
Xiaozhuma Cried Again
小竹马他又哭了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 575k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Youth Sweet Romance
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 5mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
10.1kReads
8.6Score
1.2kShelves
260Chapters
2.6kListens
547.6kReads · all time
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The Younger Brother Likes the Older Sister Who Is Not His Biological Child
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The Female Protagonist Lives in the Male Protagonist's House and Is Particularly Afraid of the Male Protagonist. the Male Protagonist Has Plans for the Female Protagonist.
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I Beg the Heroine to Be with Her Mortal Enemy! ! ! Kneel Down, Beg, Please, Please! ! !
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The Male Protagonist Is Extremely Possessive and Has Been Coveting the Female Protagonist Since He Was a Child.
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The Heroine's Mother Is a Servant of the Hero's Family and the Heroine Also Lives in the Hero's House.
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The Heroine Stayed in the Hero's House When She Was a Child. the Hero Kicked the Heroine Out and Reunited a Few Years Later.
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Sourness and Sourness
I want to watch content similar to "Wedding in Beijing". Sour feeling, secret love, long planned
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Novel That I Can't Quit
I want to watch something similar to "Three Years Away". Various themes
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It's a very realistic novel. Although the heroine's temperament is indeed not as ambitious as everyone hopes and she is cowardly, I think the character brought about by her personal growth environment is nothing to criticize. She is indeed cowardly, but it realistically reflects the current situation of many ordinary girls on campus.
Very nice! The heroine Li Qinglan written by the author is really cute. She is a bit of a tomboy and has a very quiet personality, but she is not a perfect character. She is very real and sometimes weak, but she will not give in when she really touches the bottom line. Moreover, the baby girl will also grow up and will be firm in her goals and keep working hard. The baby girl is really great! I really want to meet her in real life and be good friends with her. If we can develop a deeper relationship, I think I can be a partner with her! She is simply my ideal type! I'm even a little jealous that the characters in the book can interact with her The author's writing is very good. It can be seen that she loves the heroine very much, because I fell in love with her from the heroine in her writing. Can I ask about the subsequent development? Will you meet up with friends from your hometown in the future? I hope the heroine baby can have more good friends, and I hope more people can love her! PS: If the author feels uncomfortable seeing my speech as a dream girl, you can delete it, I'm sorry > People < Author, why do you always make the female protagonist feel wronged? Moreover, I feel that the male protagonist is a little inconsistent with the early character design, and I feel that the female protagonist has been compromising. There is also a chapter in the recent update that says that if the male protagonist is hit by a car and dies, the female protagonist will become a sinner for the ages. Why do you say that? , I thought I had had enough when the heroine was wronged in the early stage. The subsequent plot is that the hero pursues the heroine, and the heroine lives a happy life with friends and a lover by her side. The development of the subsequent plot is different from what I imagined. I feel aggrieved watching it.
Nice! Nowadays, there are very few authors who write in the first person. It feels like a personal diary, and the narrative style is very comfortable and eloquent. There are not many exaggerated descriptions of appearance. It is very simple. Although it is very ordinary, it is also very sweet. Now I see that the heroine Qinglan is going to Haicheng to attend high school, and the hero begged to come in tears [face covering] I look forward to more daily life of the male and female siblings in the future [admiration]
I know what the plot will be, but I just can't help but want to watch it (I rarely watch the one-person perspective). I guess this is the mystery of him. He has a more sense of immersion and can see things from the heroine's perspective. If he is not smart enough, he can only see what the heroine sees. It is like experiencing a simulation game by himself. He is not very aware of other people's emotions. It is not like having a God's perspective. In fact, everyone is ordinary people. Nowadays, many trolls probably think "I know what is right" and criticize it, but there are some things that you can't understand without being there. It's quite magical, good-looking, I want to see it.
The writing is good, and the feeling of the heroine being a coward is very immersive. I almost got mad at the coward.
Very good, the rhythm is very comfortable, and the characters are also very three-dimensional Basically, I don't abuse or humiliate women. It's not a big deal to me. Introverted and sincere, the academically dominant female protagonist + the white and black male protagonist. It's fun for the two of them to test each other.
