Traveling Through Time to Cultivate Immortality: Starting Before the Original Owner Died

The previous chapter was all good, but the latest chapter has always been good to the male protagonist. The junior sister who was thinking about the male protagonist tried her best to protect the male protagonist when she thought he had no cultivation. She was seriously injured. When the thief killed the male protagonist, the male had no choice but to use his strength. Then, facing the severely injured junior sister who was dying and had no ability to open the storage bag, she chose to die when she asked to open her own storage bag to get a bottle of elixir for treatment. It can be understood that this is a characterization of the characters, and I hope that the protagonist will grow up, but I am somewhat reluctant to respond. For the sake of the previous good performance, I give you five stars and say goodbye.

A good book, no doubt a good book. The protagonist, a cultivator of immortality, is upright and aboveboard. He is no doubt a gentleman. He will regret making wrong decisions, but he can stick to his true intentions after enlightenment. Although the protagonist of the time traveler is careless, he is indeed a person with a true nature. His character can be regarded as one of the best in ten thousand in modern times. He knows what is good and what is bad. Because he lives in the era of information explosion, he can see problems from multiple angles. Although it sounds simple, in fact, his way of looking at problems is far more thorough than many people. He is also a person who is willing to risk his life for others. Although the writing is not brilliant, the story is unique and innovative. The plot of the two protagonists helping and enlightening each other is also good. The plot and the characters of the two protagonists support everything.

It looks good and well written in my opinion. I hope there won't be a female protagonist. I hope to see the revenge scene as soon as possible. I like the characters of the two protagonists very much. They are kind and upright, with excellent qualities. This kind of character is quite rare in the current immortal novels. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to the follow-up [Sending Hearts] Secondly, I'm a little confused as to why the rating is so low, but I really recommend it and it's pretty good.

There are really not many mortals who are so compatible with each other in Tomato [laughing] Flesh and blood, Old Chisel, two souls in one, the collision of cultivation and modern thought, novel themes, I hope it can be completed, it is really good-looking

Don't look at the small points, it's really good-looking. It turns the poisonous point of female videos into a small bright spot in the novel, which is rare. And he won't keep suppressing his cultivation like other novels, and it will take several years to break through to the first level. Then, the two protagonists with completely different personalities complement each other, which is also one of the highlights. It's not said who has more roles and who has less roles. There are others, but I won't go into details. Of course, there is a small episode in the plot. It is a trap. Even if someone discovers him, he can still practice without Taoist foundation. I just don't know if this hole will be filled in the future.

It's very well written, and I'm currently at 70 chapters. I have read the so-called poisonous point, and it is very reasonable and logical. The protagonist is seriously injured and has not recovered. When it comes to his own safety, he gives priority to self-preservation. After doing it, he immediately regrets it. Only in this way can he look like a human being and the character can be three-dimensional.

The setting is clear, it is not a brainless novel, the plot is compact but not superficial, the style is humorous without losing the traditional fantasy color, carefully selected by ten-year-old bookworms, as long as you can survive the knife in the early stage, if the author sticks to it, you will feel like a great master [laughing]

There are thoughts and contradictions, and it is not all smooth sailing. The author writes very well. Newbies may find some parts unacceptable, but for a reader who can really think about it, it is true that the two male protagonists can interact more. I hope more people will read it. The score will definitely not be lower than 9

The novel's writing is smooth and chewy, and the story is good. The differences in the styles of the two protagonists are well handled. The characters are three-dimensional and lovable. The collision of personalities is dramatic. The world view and setting are also special compared with the mainstream. It looks quite distinctive and the design is good and attractive. Readers, the shortcomings are that there are not many explanations about the setting, and describing it from the side will inevitably be delayed. There are also too many fictitious proper nouns to confuse the brain. However, in many cases, it does not affect the understanding of the story if you just ignore the specific proper nouns and just look at them briefly. These nouns are too spacey, so I suggest you try to streamline them. Although the overall main line trend is classic, the setting is unique. The author's writing is very appetizing. It is highly recommended. Oops, come and see. Isn't this your favorite pair of male protagonists cultivating immortals, two strong contrasts, complementary souls, two souls, high intelligence, beauty, strength and misery? (?) Classic male channel orthodox brotherhood, cb's concrete free heart testimonials, the two protagonists chatting and getting along are so cute, one is cold and the other is hot, serious and casual, who can't watch it without raising the corners of their mouths, show me all the secrets.

