows the animation, it will be completed faster. At the author's current pace, up to 300 chapters can be completed. If it is this size, there will be no problem, so you can rest assured to read it. If the author sees it, there is no need to revise too much what he has written now. My only suggestion is that you can appropriately jump out of the events of the original work and write more about the original work. However, adding the variable of the protagonist will affect the pre-events of the key events in the main line, giving readers the feeling of watching one more episode. Of course, this may not be suitable for the author, but I am the expectation of all fan fiction. If the original work is a twisted story about misunderstanding and growth, the animation is more of a light love comedy that makes Hachiman suffer and sacrifice alone. As for what exactly I want to write in this book, the keyboard is in the hands of the author.

The subject matter is rare, the writing is good, the psychological description of the characters is very good, I hope it can maintain the quality, and I really want to have a female protagonist who can learn from me how to interact with people [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] After reading it, I really look forward to the follow-up plot. How can I put it this way? This book can be said to have made a big mouth out of all the protagonists and authors who relied on the system to conquer the characters of the original series. The system should be set as the suit given to Spider-Man by Iron Man. If you don't have it, it is nothing, then you don't deserve to have it. If you follow the system's instructions mechanically to conquer each girl, is it the system or the protagonist who falls in love with them? I really like this kind of system where the person is holding the puppet, and the puppet is unwilling to accept the manipulation of the system. This kind of subject is really rare, and when will the truth be told?

It's a rare female protagonist's perspective. The author's writing is good, but it's a little bit sharp [crying] The system doesn't give you anything extraordinary, it's just an everyday style, right?

Very helpful. It confirms what Socrates said in the vagueness. I know that no matter how hard I try, I still know nothing. It seems that we are not just Sisyphus, as long as we repeatedly practice the task of pushing the stone from the bottom of the mountain to the top of the mountain, I am more inclined to imagine the nausea of ​​losing the sense of direction described by Sartre. Those who may find the direction, may be worthy of looking up, may also have superstitious belief and continue to walk on the road under their feet. There are still people who are lingering and doubtful about the future road. They are only presupposing the feasibility of the empty road around them, but they cannot resist the anxiety in their hearts. They will take a few tentative steps and wander around in circles to observe again.

What do the last few pictures mean? It's so sudden, as if common sense has changed. It's said to be a dream, but it doesn't feel like the main point of view is the great teacher. The following is a complaint I made when I read more than seventy chapters. At that time, I saw Mr. Da and the others going through the original plot as if they had forgotten the protagonist. I had mixed feelings and was ready to comment. In the end, I went back and finished reading it. I was reluctant to delete it, so I posted it together: It's very comfortable to read in one sitting It feels like it has been suppressed since the 61st chapter. The main character Shen Yin only mentions it in the observation diary at the end for more than ten chapters, and then all the members have inexplicable amnesia. The plot that foreshadows more than twenty chapters without any relief is still too constipated for a web novel, especially reading it in one go in the middle of the night really gives people a disgusting feeling like having a shit in the middle. There is really a kind of nameless fire in being stuck there. So can the author move faster? He must remember what he said. Where are the redemption and the knife? Can the plot be moved faster? I'm really in a hurry.

Looking at the front, I feel like I can't find a reason why the heroine can be forgiven, even if there is a system, because it is indeed CS. But I jumped directly to the latest chapter. The description is so delicious, so it is very good. At least I have the desire to read it. I don't read many books that describe the pursuit of free will, but this one is indeed written quite naturally. It is necessary to expose the system systematically in this book, otherwise there may not be this book. It is regarded as the core setting. Of course, the heroine can also be simply compared to an addict trying to detoxify. After all, it is difficult to expand the daily world view. Of course, I will be very surprised if it does.

The heroine's perspective is so rare [crying] and I really like the feeling of the bad woman in the front, the author must continue to do more

This book is well written, but the protagonist until the system was destroyed was a fake with a bad personality. If you can accept it, this is a good book.

