What's Wrong with the Walk on the Court? My Shot Will Definitely Go In.

I've caught up with the latest chapter and it's a great feeling! I just hope that the author can optimize it. Don't do it wrong. Without the system to send cards, the protagonist will not play football. When there are no goal cards or assist cards, the protagonist seems to have neither goals nor assists. The protagonist should progress with the system.

Overall it's okay to watch. But the problem is that the protagonist's teammates are the same as the background board. Even when the opponent team spends a lot of attention on guarding against the protagonist, they still can't score a goal, or even get overtaken by the score. But please note that his teammates are also on a world-class team that is better than the protagonist. Once the protagonist is restricted, commentators and live broadcast rooms will begin to criticize the protagonist for being unstable and inactive, but the protagonist has scored goals in many games and made silent contributions to attracting the opponent's multi-player defense. The entire team seems to blame the protagonist if they don't score goals all the time, and if they do score, it's the protagonist who is unstable. If you keep scoring goals, the protagonist will have to watch the next game, and the cycle will continue in the next game. Except for setting up many chapters and designing the one where the protagonist loses, there are no particularly poisonous points, but some poison resistance can still be seen. The cool spots are also relatively dense. If you are temporarily short of books, you can read it.

Don't learn from other books. The black national football team is what everyone else says. After all, without the Football Association, you can't go to Europe to play football! If you really don't like the national football team, then just fish in the national football competition! I said this, why do so many people have opinions? The protagonist is indeed the one who can play overseas because of the operation of the Football Association. Have you read the book? You can't hack the Football Association while playing overseas, right, repaying kindness with hatred? No one would be so naive as to think that football associations in other countries are not corrupt. The poor performance of the national football team cannot be entirely blamed on the Football Association! Look at things rationally!

I think this book is very good, the pace is a little faster, but the description of the plot is very good, and the writing is very passionate. This is the first time I have read a football article, and I don't understand football at all. The author writes really well

I saw the latest updated chapters, two chapters from last night until today. The final outcome resulted in failure. As a person with more sensitive emotions, I could feel the tears before my heart. In the plot, the hard work of the teammates and the encouragement of the audience made the audience feel disappointed and lonely, but there was no extreme emotional impact. The emotional feedback throughout the entire process was pure and loving. I read the author's new message. He knew that the failed chapter he wrote would be controversial. He believed that this failure could be a boost to help the protagonist succeed next time and move to a higher and further place. I don't have any objections. Blind success can easily make people lose their way. Everyone makes mistakes, and the protagonist is no exception. At the same time, I believe that failure is the mother of success. This sentence no longer conforms to the logic of modern society. It may have had a certain degree of truth in the past, but now it is completely inconsistent. The next time you fall may be a fall or a long-term trough, or it may be a comeback against the wind, a green light along the way. No one can say for sure, failure is the mother of success. I only use this sentence to comfort my friends. Maybe he tried hard, but failed. Maybe he didn't try hard, but failed. When I say this sentence, it is not important to me whether he succeeds in the future. This sentence is just used by me to comfort others and make him feel better. But it does not mean that I accept this sentence. Some words are okay, but don't deceive yourself. I do not deny the author's good intentions and his values ​​​​believe that failure is for better success, but from the perspective of a reader, I looked forward to the following chapters after reading the potential sentences at the end where the protagonist is about to show off his magical powers. I waited all night and then felt the disappointment of failure. From the author's own perspective, he agrees with this sentence, and he may also use this sentence to comfort himself in daily life. He wrote a plot that he thought was better for his protagonist. But from a market perspective, this book has many readers and will definitely be controversial. Good books never lack controversy. I see readers who are controversial but still rational. At the same time, I am also one of these people. I only feel that football can fail, but failure for the sake of failure is not advisable. I do not hate failure, but it does not mean that I will accept the failure of giving up on things that are within my reach. It can only be said that the author still failed. He wrote too deliberately. Chapters that failed for the sake of failure have little value for readers to see. I don't understand football. I can see the author's love for the protagonist, the expectations he projects on the protagonist, and I can see his values. This book is generally full of sunshine and vitality. Although the protagonist has a relatively low starting point, he is still moving forward steadily, which is a positive hint. Although there are setbacks in the middle, if it is normal in the end, there will be no Be plot. These two failed plots. Generally speaking, the writing is still too anxious. I hope it can be improved. The above are some of my humble opinions.

It's very interesting. Among the many football novels in which the protagonist is Long Aotian, this novel is unconventional with its delicate description and crisis-ridden plot. Compared with the bland and exciting plots of most football articles, this novel is eye-catching [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I have read four or five football articles. The protagonist in this one has the lowest starting point, but he is also full of youthful vitality and hope.

The card given by the system can only be used on the spot, and it only lasts ten minutes. Just suppress the protagonist. I didn't expect that my attribute points were around 40/50, and even after training all the time, I didn't gain any attribute points. If it doesn't last long, you can only use the points given by the system to improve it.

This author is good at writing about big scenes. The two finals were very fascinating and tense. The book is still a small seedling. As long as it maintains its personal characteristics, it will be a good article. However, players of this nationality cannot escape the problems of the national football team. Let's see how we deal with it later.

There are some plots that are awkward, but overall it's quite enjoyable. It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject matter, and it's quite novel.

The progress I am looking at now is Chapter 101. Even if you don't know football at all, you can read it with gusto. The ideas are innovative. Although the writing is lacking, you can feel the passion of the football game. To be honest, if the protagonist keeps winning, this book can only be a brainless article. But unexpectedly, the author arranged the plot of losing. Losing and winning are the charm of the game. If the so-called system can ignore the efforts of everyone else, then what value can the so-called champion have? Although some of the details in the article are illogical, it is still within a reasonable range overall. All in all, it is recommended.

