This is my first time writing a novel, so I can't criticize my writing style lightly. If you have any opinions, be sure to mention them. I will make corrections if you give them.
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[No time travel] [No cheats] [No system] [Animation derivatives] [Second creation]
My name is Qian Huanshu, and I was originally the commander of the Tianyun Legion under Hua Ye.
Dissatisfied with the order of Heavenly Palace and Hua Ye's atrocities.
Together with Kesha and other angels, they rose up to overthrow the order of the Heavenly Palace...
Reader comments
Fortunately, for this first time writing a book, the only bad thing is that the pace is too fast.
Fortunately, for this first time writing a book, the only bad thing is that the pace is too fast.