It looks good. In the early stage, Qianye acted just like most system comprehensive comics to complete system tasks. The tasks required by the system were contradictory to his true inner thoughts. He knew it was wrong but had to complete it (obtaining counterfeit items). Qianye relied on the forced control of the system's "Unknown Prophet" system, deceived, put on a mask, and exhausted all means. To maintain the interpersonal relationships limited by the system, later with the help of the Service Department, coupled with Qianye's conscious resistance, he finally left the system and officially started a life without systematic arrangements. With the help of Hachiman and his group, Qianye began to work hard to become an "ordinary person" (starting to look for the real thing). Emotions are a very scary thing, it The outbreak of love is not a temporary thing but a silent accumulation of moisture. Once you are truly accustomed to its existence, you will not want to change it. This has created an increasingly twisted relationship between the four of them. Hachiman has become the support of the other three. Who hopes that he can accompany Hachiman to the end, but once these things are clarified, it will be difficult to maintain the relationship with the service department. Completely disconnected, everyone knows this, so they can only put on a mask and use all means to maintain this relationship, but this is obviously not in line with the authenticity pursued by the Ministry of Service (no deception, no concealment, entrusting your sincerity to the other party, and the other party does the same). This relationship will eventually be broken, and now is the time for Hachiman to make a choice (The above are purely personal random thoughts. If there are any mistakes in expression, please be gentle and please feel free to comment😭)

After the system goes offline, it becomes so distorted that it is difficult to suppress panic, and then you learn to be a "human" and repair relationships on your own, cautiously like a child who has just left the mountains to see the world. This is my favorite plot, and I think Shirase Qianye is the most charming. Looking forward to your follow-up!

So pretty! After one article, the relationship between the two of them is very smooth, but it does not feel dull. Moreover, this article can really convince people why the teacher likes Qianye instead of Yukino. It also analyzes the relationship between these people very thoroughly. The relationship between the two people in the middle and later stages is really heart-wrenching, but this is also youth. In the end, the two fell in love and it was so sweet. Just reading the text made people feel happy, five stars! !

I don't understand why no one reads such a beautiful book, but if you think about it carefully, it should be considered a radio article. Although no one is reading it, if the author doesn't give up on this book, I will definitely finish it. Come on, author [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

The writing is very good, just like watching another line. The low rating may be because some of the previous plots are not handled well and some people can't stand it. The writing is still good and the characters are well grasped.

It's really great, a book that suits my taste very much What I want to say to the author is that there is no need for the author to pay too much attention to book reviews and make changes. After all, every story shines because of its own uniqueness. Small things can be improved, but in the big direction, you must write what you want to write in your heart. Finally, come on!

From a macro perspective, the writing style may be a matter of acceptance. It depends on the individual, and if you can tolerate it, it will be fine. In addition, this book has a depressing style, so you can read it if you like it (but you have already seen the label of Chunwu, don't you understand what it is?) In addition, this book is considered good in fan fiction, is it still Chunwu? Tomato is rare [eating melon]

To make a long story short, this is a growth novel about a human-machine female protagonist in a Harmono fanfic. From a bystander, an indifferent observer who does whatever it takes to achieve her goal, she continues to grow into a girl with human emotions and bonds. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I guess she is tearing apart fake things to find the real thing, or becoming the real thing that someone is looking for. As for who that person is, (laughs). But the heroine can really beat Yukino, I'm looking forward to it. In the past, the fandom always competed with Yukino, but this time we have to face off against Yukino.

What kind of fake system🖐🏻, it's just our little Qianye's little trick to defeat his love rival and his little ingenuity to get close to the great teacher. Let a certain group and a certain snow learn from it, and learn each without saying a word😋😋😋

It looks okay so far

The part about system control in the middle may be a bit discouraging, but the rest is beautiful 😋😋 It's to my liking, I must write it to the end [crying] [crying]

The description of the great teacher is very realistic

At first I wanted to give it a score, but at the end I found it more and more satisfying, not bad 😊

The villain in the early stage is whitewashed in the middle stage. In the later stage, I don't know if there are two personalities fighting each other. At one time, the writing is very beautiful, and at the other time, it is weird. Overall, it is very interesting.

I think it's well written. I prefer reading depressing online articles.

This is also a success for me, an experienced foodie. I can't say whether it's good or not, but it's a twist and it's definitely worth a look.

Not bad, it's pretty good-looking, keep this feeling [Like]

I just like this kind of thing, the author's writing is really good [Admiration]

The writing is good, it is narrated in the first person, and there are many interludes. The plot after chapter 100 has some points of empathy, but there are many poisonous points in the early stage and the connection is not well written.

It's full of twists and turns, and it's so exciting that I spent several hours watching it all in one night.