After reading it several times, I was dissuaded by the title. Later, I saw that the ratings were good and I gave it a try. Unexpectedly, I found a good book. Qinglan is really nice, sensible, motivated, considerate, and tenacious. Although the article is written in the first person, there is no sense of discomfort at all. Instead, it leads the reader to grow step by step from Qinglan's heart. Qinglan is tolerant, understanding, and kind to her friends, parents, and the benefactor's family. It's hard not to fall in love with such a girl. What's especially rare is that she is not a virgin, and she will have her own bottom line and fight back. When falling in love with the benefactor, I understand the low self-esteem and hesitation and worry at the beginning, but when she really figured it out, she took action immediately. This is really great. I thought it would be a lot of trouble like other stories. In addition: Although the author rarely describes Qinglan's appearance directly, from various details and aspects, I can see that Qinglan is a very beautiful girl. When I read the article, I kept thinking of Li Qin's face, which is very comfortable, beautiful, bookish, gentle yet angular, tolerant and tempered. Hahaha
The heroine's character is so real, so real that it's heart-wrenching. I have to say that the writing style is very good. The suffocating feeling of the first-person perspective of the love between a wealthy family and ordinary people is so strong after reading it. I don't understand why the two protagonists obviously have a sweet relationship, but I just felt suffocated throughout the whole process. Maybe it's because there is always an imbalance between the two. No matter whether it starts or ends, only the one with the upper hand can push it. In the later period, the female protagonist even questioned that she was not as affectionate as the male protagonist. In fact, she, who was in a weaker position, had already given everything. The male protagonist denied her, and she also denied herself. It was like mentally castrating dysmenorrhea and forgetting the pain in order to achieve the purpose of emotional hemorrhaging.
This book is really good. Can you please ask the author to write some additional stories about Shen Yu's first-person perspective after finishing this book? I want to see what Shen Yu thinks about this black sesame glutinous rice ball and how he uses his little ninety-nine. It's quite interesting hahhh
It's very interesting and real. The female protagonist is not a perfect character. The novel comes from life, but is higher than life. The only thing I dislike about the whole book is that the male protagonist always loses contact and never responds to messages. He always takes the initiative. Dad, can you love the heroine more? I feel that the heroine is so cautious in her love. The heroine has nothing, not even her parents who love each other. The hero knows her and her friends very well, but the heroine knows very little about him. From the first person point of view, it seems that the hero cannot live without the heroine, but I feel that it is actually the heroine who cannot live without the hero.
It's very interesting. The author's writing style is very good. He writes the heroine's psychology very delicately, and the characters of the people around him are also very vivid. The male protagonist is also very cute. I highly recommend it. This is the first time I have read a novel from a first-person perspective, and I insist on following it. [Blow Kiss] Looking forward to it
The description of the psychological activities of the characters in the book is very detailed, and people can't help but think of their own past while reading. The description of the characters, appearance, personality, preferences and other characteristics of different age groups is very fascinating and wonderful!
When you read more and more books, you become more and more lazy. It's really good to read. It's a very comfortable way of telling. The plot is not contradictory at all. The psychological description is very natural. I really like this kind of narrative method like line drawing.
So far, it is very good. The psychological activities are very rich, delicate and real. I rarely read novels from the first person perspective, because it especially tests the writing skills. If you write well, you will have a sense of immersion and a magical experience of growing up together in the book. If you write poorly, you will be embarrassed, feel stupid, and can't help but curse people. Therefore, the author probably has other vests, haha~(¯▽¯~)~, but I don't want it to be too long, which is like 50w or 100w at every turn. The writing is pure water at the end. I write for the sake of writing. Oh my god, don't disappoint me o(╥╥)o
Like Hey hey hey hey hey so pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱 So handsome😘It is God, it is my rose that lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist and I am So cute that tears won't stop. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people.
After reading so many books, this is the first time I experience the life of the heroine in the text from the first perspective. It is very novel and strange. In the heroine's perspective, we do not have a God's perspective, so to a certain extent, we can understand the heroine's inner thoughts and witness her love and hate relationship with the hero, and the final success. It is very real, immersive, and also very realistic. Some unignorable details and various unavoidable trivial matters in life are presented from the first perspective. It allows us to see the process of two people with different statuses entering the marriage hall after going through various hardships. It is a novel, a reality, and a portrayal of our fantasy of a better future [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]
This is the first time I read a first-person novel on Tomato. This novel gave me the feeling that I was reading a youth romance novel from more than ten years ago. It just so happened that the background of this book was also more than ten years ago. The novel was written very delicately and realistically. It reminded me of Xin Yiwu's novel "So You're Still Here". The style is very similar, and it depicts the story of a girl in her student days. The little thoughts and twists and turns between Jian and his classmates are well written. I want to say something but I don't know what to say when I raise my head. I feel that there is a breath that is held in my heart and cannot be released. It is sour and astringent. It makes people want to read it a second time but dare not read it a second time. This novel is very likely to be published. Of course, I also hope that the author will publish it [Blow Kiss]
I originally thought I might not be able to read it when I saw it in the first person, but I didn't expect it to be really good. I think it's very delicately written and different from what I've seen before. Teacher, please work harder and update it!
