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To be honest, the logic of this book is clear, and the story makes sense. The economic logic in the book is very rigorous and not nonsense. It is a good harem novel. Please give it a good review and hope to continue to work hard.

This is a rare good book. The plot and concept are top-notch, especially the interactive part, which has many highlights and is very down-to-earth. The characters have online IQ. It is very enjoyable to read. It must be praised!

The author of this book has some novel ideas in the Western Fantasy Time Travel novel (Wearing). The main plot line is clear, the characters have online IQs, there are no brainless villains, and there are no deliberate enemies everywhere. The world view is large and reasonable, and there are some foreshadowings and hidden threads well buried. Moreover, the author has specially made maps and data, which is considered to be one of the best in the tomato category (the author is said to be a computer-related major, and the data is very rigorous). The most important thing is that the author updates more! [Like] The portions are large and full, at least five updates a day, and the latest chapter has already signed a covenant with 10 people. [Sneaky smile] And it is eaten very quickly, and it is relatively silky, so it does not make people feel too deliberate. Compared with some of them, there is no description at all. This book at least allows people to know at a glance what to take and not to take. Some of the descriptions [take a closer look]. Recommended by old bookworms, it is worth reading. Publish

The writing is good and the plot is good, especially in the interactive part, which is very eye-catching. The characters are vividly created and interesting. It is worth reading!

At present, the logic of the first 100 chapters is online, and there is no deliberate suppression of combat power. If you give it a thumbs up, there are problems with upgrading because it fails, right? Why does the author feel there is a problem with the fast upgrade? I just hope that the author can maintain the quality and avoid obvious logical errors. For example, if someone who is obviously hostile appears, remember to use the hook to check the information. I have seen many obvious problems, but they just don't take precautions. There are all kinds of small logical errors. Are logical errors necessary just for the sake of the plot? I don't understand why those authors did that. It's obviously good overall, but occasionally there are logical errors. I really can't stand it. Of course, this has not happened in this book for the time being. 5 Consecutive chapters updated with five stars

Five-star praise, the author is simply a tentacle monster, the update speed is top-notch, the plot is also good and interesting, the protagonist is not procrastinating, which is also my favorite type, a little funny, scheming, just the right thing to do, not pretentious, rustling, good to watch, so I give it a five-star praise

Shuhuang saw someone recommending it and thought it was quite cliche. Unexpectedly, it was unexpectedly exciting, compact and not procrastinating, and the plot was full of ups and downs. The logic was rigorous and there were no flaws. It was really good!

We are recruiting, the salary is good, time travel, rebirth and delivery system are included. Due to the excessive number of new small worlds, there is a serious shortage of time travellers, so time travelers are now being recruited, regardless of gender, old or young, on a first-come, first-served basis. Click like👍🏻 and you will get the system. (Try it, it's free anyway)

If you can survive it, or accept the slave setting, you can watch it The rest of the plot is okay, but the emotional scene may be unacceptable to those who cannot stand it because of the pure relationship between slave and master. Maybe this is a characteristic of Western fantasy? Lord + North + Travel + Slave Harem All in all, it's quite satisfactory and can be watched. It can be used as a change of appetite, provided that you can accept the setting of a slave harem. I personally feel comfortable with the pace of Upgrade. A good article should be fast-paced. In Tomato Fantasy, it is already very good. It doesn't waste too much space on the background story. Some funny jokes are ok, and you can read it even if you don't understand the jokes.

Recommended, quite unexpected, more exciting than expected, many twists and turns, smoother and less abrupt, more comfortable and enjoyable to watch!

It's a good book. It's a bit annoying in the early stage, but everyone has read Tomato, so please be considerate. It's free anyway, and the author is possessed by a typewriter. Basically, he updates it more than 3 times a day. It has surpassed all Tomato authors. I highly recommend it.

It took two or three days to write. Finish reading this novel. Very well written. There are some little bits of poison in it. For example: "Let the boiling sheep live with the protagonist." Also, I feel like the gold coins are given to the slaves too much. None of this is a problem. I've seen author rankings. Your level is definitely among the top 100. I hope you keep writing. As for, the driving plot. This is essential for good writing. You don't need to write it so clearly. Use metaphors to write these driving episodes. Use more , similar-form and phonetic characters instead. Overall review, well written. It has nine points of potential as a cool novel. I hope the author can keep writing. As for the driving plot, you can read this one. "The daughter-in-law school beauty is too aloof, she wants to hug me every day." The car was going very fast. I went into the dark room at first, and then came out. "In another world, buy a cute cat girl at the beginning" These are the kind that often drive. Finally, I wish the author a happy life and happiness every day. I also hope this book doesn't end badly. If the writing is slow or interrupted, then I will save the book for leave. Come on! Author

Overall, I like it very much. The mercenaries in the Dawn Arena have lewd looks and "just look at them without missing a piece of meat." I don't have a cuckold habit, so I don't need to say such offensive words.