So pretty! The protagonist is known to be a time traveler from the beginning. Souls from two different worlds live in the same body. The possessed person is a righteous man born and raised in the country. He is pedantic and stubborn. It is interesting to see him being taught bad things by the protagonist little by little [laughs]

One body, two souls, the original protagonist is still there, the setting is unique and novel, and there are two male protagonists, with complementary personalities. There is no way forward, but they have found their own way, and the process of studying the exercises is well written, which is very good. The only thing I couldn't accept was the plot where the protagonist of the cultivating world went to pick up the fairy seedlings. The protagonist refused to save the little junior sister who helped him and gave him cakes. He even considered killing the child to silence him to ensure that his unique skills would not be exposed. It felt like he had dealt with things calmly, thoughtfully, and firmly before, and he could still suppress the jump of the time traveler. Here I feel like I am being led by various people. It seems that if the time traveler is not there, he will easily fall into a trap. If the protagonist of the world of immortality is not there, the time traveler will easily get into trouble. The shortcomings of the two of them are too obvious. They are not as powerful as if they were together, they would become gods, and if they separated, they would become kings. I liked the first sixty chapters, but when I got to Junior Sister offline, I didn't like it anymore. I was led by the nose from behind, but I wasn't as transparent as the supporting characters in it. I feel like I just gave it a four-star rating.

I must give this novel a thumbs up! It is really a high-quality article that makes people like it more and more the more they read it. The author's writing skills are very solid, the words are beautiful and powerful, and it is readable and catchy, and there is no dyslexia at all. The setting of the story is very innovative, not a cookie-cutter routine, which makes people's eyes brighter. As the plot unfolds, the worldview gradually becomes clearer. The details are rich and reasonable, and you can see the author's sincerity and sincerity in creation. The growth lines of the characters are also very complete. From the ignorance and youthfulness at the beginning to the maturity and determination later, every step of the transformation is very natural, which makes people feel deeply involved and moved by their persistence and courage. The emotional portrayal is even more delicate. Whether it is a sweet interaction or a heart-wrenching misunderstanding, the descriptions are very realistic and full of empathy. After reading it, I really have endless aftertaste, and I can't help but share the wonderful plot with my friends. Such a good story is really satisfying. I have added this article to my list of repeated readings. I will always support the author and look forward to more wonderful creations in the future!

It's quite good-looking. It's rare for Tomato to have such a good-looking fairy tale. The setting of two male protagonists with souls is very novel. The narrative structure is quite good, it feels like a group portrait, and there is no villain in the strict sense. Opponent's IQ is online The death of characters in it is natural. This is true even if the bond with the protagonist is relatively deep. It seems like a character dies suddenly and naturally in reality. The protagonist's behavior gradually changed as things changed, but his inner character remained unchanged. Fine. Come on, author [like]

Alas, give it four points! In fact, when I first read it, I thought it was very novel and interesting. I thought this book was amazing. I had never read anything of this type, but I felt a knot in my heart when I saw the protagonist not saving his junior sister, and I felt that the part of leaving the sect was so abrupt. Maybe it was to write the character's growth arc, but I continued to read it. After all, it was really good. But when I got to the place where the protagonist was selling the exercises, I really couldn't bear it. I had emphasized how precious and valuable the exercises were before... Even though they were dismantled, they just opened a shop to sell them directly? No, aren't there other bigger concerns? Also, when I saw Zhou Zheng being cheated when he bought materials, I felt an unknown fire in my heart. Maybe I had read too many cool stories and didn't want to see the protagonist suffer a little loss. Alas, my biggest pity is that Elder Wu from the early sect, there are many great protagonists, but he just doesn't appear... I like Zhou Zheng very much, it's great. Even though I traveled through time, I still have modern thinking. I don't want many novels to forget their origins when they travel through time, and don't think about routines at all. Moreover, traces of AI can be seen, which are not particularly heavy, but covering them up is not enough. Some sentences are weird and illogical, but they are only a small part and do not affect reading. In short, this is a good book. It really attracted me in the early stage, but it became boring in the later stage... Well, I hope the author will get better as he writes! If you can't get over the hurdle in your heart, just give it a two-pointer! After reading the comments, it was said that the protagonist continued to focus on his own opportunities regardless of the disappearance of his master, but later fell off the horse. Elder Wu came to find him, and he completely stood on the opposite side and said a lot of heart-wrenching words... Okay, it is true that the positions are different, but has his conscience been eaten by a dog? Elder Wu helped a lot in the early stage, right? Without Elder Wu, are these two still creating their own exercises? I originally wanted to survive and see it again, but now I can't survive anymore, alas! A book of poisonous weeds Moreover, the traces of AI are actually quite obvious. When I saw a sentence with repeated adjectives, I thought I had read it wrong. After reading it for a long time, I realized that it was awkward and actually had a faint taste of class when I read it. No wonder there are so many reviews and the score is less than 8. It seems there is a reason.

