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Baozi's thesis felt like it was soaked in flavor, like a college student who has suffered a lot. The writing style of Tomato is really good, but the essay-style narrative is too bland. The content is good, and the theoretical propositions are good, but it cannot write anything attractive. Based on my experience in reading novels, the factors of a good novel lie in five aspects: writing, plot, concept, characterization, and expression (narration). If any one of them fails, it will be awkward, and if any one of them is obviously deficient, it will make people look into it. What's more, the author has almost no characterization, his expressions are rigid and flat, and the plot is like a template with no ups and downs. The impression the protagonist gave me was: a somewhat ambitious robot. Give me a five-star encouragement and keep up the good work! The characters can be gradually fleshed out, and there is a good foundation of writing. As long as the plot and narrative style are developed, there will be no worries about good results [Blow a kiss] (There are very few people in Tomato who are as good in writing as the author)

It's smooth, direct, straightforward, and refreshing. There is the possibility of AI participating in co-writing. In the two chapters of the traditional Chinese medicine part, two English words that are not used in daily life appear respectively. One is "although" and the other is "occupational disease". After much thought, I can't think of any reason why these two words should be expressed in English.

Highly recommended. The cool thing about this book is that the male protagonist is really powerful. It can be understood as the type of story about a big boss coming to the novice village. Although it is a whitewash, it is not the traditional type that only changes the unworthy person. The male protagonist is a person with a big picture. Every time, every profession must reach the extreme instead of just completing the task. Generally speaking, it is a cool male protagonist with a big heart and ability [Adore]

Under normal circumstances, the male protagonist will keep a little bit of his personality and clean up his character. He likes to do it all at once. Some of the clean-up stories I read before took a long time. It's really cool to return to the novice village as a max-level boss. The author is a bit awkward in some places, but I still want to read it with my toes on the ground. That's part of the charm. When the last world is completed, the daily life of the host is over. Looking at the table of contents, I thought it was a eunuch novel. In fact, it's good that at least that world is completed, otherwise I would be scratching my head and wondering what will happen next. I wish Ye Ran all the best in his whitewashing career, and I also hope that the author's future updates will go well and live a healthy life.

The front part is actually quite dull, but I can still read it. I recommend starting from the seventh small world (because it is a bit like having two male protagonists from the beginning). I have read this book before. I am originally a book lover, but I happened to see this book, and I was thinking about the back part, and then I started to be shocked. Was this written by a different person? It really feels like a novel with two male protagonists, the kind where the older brother is gentle and the younger brother is very dependent on him. I have been looking for this type for a long time, but I finally found it 👁👄👁I won't say anything else. This book is deeply loved by me. I would like to give it a five-star rating.

The writing is plain and long, and the narrative method is steady and neither hasty nor impatient. It is excellent and has a calm atmosphere. Good writing is good writing, but lately I've been impatient and prefer reading the kind of cool writing where people quarrel aggressively and sneeze at each other, slapping someone in the face and venting their anger. What should I do? I don't want to see it but I can't bear to let it go... Forget it, just collect it first.

In the three worlds that started with the fake young master, did the author change his career to write about two male protagonists?

The writing is very good, but it would be better if the system does not appear in the scene as much as possible, although it is all to explain its current practices and future plans.

It's good to watch. The author could do more extra stories about later generations. I really want to see it.

It feels pretty good-looking

I think this fast-wearing rhythm is very good [like][like][like]

The writing is pretty good, but not many people rate it.

It's pretty good, but it's a bit like a substitute [eating melon]

This is the first time I see a positive story about a real and fake young master. I like it!

The storyline is good, you can read it in your spare time

I hope there won't be any cp. This book is quite good.