I've seen a lot of this type. This book is very good, the main character is not a stupid type. My reading may be different from others. I usually first look at the protagonist and his character. Watching the plot

If you like this kind of subject matter, I strongly recommend it. You can say that the setting is average and the plot is average, but it is not poisonous and a lot more enjoyable. The most important thing is that this is a book with a minimum of three updates and an upper limit of six updates. You have to believe that 80% of the reason why you are not satisfied with the book is because the author does not update it enough.

The protagonist is very charming and intelligent, the plot is also very clever, the logic is clear, it works!

It's still okay, and there are flaws. For example, there are several pictures of Hill who are always talking about "younger brother". It feels like he is shouting there just for the sake of calling him "younger brother", which is a bit annoying. It's not good to give other characters more roles. The main thing about "younger brother" is the character's lines. The other problems are not big. It is a good book. I will update it soon.

At present, it seems that it has the potential to become a masterpiece. All kinds of jokes are played quickly, and it is not brainless. It stitches together some classic settings, develops and operates smoothly, and is relatively relaxed and humorous. I hope it's a magic sword style that cultivates both tactics and tactics.

It's a very novel plot, not cliche at all, and it's comfortable to watch.

It's beautiful, good luck to the author. The only drawback is that it is a bit flat and not rich and exciting enough. I hope that we can add some possibilities and lay the foundation for some growth points. To set the stage or something. Or I wish it could be more diverse. Currently we can only recruit maids and develop territories. (Personally, I feel that writing novels and developing technology are a bit too homogeneous. Magic modeling was better before) Moreover, the linkage between equipment, skills, maid characteristics and territory development can be enriched. However, there are many things to consider when writing this way, which may be troublesome. And it seems that the protagonist can have all professions? Anyway, let the author think about it himself. I will simply share my own opinions. Personally, I feel that it is a little worse than the Happy Bean Baron next door, but more importantly, it has fast updates and large quantities. So we must strongly support it.

A very good book! You can tell by looking at it that the author put a lot of preparation into writing this book! Moreover, the plot is smooth and not draggy, so I have no problem watching it myself! A pretty good Western fantasy novel!

It's quite good. The heroines are not too weird and have their own personalities. The protagonist is also treated simply and not too much. There aren't any big problems with the plot, it's a minor masterpiece. However, the author should keep an eye on it. There should not be too many harems. Otherwise, when there are a bunch of harems in the back, some people will always become vases with no role and no plot. Especially the harem in the front has no drama at all in the back. I personally think this is a poisonous point. After all, it is good for everyone in the protagonist group to be active, rather than too many people and many people will lose the role. No, it's a bit toxic later on, and Ning's childhood sweetheart appears, but luckily, nothing happens between them. Ning is loyal to the protagonist, but the protagonist keeps this love rival, which is a bit poisonous. If you don't care, it's okay. If you mind, just abandon it, brothers.

This is my first time to write a book review. In the western fantasy genre, this book is really worth reading. The author is very good at adapting to the reader's mood. Except for some chapters that make the reader cry, the plot is neither urgent nor slow, and the character portrayal also has the author's own style. I like it very much. I like the author's rigorous numerical system very much in the article. There is a complete numerical simulation on both population, economy and combat power (maybe because I am also a science student [laughs]). I really recommend it. I haven't seen this kind of book in 🍅 for a long time that makes me want to catch up on updates every day after reading a hundred chapters. The previous books were just read when I remembered them, but I only read half of the new books when I didn't think about it. The content will not be like other Western fantasy novels that completely use the European medieval system, making it incomprehensible to people who have not studied it. It will not look brainless like Shuangwen, which makes people feel comfortable. Each chapter is very detailed, and it is difficult to read every chapter. I also wish the author great success in researching and passing the paper [laughter]

A relatively good fantasy novel. It has a novel aspect and a relatively rigorous logic. There are no major poisonous points. It is still very good. Good reviews.

The story is told clearly and logically. The characters are also well developed. Although this protagonist also starts from the bottom, he does not have the humiliating feeling of starting from the bottom like other novels. It's quite fun to watch. [You taste carefully][You taste carefully][You taste carefully][You taste carefully]

The Western Fantasy is well written. The most important thing is Hammer. I didn't expect it. Damn, there are Hammer guys everywhere. The most important thing is that they are not cool for the sake of fun, and they are not yellow for the sake of being yellow. The most important thing is that the villain is sinister but not brainless, and he does not upgrade randomly. It's good.

How to say it? This book gives me the feeling that it is a relatively bland different world upgrade novel, but it is precisely this blandness that makes this book good. Upgrading step by step, developing step by step, there are foreshadowings and small waves. It is easier for people to read it, and a book that makes people read it is a good book.

It's okay, not bad. There are only two small drawbacks that I personally think. One is that the gold content of the gold finger is a bit low and will be countered by the curse of the brave. The second is that the protagonist's woman will be targeted by men from time to time. It is the maid who described herself as being targeted by the nobles. There is no sense of security. The author had better be careful and don't cheat.

I rarely read this kind of Western fantasy time-travel novel. I clicked on it and found that it is quite to my liking. The main reason is that the author's writing style is very vivid. The whole plot seems much more vivid. Don't miss it if you pass by.

What a wonderful stroke, so smooth and silky