There are a lot of ghosts and ghosts in the comment area. I have already seen the latest chapter. I read the comment area in my free time. Chapter 66 showed no mercy to the dying junior sister. A common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of carrying a treasure. Is this society so beautiful? That old man who fell down on the road, you would definitely help him, right? People can't think too well of themselves, you do, and so does Wang Xie. The choices you make in life will cause your own fundamental interests to be damaged. That is whether to be a saint and do what you can't do, a gentleman to not save, or a villain to turn a blind eye. This chapter is about asking one's heart, which is not found in Shuangwen. Shuangwen does not have the mental journey of growth and the heartfelt feeling after the climax. It's just that the author is so prolific, can he guarantee the quality of future novels, and can he write a touching arc of humanity?

I read the latest chapter in one go, and I think I am qualified to comment [shy] The overall impression is very good, there is no bad point in the whole process, and the score is a bit low (maybe related to the writing power, the author's writing power is limited, it is definitely not top-notch. But if you are like me and just want the plot and not the writing, then it is very good Meaning. However, innovation is always limited and you will get tired after reading it for a long time.) The author does not have to insist on perfection. The only possible shortcoming is that I am getting tired (this is the same disease. It is easy to repeat when I write too much, and I feel ridiculous when I keep having adventures). However, it does not affect the 5-star praise. There are very few such unsystematic and brainless articles. There is no need to deliberately pursue the knife or the like (the unyielding feeling and the "cry of perseverance" for seeking made me see a little bit of the Immortal Lord. It was the "tears of perseverance" that made me look at the book from beginning to end. I was already annoyed with the protagonist, but a poem changed everything.) This book should never be stuck with less than 8 points. The only 5-star review I have given so far [get it] I will leave a mark here, and you will kick me if it scores more than 9.5 Points! (I can barely read any Tomato score below 9, as they all have flaws, but I like this one very much)

The author wrote quite well. When I saw the exercises and other exercises, I was quite shocked. It seemed a bit counter-routine. The two protagonists have distinct and three-dimensional personalities. I really felt the feeling of powerlessness and confusion when Junior Sister Zhao Li died and Wang Xie died. Overall, it is slower-paced, or a little more refreshing, with less interesting points (in my opinion) and more impetuous. Readers may find this article a bit tasteless, and it would be a pity to discard it. For example, I () can be regarded as a kind of spiritual practice🙌 (The author actually also reads a certain Langya Prince, so I said that nowadays few people seem to use Wang Lai as the surname of the protagonist. It turns out to be a book friend) I hope the author can persevere until the end, come on!

The author's writing is pretty good, keep it up. I saw the place where my junior sister died along the way, and I can understand the protagonist's thoughts, but life is already tiring, and reading novels is just to relax, so why should I feel unhappy? I will resign first.

The content structure of this book shows a high degree of logic, the chapters are naturally connected, and the viewpoints are detailed and persuasive. From basic concepts to in-depth analysis, it progresses step by step, allowing readers to acquire knowledge systematically. The language expression is precise and smooth, and the professional terminology is used appropriately, which not only ensures the depth of the content, but also takes into account the readability. During the reading process, you can feel the author's rigorous academic attitude and profound professional foundation. High-quality content is like a solid foundation, supporting readers' exploration and understanding of knowledge.

Like it very much! ! ! Xiao Wang and Xiao Zhou complement each other and support each other on the road to immortality. I really like this kind of quarrel, dependence and trust when they were young! I really want to read hundreds of chapters in one breath, I will update it soon [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart] I took a look at the parts that everyone thinks are poisonous. Maybe I've read too much, but I think it's okay. This kind of plot depends on the author's writing skills. If it is well written, I can accept it. It is a more detailed portrayal of the characters. If it is written crudely, it will be poisonous. As for this book, the author has laid a lot of groundwork in the previous chapter, including various intrigues in the sect, especially after he had just accepted a disciple, and found out that his childhood family was now relying on him to do evil. Xiao Wang has been very shaken by his Taoist heart and behavior, but he has not learned to correct it yet. I am also very worried about how he will recover his Taoist heart in the future. Later, Xiao Zhou went online and talked about resurrection. Now there is a way to solve it, just take your time and read it. After all, this book has an obvious growth-oriented protagonist, so I was very patient.

