With You************

At first, I just looked at the cover and title and thought it was quite interesting. I just read the introduction and reviews as if I were reading an ordinary romance novel (at first I just read the two male protagonists and didn't notice that there was no romance). As a result, the reviews were all novels for beginners and encouraging. But I still like this cover (do you have the original picture? I want to use it as wallpaper). In comparison, even though I am a novice, I deserve respect as long as I dare to write. The foreshadowing before the encounter does seem to be more like a novice's style, but it is quite good. It can be seen that even if it is written for the first time, it is polished with care. Using a large number of poems and paragraphs to describe moods and scenery is a test of the author's cultural level. However, the author handles it very well. Everything is handled just right and there is no conflict at all. There is no sense of fragmentation or splicing of words. Even if you excerpt many of them and use them as mottos, you will be praised. The plot of "Looking for Flowers" is a relatively cliché about breaking through fate, but the author writes it very well. There is no drama like ordinary works where you just find something to promote your relationship. The relationship between father and son (it should be described like this) is not like love, but the relationship in it is better than thousands of mountains and rivers. Unfortunately, the update has been stopped for a few months. It seems that it is difficult to update. The ending is a lot of foreshadowing. According to other works, this is very suitable as the end of a chapter, but it is not the ending of the story. Anyway, I still hope to update it. This work can be said to be a breath of fresh air among various orc themes. It is not a cliche love and war. I look forward to the author's subsequent updates and new works [Like] [Love]

After thinking about it for a while, I came here to give a review. So far, I feel ok. . . It does look like a novice's work. The rhythm is a bit messy, and I personally feel that the world view is a bit vague. However, newbies are still accumulating experience, so I will see when I will make a recommendation article later to help you promote it. My current emotions are very good for me, so I will insert a glance here to catch up. Come on brother, as a newbie, it is already very good to be able to write like this.

Give yourself a good review~

The author writes very well

I feel that the writing is very good. As a newcomer, the writing style is already very good.

It's good, but it's not finished yet

Personally I think it's pretty good, I'll give it my support

The writing is great and the narrative style is great! The plot doesn't drag out too much, which is a big plus point