The psychological description is very delicate, and the attitude of the heroine when encountering various things creates a very three-dimensional image of the heroine. It is not a silly, sweet and dull setting of a traditional childhood sweetheart campus novel, but a real character created in such a family situation. She is observant, thoughtful, often hesitant, has many worries, and will work hard to become a sensible child who can make her parents worry-free. When I had no feelings for Shen Yu, when I sensed Shen Yu's increasingly obvious romantic affection for me, I didn't pretend to be stupid but chose to keep a distance. This was a very practical thought and action that was very relatable. Yeah, actually I haven't finished reading the updated one yet, but I really want to praise it! ^-^
This title is too dissuasive! In fact, it's not really a nanny at all. It opens on a campus, and it's written in such a unique way that it feels like a campus. I almost never read the first person novel before because the author's article is so touching. I have read all the author's past long articles in the past few days [face covering] [face covering] I really like it! ! How much do you want to delete the comment?
It's very good to watch, it's really good to watch, but it has a BL plot, so I canceled it. If you don't mind, you can watch it.
It's very real and very beautiful. This should be the first first-person novel I've read besides Chinese textbooks. It was a masterpiece when I was a student. It's really beautiful (I'm not saying it won't be beautiful after I go to college). The rest of it doesn't quite suit my taste, so please give it a thumbs up to the author! We are destined to be together [Sending Hearts]
The plot is logical and not brainless, and the characters of the female supporting characters are also very full. If you think about it from others' perspective, everyone has their own shining point. Before going to bed, I casually clicked on a new book, which was like opening Pandora's box. I read a little and wanted to read a little more, but ended up staying up late to read the updated book before I was willing to go to bed. I rarely write book reviews, but it is so good that I wrote this string of words. Finally, I would like to emphasize that this is the best novel I have read recently!
The author's writing style is really quite good. I don't like reading first-person novels because I always feel that the first-person perspective makes me feel confined to the body of "me" in the book. But I have finished reading this book completely. However, the first person can indeed better understand the heroine's emotions and understand her actions. It will not make the heroine stupid from a God's perspective like a third person book. Like, like [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
The heroine's adolescent emotions are very delicately portrayed. Because of the huge gap in social status between her and the hero's family, her cautious and sensitive emotional expression of inferiority complex is also very good. If I had to describe it, it felt more like reading a "period drama". The story is told smoothly, very simple, not Mary Sue, continue to read the rest
It's pretty good. It's a very realistic article. It feels like I'm watching a current TV series. The writing style is very delicate and the writing is very detailed. I haven't read this type of writing for a long time. I've read too many Golden Finger novels and it's good to try some youth urban literature. It feels like the people in it are real to me. The timidity, hesitation and retreat of the heroine are all flesh and blood... Especially the text quotes real place names, such as Shanghai, Jiangsu, Hainan, Shenzhen and Harbin, which gives me the illusion that they are in the same timeline as me~ I still really like the previous campus story line. Although there was a lot of fighting and fighting, the young feelings were really pure. I always felt that the relationship between the heroine, Lin Xiaoqin and Pan Xinyan at that time was not reflected in the later part. I cried when I saw the confrontation between the heroine and Xiaoqin after the parent-teacher meeting. Even though they reconciled later, I felt so sad. And Pan Xinyan, the author, you really made her look like a lesbian in your early descriptions! ! I really like this piece of lily line. Although she was given a school embarrassment statement later, I really feel that she should like the heroine hahahaha The male protagonist has always been a good character, always protecting the female protagonist, and has been chasing her emotionally. If the female protagonist escapes, he will hit the target straight away. No wonder he has washing powder!
It's good to watch, but it was too early to have a relationship and it's a bit hard to recover from. Hey, I still prefer them to misunderstanding and pulling [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh] Don't blame me. The main author wrote the pull in the early stage. I really like it, I feel good about it, and the characters are so distinct.
I rarely follow books. This one is high-quality youth literature. The writing is smooth and the emotions are delicate. The author's writing is very beautiful. The hero and heroine hope that the final ending will be a strong man and a strong woman, and will not be influenced by others. There will be no misunderstandings. After the update, Qinglan is a strong woman, not a teacher, so they can wait for each other on their respective paths to success.
It's quite interesting. After reading Chapter 60, what really touched me was the friendship between the heroines! Jealousy can also happen in friendships. I felt very sorry for Xiaoqin at first, but after they finally talked about it, I felt sad again! Xiaoqin, are you really planning on being friends with the heroine Baobao? ! ! ! I don't believe it! ! ! Wow wow wow, I still like the hint of sincerity in the pretense! The author's writing is really great! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Super good-looking, childhood sweetheart, slightly sour. The male protagonist loves the female protagonist very much and never gives up. The heroine's situation and handling methods are really like people in real life (ordinary families, they feel that there is a big gap between the male protagonist's family background and they are not worthy), but the female protagonist also works hard and tries to catch up with the gap without giving up on the male protagonist.