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Very good keep up the good work

There are ooc and there are suspicions in water word count After reading the latest chapter, I still find that the author has not corrected some shortcomings. The characters' speech is rigid and the connection is blunt. There is no need to talk about how other emperors sleep. Just one emperor just wakes up and patrols. The character's actions lack verbs, and there is no need to use overlapping words such as "wash in vain" and "sleep". For another example, Tuoba Gui later said, "I hope we can resist the doomsday crisis together." I think emotions should be expressed here. For example: "I hope we can resist the doomsday crisis together!" He said excitedly and sincerely. Stiffness means that the emotion of the character's inner state is not expressed.

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