First, let's talk about the advantages: there are no obvious shortcomings in the world view, exercises, rules and other settings, especially when the protagonist's deduction of exercises is written in great detail and is very powerful. Disadvantages I don't like: The two protagonists' personalities are very distinctive at the beginning, but the transformation is very abrupt, especially Wang Xie's. Although his master was upright and rigid, he was very kind to Wang Xie, but when he learned that his master was missing, he didn't even inquire about the news and went on to find his own opportunity. Elder Wu treated both of them well. It was Elder Wu who gave them a place to live when they were unable to practice. It was Elder Wu who supported them when someone came to their door. As a result, the waistcoat fell off and when Elder Wu came to find them, their attitude and the words they said were chilling to listen to. There are some similar ones. If you don't mind, you can take a look. I really like the two of them deducing the skills together. I feel that the author is very powerful. A little suggestion to improve the character's personality

The two souls support each other and live and die together. In fact, the exaggerated performance in the front has an indescribable novice culture. In fact, that is the part that I can't stand the most. Later, I think the part with the junior sister was very well written and made me feel uncomfortable. In fact, this is understandable. The junior sister did feel uncomfortable when she died. , But I also struggled with one step and one mistake, but I didn't expect the dramatic release later on. But I think it is a very good article. Internet articles cannot be impeccable, even masterpieces have their shortcomings. I hope the author will continue to work hard and don't give up [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

This book is well written. I finished reading it in three days. Each transition is smooth and natural, including the characters' emotions, which are delicate. People are not perfect, but the author clearly writes the protagonist's personality change process without deliberately sensationalizing it, but it can make readers get involved. In short, update it quickly, it's not enough [Love]

It is a book that the two male protagonists will enjoy whether they are addicted or not. It is refreshing and not greasy for those who are addicted. It is also delicious for those who are not addicted to take a bite of pure brotherhood. It is a traditional and refreshing novel with a fast pace. The one who loves the main character and has the initiative in his career is also called cheerful. I rarely enjoy the excitement on Tomato. I have the same taste as CP on Qidian. I watched the latest chapter all night long from the first chapter. In my heart, it is five stars.

So pretty! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it seems interesting at first glance, but upon closer inspection I find it is a top quality product, great! The happiness of playing games with good friends and leveling up After reading more than 100 chapters to build the foundation, I did get a bit bored after reading it🥱I thought it was a dual-core driver, but I got it all by myself. The other person went offline. And the combat power is average, not as strong as those experimental products across combat. It feels like assembling a bunch of very high-end parts. I thought I could install a high-power mecha, but instead I assembled a hair dryer [face covering] Really boring🥱

It's good, but the pace is a bit slow. It seems that the plot may speed up after the protagonist reshapes his body. It is estimated that it will take more than 800 chapters and a thousand chapters to finish. I hope the author can keep writing. The author has written quite well in the series Two Souls in One Body, two male souls that are rare. There are no awkward emotional scenes. It's just that in the Xuantian Sect, they don't quite understand the operations of Chen Lin and the others. From their perspective, the male protagonist is useless, so there is no need to care about a useless person. There is no conflict of interest. At most, it is just that the male protagonist is showing off and is not pleasing to the eye, and there is no plan to harm the male protagonist. But after leaving Xuantian Sect, the plot became interesting. I experienced all kinds of life, and it felt like a youth version of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality.

It's a bit interesting. After reading novels for so many years, I think novels from this perspective are novel. The wording and sentence construction are also acceptable. It can be said to be a high-quality novel. I hope the author can maintain it. I made this comment based on my personal opinions.

It's quite interesting. It's not a mindless upgrade stream. It's rare to write about the world of immortality where fish and dragons are mixed up to create difficulties and opportunities. It's so fun to have two people with two souls. Wang Xie, do you still remember your face in the first chapter?

It is a very interesting novel about cultivating immortals. It has a new concept and is not the same. It is the first time that I have seen two souls using one body to cultivate immortality. The character description is more three-dimensional, and I can see that the protagonist is growing up. The supporting characters are also flesh-and-blood, colorful, and some are particularly lovable. The writing style is also good, relatively mature. Some basic views on three things are not like pure dark novels like Gu Zhenren, who just focus on their own cultivation and do not care about good or evil or whether others live or die. I really can't stand it [face covering]

After reading Chapter 69, it is the best time travel novel I have ever read. The score is low, 9*5 is not too much. But don't let me down with the rest of the plot. From the conception to the analysis of human nature, as well as the plot transformation, there is something. Unexpected. . The novel became unreadable after chapter 150, it was so disorganized. No matter the details. Very tired. . What a pity