On Becoming a Twilight Maiden

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Okay, okay, the author's writing style is finally not so depressing, I hope it remains

❤️ The male protagonist is a cold academic tyrant, and the female protagonist is a simple scumbag. ❤️ The author writes very well and the plot description is also very delicate. He has written a lot of foreshadowing so far, and also written about the pain of youth and the psychological changes brought about by his family of origin. (It will probably be a bit sadistic in the later stages). Although the initial preparation is a little long and the progress is slow, the emotional changes of the male protagonist are also gradually expressed. There are many psychological descriptions. It is estimated that the length can be longer. If you can read it, it is still a good book [already planted] I hope the author can stick to it.

The author's writing style is as delicate as ever, and the scene about the sea of ​​rapeseed flowers in Baima Village is truly unforgettable. It doesn't seem like a novel, but a real story of two people. It really shows in my eyes. Compared with the previous book, it is less sad and more hilarious. It is not as depressing as the previous book, but it bursts out with the youthful vitality, lightness and comedy that was rare in the previous book. The two books have their own age and characteristics. You can find that the author is not limited to the last book, but can see progress and changes. The structure of the article is like that of a TV series. He doesn't talk about it day by day, but jumps around. It can only be said that this leads to some plot connections that may be abrupt or a bit unsmooth (like the plot during the winter vacation, or the chapter about studying the club in a large classroom). But generally speaking, it doesn't have a great impact on the look and feel, but it would be better if it could be improved. Then in terms of characters, it's the same as the previous book. The portrayal of the heroine's mentality after the personality change is particularly realistic. After all, a normal person will definitely be resistant and afraid of the sudden change in identity. On this basis, this book focuses more on describing the differences in habits with other girls. The change in the male protagonist's personality is not sudden, but gradually changed over the course of more than 100 chapters. In other words, the two of them are actually influencing each other and changing each other unconsciously. Although the plot is light and funny as mentioned above, there are also many complicated emotional lines mixed in, and these together constitute such a wonderful story, including laughter and sadness, abstraction and seriousness. Like a famous painting, it not only has gorgeous yellow, but also blue that represents sadness, and black that represents unknown, but they are perfectly combined to create this painting. The "passers-by" in the story are not only the promoters of the plot, but also the painters of Lin Wan's colorful memories in the world of the novel. He is also the painter among our readers. Of course, as I said, it is similar to the previous novel, so in terms of characterization, I feel it is still a bit... But I'm not sure whether it's because I didn't watch it carefully enough. I feel that Lin Wan's feelings for Gu Bei were portrayed too hastily, without too much thinking about the character itself. (Self-feeling) For example, after Gu Bei confessed his love in Baima Village, all I noticed was that Lin Wan learned to smoke and avoided feelings. Then after returning, the plot jumps directly to the beginning of school. After school started, Lin Wan's attitude toward Gu Bei changed from being a friend and brother to being shy, ignorant, and slightly in love. Rather, the transformation process should have taken place in the skipped month or so, which resulted in me always having a very abrupt feeling about the relationship between the two of them. Therefore, I also hope that this question can be revised, so as not to fall into the footsteps of the previous book. Twilight Maiden, what a beautiful meaning, and what a sad prophecy. The dusk will eventually dissipate, but before it dissipates, he can show the most beautiful scenery to everyone and imprint profound memories into everyone's heart! (The above opinions are purely subjective. Mainly because I really like this novel and the story! I also hope that the author will continue to work hard! Come on!)

This book feels really different from other sexual stories. The protagonist does not have a very abrupt fall into female form, and there is no system or other force to advance the plot. It just feels that the sweetness is very natural and not that kind of industrial saccharine. Finally, I hope the author can continue writing. I will always support you.

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, after reading about 40 chapters, my aunt couldn't help but smile. It was either a smile that stretched from the corner of her mouth to the back of her ears, or a smile that came from the bottom of her heart. Different from the previous work, the first part of the previous work tells a lot of stories about Jiang Li, making sweets out of the bitter story. The first part of this work is filled with a happy and relaxed atmosphere, which makes people laugh. But when I saw the "light abuse" in the title, I still couldn't help but want to give the author a knife. The previous work was marked as "light abuse", please give me a knife soon😡. Thank you for writing such a beautiful novel

Bian Jiao is the treasure of Bian Wen, and the ancient method of Bian Jiao is also the treasure of Bian Jiao. After reading the first few chapters, I can feel that the author's writing skills have improved compared to the previous book, and there are not so many blunt plots. I hope the author can continue to work hard 🤭 I haven't read such refreshing writing in a long time. I highly recommend it. The subject matter of this novel is an extremely rare high school daily life. It can be said that there are not many copies of it in the entire tomato. The characters of the heroine and the hero are opposite to the previous book. The silent and introverted one became the hero. As for the heroine, after thinking for a long time, I could only find words like funny and bitch to describe it 🤦 All in all, it's highly recommended, but since it's about high school romance, Tomato has limited circulation, and the author's updates are very irregular, so there's really nothing I can do about it because there are so few people reading 🤦 Some people are really weird, but even if you read ten chapters, you won't say that the protagonist's personality is incompatible with boys. Let's not talk about whether the protagonist's personality is like a boy or not. It is a poisonous point. In your book review, you said that a protagonist who is very outgoing in the entire Tomato Marriage does not have a personality like a boy and then ran away with a low score. It's very annoying @

Dear author, can you not be like the previous book? You shouldn't be abused lightly! I cried to death. The key is that I watched it while listening to the song. I could write something warmer😭😭😭

It's a pretty good transgender novel, but the heroine's character has not yet transformed into a real female character. The male protagonist's confession should be the starting point of all conflicts. The two will go to the same university and there will be many stories during this period. For example, the sudden appearance of the second male lead, the return of the male protagonist's childhood sweetheart, the exposure of the female protagonist's gender change, etc. I hope to see the heroine's feminine transformation as soon as possible. Of course, the current character of this good brother is also quite interesting. But the title is "Changing Marriage", so there will definitely be no surprises. It's okay if the author writes slowly. Don't suddenly skip the college stage and then end it in more than ten chapters. Write slowly and I will always support it.

It's a very good book. I really like the male and female protagonists. Among all the marriage-changing novels, this one made me the most comfortable to read. But why is there no update button? [What] 666 stuck