The Trumpet Became a God, Why Was the Big One Suddenly Unblocked?

It can be seen that this is my first time writing a book. After reading a few chapters, the characterization is actually quite good. The rhythm is a bit confusing and the words are a bit too much. Occasionally, it is actually quite interesting, but too much makes it boring. In some places, the description is too complicated and seems a bit draggy. In some places, it is a bit off-topic. Overall, I have just written a book, and it is pretty good. I give it five stars. Come on.

The theme is funny, and the plot is not procrastinating, but it is probably written by a newcomer, so it feels a bit abrupt, and the plot has a sense of skipping, but the overall look and feel is very good. If the author's thinking had always been broad and fresh, this book would be no worse than the reading list. It's not that the plot is unstable, it's a bit awkward

I feel that the writing is quite enjoyable, but not brainless. The relationship between the protagonist and the brothers is quite interesting and realistic. After all, my eldest son and I are like this [laughing evilly], come on, author!

Not bad but a bit short, the author is too short

Great, great, give the author a big thumbs up

Very suitable for the moment

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Vomited rice crackers and said diarrhea was excessive

Steamed clams! Very ginkgo

I'm afraid you'll be proud [smile]

I finished reading it at 20:50 on May 14, 2026. I wish all fellow Taoists a happy life and happiness every day. Dear fellow Taoists, we will see you later [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]

Not bad, not eating stones

Looks good, give it 11 points