I have never watched a football game, and this is my first time reading this type of article. I was very excited to read it! Although the names of various people in the intense and exciting plot made me a little confused, it did not affect my reading. I was so excited that I did sit-ups on the bed. Thanks for discovering this treasure on the train, five stars!

The author's characterization is very good, come on, I didn't skip a chapter. The characters should not be too flat. The winning team will cause readers to lose the expectation and surprise of the final result. It's good for the protagonist to fail once, just like the reader's comment in the paragraph: "This makes the core sublimated." Keep up the good work, the author, even I, who don't read and don't understand football, like the football in your article [Like] [Love]

I almost never read ads in Tomato because I just like the feeling of free prostitution, but this book deserves encouragement and is worth liking. The low rating is not because the writing is not good, but because the author writes too slowly. There are several football articles written by the author on the bookshelf, and this one is the best. I don't understand football, and I only know Cristiano Ronaldo and Messi as football stars, but this does not affect the feeling of pleasure that the author brings to me. Although the Dordmund coach's celebration method is a bit monotonous, the description of other aspects is really cool! ! ! Although it is said that writing this kind of football articles is all about the disappointment of the national football team and can only be used as a way to lust, you can't deny that it is so satisfying. In the latest chapter, following the protagonist to a bigger stage, that feeling of pride really arises naturally. Because the author is too slow to update, I was reading another football article he wrote in his early days at the same time. I can clearly see his progress and the level of enjoyment has increased by more than one level! The first time I clicked on a football article, I really discovered a new world of cool articles. Now my Tiktok has started to push Haaland's funny videos to me... This book must be praised with five stars. Come on, the author, I hope to see a super refreshing ending!

Well, actually I don't know much about football... But that doesn't affect my enjoyment of reading this article. I feel like the foreign agent's dialogue was written quite like that. I've read a lot of cool articles about football and basketball. This one is of relatively high quality. It's fun and a little funny, but it doesn't have any big flaws. Hmm... I saw someone later saying it was an AI article, and it seems that I do feel that way. Whether it is the way the coach celebrates or the way his teammates celebrate, they are both a bit artificial and cliche-like, but how should I put it? It's not completely bad, just average. But I also combined it with the early stage. The author should have written it himself, and also posted a long comment. Or maybe it's my feeling after reading other people's comments about AI…. It's still pretty good, right?

. . . Going for a walk. . . It's too restrictive. It looks so good that the wall is cracked. Recommended. . Whoever wants to watch it?

I've just read Chapter 101. The plot is smooth and the descriptions are vivid. The author should not be frustrated by the malicious negative reviews written by those crazy people in the comment section. This is a great book, always support the author! ! !

The overall structure and content of the book are quite good, but I remember that the early description system also included achievement rewards and talent points? Why did it disappear in the later stage? It's a pity [what]

It's very interesting. I like the character of the protagonist in the sports theme. He doesn't mess around and focuses on the game. The plot is written very smoothly. Controlling the protagonist's combat power allows room for development. I don't know where the author plans to end it. I hope the author will vigorously update it. Come on.

It's well written. It's much better than the previous book. I feel like it's not written by the same person. Football is full of confrontation, competition, technology and teamwork. This book highlights the power of the game but does not negate its own efforts. Although there are many other shortcomings, I still give it 4 stars.

This football novel really gets more and more exciting the more I read it! Not only the simple description of the game, but also the character growth, team bond, struggle and passion inside and outside the field are all written very realistically. Watching every key battle made my heart beat faster, as if I was shouting from the stands. The characters are flesh and blood, neither proud nor floating. They have youthful spirit and realistic helplessness and perseverance. Watching it is full of emotions and excitement. Football fans must not miss it!

Overall, it is very good. The growth of the protagonist is very delicate. The characters are not flat. They are passionate when they should be passionate. The rhythm is well grasped👍🏻I hope I can continue to focus on my career. ٩(•̀▽ •́)งThere is no heroine if I am not a stud! The author, please don't read those random negative reviews, stick to yourself, and work hard [currently working on the manuscript]

Good to watch. Recommended. Don't worry. 5,000 Views. Highly recommended by loyal Tomato readers.

This feature is still amazing. I hope it can resist injuries. On the other hand, I want to return to China in the future. Is there any good development after returning to China? I think you are full and tired and want to make money. Besides, football is not a one-person sport. What use will you have after you come back? Also, can you give me an accurate reply about the age of the protagonist? I'm 17, I'm 18, I'm 19.

I have to say that even though I don't watch sports shows, I was attracted to it. Finally, there are no beautiful coaches or beautiful secretaries anymore. It's all about playing football. But I have a small suggestion. If the protagonist insists on returning to China to play football and wants to change the men's football team, I hope it will be the finale, the end of one chapter.

Recommended, good subject matter The book contains two elements that I don't like: foreign names (can't remember them) and football (can't understand them) There is also a bug (the protagonist's age changes back and forth, 19, 17, 18, and 19 jump repeatedly, as if copied) But I finished watching it. The character of the protagonist is well developed and quite humorous.

Typical AI writing, but except for sometimes confusing logic and inconsistencies, the quality is pretty good. This is a common problem with AI writing. AI has a maximum of 4 stars, but I can't get 5 stars.

I must have read more than 100 chapters. It was quite interesting, but suddenly I didn't feel like it anymore.

I would like to ask, the prop at the beginning is bound to hit the target, does it have to be used immediately? Can't you get the ball and use it later?

The story generated by AI is okay, but there are various low-level errors repeatedly in various data. I hope the author will check it again after generating it.