What Do Elves Do Besides Slacking Off?

It's awesome, but there are too few. By the way, does the novel have an outline? Is this a road novel? Or is it written around events? I don't know what I think, and I don't know how to make suggestions. Suggestion: fill in more worldview, preferably with a core, and less sex, which feels like some parts are written too deliberately (sex does not include food descriptions and descriptions of facial expressions to portray characters. I originally came here for the cuteness and cuteness, and it would be even better if I found it has connotations). The Riddler should be moderate. Keeping the cute and warm writing style will lead to a future. Come on, keep doing it [I learned it]😘[Please update]

The rhythm is brisk, the writing is fresh, and it has a sense of fantasy atmosphere. However, I don't know the identity and race of the male protagonist. I guess it is a modern person who traveled through time and sacrificed himself for some important event. He was reborn and lost his memory because of it. The only drawback is that the original version is not interesting enough 😢

It's a very warm trip to another world, the driving is just right, and it's beautiful.

The author doesn't have a knife, does he? I really don't want to see those bitter and resentful people anymore, meow 😢

Nice! I missed it several times because of the introduction, but because it appeared on the homepage too many times, I still came in and took a look. Unexpectedly, it exceeded my expectations.

Love to watch. I am a real person. At least there aren't any poison points now. Pretty enough too.

I almost lost it because of too few words, but the result is pretty good. I'd like to support it by giving it five stars.

A good book

It's a daily article, without any background of bitterness or hatred. It's very interesting and has no shortcomings except short updates and slow updates.

It looks pretty good, nothing wrong with it so far