
The Immortal Cultivator Clan: Starting with the Qingxuan Lin Clan
修仙家族:从青玄林氏开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Eastern Cultivation
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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Code within a code, the protagonist has four spiritual roots, the protagonist's sister has two spiritual roots, and the protagonist's sister has two spiritual roots. No one seems to be snatching them away, and no one is coming to kill them. The Lin family, a family with only one foundation building period and an ancestor who is seriously injured and could die at any time, doesn't have a sect to snatch it away? Will the Zhao family let her live? She seems to be twelve or thirteen years old, and she seems to be living a very ordinary life! Also, the protagonist and his younger sister are not the same generation, and some are the same generation and some are not. It's really a mess! In the end, the protagonist saves the proud girl...[Awkward laugh]
It's too nonsense and ridiculously messy. It's 100% successful to draw the talismans of the middle and late stages of the Golden Elixir in the middle stage of foundation building. The hierarchical logic is too confusing, and the regions are not clearly described. Many things in the article appear out of thin air for no reason. The author just writes these things wherever he thinks of them, and there is no connection between them. It makes my head foggy, and it is probably going to be unfinished.
There seems to be a huge pile of [Tu] clan land that has never been attacked and caused damage to the spiritual veins. So how can you support a foundation building, a ninth-level Qi training, and a few late-stage Qi training with your first-level low-grade spiritual veins? The foundation-building ancestor is not dead! Faced with the oppression of the Zhao family, in the first month he went to the city store to earn 30% a year's profit, plus 50 kilograms of iron ore per month, saying that he was delaying and waiting for the ninth level of Qi training to appear. If you dare to go to the family, the coercion will injure a lot of injured clan members. Not to mention the injury of the foundation-building ancestor for now, the clan leader is also at the ninth level of Qi training after all. The Zhao family has two ninth-level Qi training that are a little stronger than the protagonist's family. The gap between the two sides is not crushing. Who can show this mess?
There is Foundation Establishment, but the family has no inheritance. He is still in the first level of low-grade spiritual veins. Foundation Establishment is only seriously injured, not dead. He is bullied by the Qi Lian family, and he is not afraid of Foundation Establishment dying together.
The progress has been too fast. He has broken through from the fourth level of Qi Lian to Foundation Establishment in one year. There is also a Foundation Establishment Ancestor who is still being suppressed by the Qi Lian Qi Family and cannot hold his head up. Wouldn't it be better if the Foundation Establishment Ancestor goes to the other family and dies together?
It would be better to just introduce a Mahayana exercise method. Anyway, it won't delay the protagonist's efforts. The elixir array device can be pushed to the Mahayana stage in minutes, and it will save words.
The author is so smart, even the sixth person would not be so aggrieved.
AI works... Recently, there are a lot of works of similar style, some of them are at the passing level, and most of them are inexplicable, with surprising writing methods, unified style, hey
I was struggling from the beginning, and it was quite frustrating, with no chance to breathe at all.
Except for the protagonist, everyone else in the family is a loser.