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The author's writing style and logic are very online! It's so hard to find in Tomato! ! The native Slytherin male protagonist, who was in Harry's class but didn't interact too much. Although he is a Slytherin, he is evil (?) And does not have a particularly exaggerated golden finger. Instead, he uses his talent down-to-earth and studies hard to become the treasure of every professor. I really like the interaction between the protagonist and Snape. It is a bonus to not act out the scenes. The interaction between the protagonist and his friends is also very loving. He founded the Learning Club Roundtable Association, which is currently 2 green, 1 blue and 2 yellow. The protagonist is more like a mentor to everyone. It is fun to venture to the fourth floor together in the club (the protagonist group is really lagging behind!) When I first read this book, I looked at the copywriting and the setting of the club, and I had a vision of Voldemort next door. Don't stop me from learning, but after reading it, I found that it is still very different, mainly because the author's writing is really good! The author mentioned in the comments that the heroine Hermione has not had many emotional scenes so far, and it is basically impossible to tell that it is cp (please keep it! No cp is fine!!). On the contrary, she and Neville have a good relationship (? Hehe) I am very much looking forward to the next plot (☆_☆)~~

It's very interesting to watch, the main character has a good character, and she doesn't have to be the babysitter for the trio. The protagonist has his own friends and his own plans. The only drawback is that there are too few chapters. There are only 38 chapters, but there are not many words in each chapter. It would be perfect if the author could finish it in one day [Cool] I didn't see the author mentioning that the heroine is Hermione. I really don't want to read a book in which the heroine is Hermione. I have been following it for several days before I saw this in the readers' responses to other comments. I couldn't stand it anymore. I hope the author can put this in the introduction. I thought I clicked in because I didn't have CP. Of course I can accept it if I have CP, but I really can't stand Hermione. I'm already vomiting [face covering]

It's so fun to watch. The protagonist has his own friends and adventures, as well as the same power as the ancient demon king. The ancient demon king defeated the goblin. Should the protagonist's subsequent adventures also involve an epic battle, such as a wolf king and an ancient dragon? Generally speaking, this book is not a babysitter, it is a brand new adventure story that is very exciting.

Beautiful, super beautiful! Carter is a Slytherin, but he has his own friends in every house. He is calm and decisive, not afraid of trouble and does not cause trouble. He is very smart, very self-disciplined, and very independent. He is a super academic! Advance learning is for sure, and there is a bit of a Mary Sue element (not in a derogatory sense, here it refers to the protagonist's ability to see the direction of magic and his super learning ability). At present, it seems that all decent professors like him (except Dumbledore? It seems that he is very worried about Carter) , worried that he would follow Voldemort's path. HP fans will always look at him with a conspiracy theory eye after reading too much. I'm sorry if I'm wrong [currently working on it]) Every member of the roundtable is great, their character and quality are very likable, and they also have their own shining points. Although friendship is not specifically stated here, its presence is demonstrated all the time. A very good HP fanfic, recommended reading. However, readers who like Malfoy may feel a little uncomfortable? After all, he seems to be deflated all the time. And those who like the Gryffindor Triangle should also note that the protagonist Carter has little contact with the protagonist group and has his own small group. There is some content about the adventures of the original protagonist group, but it is less. It mainly revolves around the adventures of Carter and other round table members. Here is the speech of CP: Carter and Spencer, the pair of snake yard partners who were also the first partners, really have an inexplicable feeling and a very tacit understanding. Carter and Spencer feel that they are the leaders of the round table meeting. If the round table meeting is compared to a family, the two of them are a bit like parents (of course, everyone in the round table meeting is equal). Wait, the leader here is just talking about similar situations in group activities). After reading this, I feel that Spencer is becoming more and more "wifey". She will silently take care of Carter, and only for Carter. She also expresses concern for others with Carter instead of expressing it alone. She even has a harmless possessiveness towards Carter. I say this is love! ! …It's so delicious! It's so delicious! ! This is just like Mom and Dad! Please be sure to follow along with your other roundtable friends! ~! [Send heart][Send heart]

Very nice Hogwarts fanfic! Although he is an indigenous protagonist, the author made the character very three-dimensional! She is not a nanny, but she still maintains a good relationship with the trio! It describes the style of Hogwarts students! The only drawback is that there are too few and not enough to see! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! !

The author writes well, but it should be noted that for a novel, an appropriate small climax is meaningful, and some plot conflicts are also unique. Although the Neville incident is barely considered, it is still too little. The progress may need to be accelerated a little, or some more interesting branches may be added. Personally, I feel that the plot is too soothing. It can attract people and retain people, but it is not enough. Forgive me for asking too much. Your work is a rare feast. Above

This book is really good to read. It is a pure experience and pursuit of the magical world. At present, it does not look like other fan fictions that crazily touch the main storyline. I really like this pure magical world view experience and look forward to the author's continued (vigorous) updates. The author has to be a little slow. Currently, it seems that Hermione is the female protagonist, but I am not sure if it is. There are also some signs of other female characters. I don't know what kind of it is currently, but I hope there will be no cp.

It looks good, just this Juan Wang Shuang who studies hard! Update quickly!

Very beautiful (๑• . •๑), Good luck to the author

It's very interesting. I like the protagonist's character and style of dealing with things. It's not a nanny story. It has its own life.

Come on, author, this book is really good. The protagonist has his own ideas, and the description of the plot and daily life is also very good. It's a pity that it has caught up with the big army („• ֊ •„)੭

So far it looks pretty good. The protagonist has his own circle and is not a nanny.

Genius, Aboriginal, Snake Yard, nothing poisonous. Except for participating in the original incident which is a bit abrupt, everything else is okay to me.

It's really good-looking and an excellent fan work. Can there be more of it? I don't like it at all [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's good-looking, not a flashy fanfic.

Apart from the slow updates, there are no shortcomings. I don't know if there is a female protagonist in PS. Anyway, except for occasionally saying a few words to Hermione, most of the other places I saw were with my friends.

The big writing is really nice [like][like][like]

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Slytherin is united [laughing] That's right. They are really united when facing Gryffindor.

It's really good (òωó)👍, ​​come on

Very nice! You small group will do a good job for me! ! !

A very mature-minded orthodox wizard, like it!

Highly praised daily HP fan fiction

Because I really wanted to read the fanfic again for this book, but I couldn't find a meal replacement. The author was still too lazy. . . One hundred thousand updates per day!

It's really good. It's quite interesting. It has its own small group. It feels a bit daily but not procrastinating. It's good-looking and updates quickly [angry][angry][angry] Update the author soon. I like this book [angry] very much. Of course, if you save twenty or thirty chapters and plan to publish them all together, then that's acceptable [Admiration]

It's very good-looking, and the protagonist's character is very likable

It's a super nice novel. Don't Lick the Dog has its own plot and I really like the protagonist in it.