Tokyo: Becoming a Beautiful Girl, Then Redeeming Myself

I feel that the subject matter and character setting are very attractive. The writing style is also good... But there is a problem, maybe it is too few words at present... It may also be my personal problem. Most people will want to read this book. But you are actually quite dissatisfied in the first few chapters. You want to redeem your past self, which gives people a feeling of narcissus. I will jump to read it... Of course, there is no problem with the book itself. The title of the book is also redemption ~ and this is just my opinion. How the book is and how the plot will be in the future still depends on the author. All in all, come on, author teacher @

Nikgaru's writing style is quite good, but the plot of his own redemption may be a little less polished, and some readers may read it as Narcissus (it is recommended that Watanabe discovers the relationship between the two heroines in advance, which will make the viewing experience much better). The relationship between the heroines has no reversal, it is dark and deep, and it is completely smooth. This also resulted in the word count being a bit short. In fact, a little more about Shura Fields and the like would be fine.

So sweet, just like this 😳😳 Although Amamiya is a bit of a bum, how can I chase my wife if I don't have a bit of a bt [laughs] In the first few chapters, because she had to resolve the connection with herself in her previous life, the heroine would take the initiative to help him. However, the heroine had pure fatherly love for her in her previous life () In her previous life, she liked the heroine at the beginning, but later she also discovered the relationship between the heroine and the president. It's okay to be poisonous, the author handled it quite appropriately, and the emotional line is really sweet 😳

Transformation, the author's writing style is very good, it is in the style of Japanese light novels, which is rare in the genre of transformation novels, and it is a very novel subject matter. The article has always had a main mission of redeeming its own identity. It feels like it is more used to promote the development of the early plot. I hope that some other main missions can be developed later to enrich the content. The overall type is a daily novel. The setting of President M is quite interesting. It feels like this is the first time I have seen a heroine with this setting in a transformation novel. The contrast is quite interesting. Overall, it deserves five-star praise, and I hope the author will continue to work hard!

It is a good-looking, literary-oriented youth romance campus novel. The ability to write ordinary daily life so wonderfully shows the author's excellent writing style. Every sweet interaction between Ji Sha and Feng made me laugh unconsciously.

It's very interesting to read, and the text is very good. As long as you can accept that the protagonist always helped you in his past life in the early stage, I highly recommend reading it. The extras are a bit worse, I don't quite understand some of the plots, but overall it's innocuous, and it's an absolute masterpiece if you put it in 🍅.

If you can ignore the excessive interaction with your past life in the early stage, it will be a very good book in the middle stage. The interaction between the president and the heroine is very exciting. What I want to see is this mouth!

If you just want to read Tie Tie, you can read the first 3 chapters and then go directly to Chapter 7. The pain point of this book is obvious, that is, there is a male predecessor, and a lot of the previous plot revolves around him, which is not very friendly to those who just want to watch Tie Tie. However, the later plot makes the predecessor more cheerful, and the role of the predecessor is reduced. The more the plot revolves around the protagonist and the people around her, the more plots will be involved in the later Tie Tie.

After polishing it a little more, it will be ready for publication.

It looks good, but people who look at it have a yellowish heart [smile][smile][smile]