Xingtie: Why Does Life Fall Asleep?

It is a good book, and the writing is very delicate, but the two sisters are too tangential. There is no main plot at the moment. They are all original plots, but there will also be a small plot of interaction with the main characters (almost killing them). There is no system or anything like that, and there is no harem. Dark Lopus Cero is Unit 2. Its personality is similar to that of a mechanical life, looking for the meaning of existence, and not taking human form. I doubt that some readers are looking forward to the meaning of Lops taking human form, and will they accept a harem? I think there is a high probability that this book will not have a female protagonist, so don't expect that kind of pure love, the female protagonist can leave. Looking forward to the meeting between the main plot and Liu Ying. The two sisters are just a little poisonous. Their characters will make readers feel a little uncomfortable. Is there a plot to get rid of them? Looking forward to the later main plot. Children, please wait until the author writes the main plot before reading. I don't know why, but I feel confused (◇) The main plot of the protagonist really doesn't take up much, and then it is taken up by the two sisters at least 2/3, and then it will give you a feeling that first the two sisters tried their best, but they couldn't finish the thing, and then the protagonist passed by and the matter was solved. In this case, it is good to have a faster pace, but the key is that the author wrote this paragraph to make the thief grow stronger. This caused me to sometimes skip reading, and then jump to the protagonist's appearance, and then the protagonist solved a small thing, and then continued to support the supporting role sisters. The main plot of the sister, and then I read a little bit and had to jump again, and then the author wrote a lot of family dramas, and I think the writing was average. The doctor was called Dotorel, and he didn't inherit the habit of having many doppelgangers. It's hard for me to imagine how he hasn't been targeted until now. The author is better at writing kind of fighting scenes and the growth of the protagonist. Anyway, my suggestion is to wait until the author writes the main plot and read the main plot. I am a little curious, where will the Tanghuo sisters be after the main plot? And the author's writing style is actually pretty good. Really, don't look at me complaining so much. It's all my personal opinion. Everyone's preferences are different. If you think it's good, you can continue reading. Later, when you step into the fairy boat, the plot is okay. Let's see what happens next. Stay tuned.

It's very interesting. To be honest, it could have a heroine, just the Pell sisters, don't add others. Otherwise, if the protagonists are fighting each other with low-level codes, I guess I don't understand love and life because I don't understand it. It depends on how the author writes it.

It's good-looking, fits the character design of Kuro, and is much prettier than the one by Belial [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

If there are different levels of slow heating, you should be the only one, right? Coldness, fetters, soul, loss, obsession, pursuit, failure. Dark Lopsiro. If you have time, you can watch it, it's very good, but if you are looking for a fast-paced plot and don't have time, you can just taste it briefly. Message to the author: Grandmaster, I actually think that given your character creation ability, you can try an original worldview. You can try the theme of someone from the Ultra Universe going to another world, because if you are a fan, we probably know what the character is like, or you can also travel quickly. —— (◦ˉ ˘ ˉ◦)

It's very interesting. The author must work harder to write it. Hei Luo's description is already interesting, but based on my experience in reading books, the author should write a big sword [smile], which will have a strong impact and make Hei Luo's change in attitude towards life more reasonable. Point, and there are only more than 100 pictures, so don't worry about low ratings. The ones that scored 9 points before with less than 100 pictures were Black Tower and Prison White on the top list. If this book can be completed smoothly, it will definitely become a unique color in Honkai fan literature.

How can I put it this way? It's very interesting to watch. There are no obvious loopholes in the plot. The emotional scenes are properly sewn together. The writing can be considered excellent. However, I feel that very few people will watch it. I feel that there will be no more updates in the future... So, author, please don't stop updating! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

It's already pretty good, but it doesn't have much to do with Bengtie, and the description of Lops should account for about 40% (it feels more comfortable, after all, if it's less, it won't take up either)

It's a very good book. The character settings don't look OOC at all. The plot is gradual and the author has laid a lot of foreshadowing in the book. It makes people want to read it. I also respect the original work very much. There is no blindly changing the plot or adding random settings. It is the best Bentie Ultra fanfic I have ever read so far. I'm really looking forward to the subsequent appearance of other Ultra Warriors and the protagonist. It feels a bit like it. It's that feeling. You know, Al, who doesn't know what love is, wants to understand the thing called the heart and find the value of his existence. Everything he knows at the beginning is just according to the program. After possessing and experiencing human emotions, what choice will he "himself" make? This is how it felt to me at first... Now, I just hope that his important people can come back... Also, the author's description of the character's psychology is so good, I can't help but read it. It's really heartbreaking~ Every time I think of their master and apprentice's daily life and interactions, I feel very sad and regretful. It's hard to describe. My mood when I was watching it, I can only say that I cried while watching it. Finally, I hope the author can give the child a happy ending... This book isn't going to be finished, is it? Let me go, is it really over? Pity...

In the latest chapter, the protagonist's role has gradually increased. To be honest, everyone came to see the invincible protagonist sweeping the universe and chatting about daily life. But so far, the two sisters have played too many roles. Fortunately, the author has brought back the protagonist's role. What do we readers want to see? It's the blood flowing into the mouth of the river! ! Anyway, according to Beng Tie's latest world view, the protagonist's combat power is not only that of the Star God, but also the strongest command under the Star God. At least it's much more awesome than the one written next door, Hyperjetton. At least it's not OOC. The one next door, Hyperpageton, made me want to vomit. The whole hot-blooded male protagonist is completely OOC. It's embarrassing to be able to hang out with three little guys. I don't know where the characters of Hyperjedon and Fear have gone. Haha, it's funny when I think about it.

The work is novel and interesting, the characters are well-shaped, the emotional output is rich, the structure is complete, the logic is clear, the writing is excellent, the description is close to reality, and the image is vivid. The writing is concise, beautiful and delicate, and the story line has ups and downs and is extremely exciting. It is written with a sharp attitude, which goes straight to the heart, with a lot of love (for readers)... I was amazed but had no words to express it. The author writes very well. Wish you a safe journey

It's pretty good. I saw in the introduction at the beginning that there were self-designed characters, and I only joined the Iron Break plot in the middle, which I thought would be quite ugly. But now that I've seen it, it's pretty good. The characters are not cosplayers, and the self-designed characters are also well described. Most of the parts that are not well described are acceptable. I feel like it changed a bit later on. I originally thought it should be about Dark Lopus Sero gaining humanity and slowly becoming a real Ultra Warrior and establishing bonds with humans. After Chapter 185, it turned into revenge.

Looks good, looking forward to meeting Screwgum [laughing evilly] [like]

To be honest, it's good-looking, but it's not the same as the main plot I thought. I initially thought that Lao Luo would gradually awaken with the protagonist group and become Maou [face-covering], looking at the previous memories, but he turned out to be a big villain [face-covering] [face-covering]

It feels really good, although the setting is a bit cliché? No, it just feels like this plot is very familiar, but the plot description is still very good and the characterization is not bad! Very comfortable feeling!

I like the subject matter very much. It's very comfortable to watch so far. I just hope that the cosmic beings in the novel will not be messed up later [laughs]

It's good to watch. It's four stars for now because it's not finished. The plot of the first two sisters was a bit slow. I didn't have the patience to read it and skipped two chapters. After entering the space station, it started to become interesting. Luofu started to take off. I cried a lot of snot and tears in the middle. In the latest chapter, I still feel like I have a heart attack (┯_┯). Sure enough, tragedy is to tear apart beautiful things for you to see. After reading so many Bengtie fanfics, this is the first one that made me hate Aha so much. The last one was Laigushi. To be honest, my emotions have never been so volatile during the Ompharos plot. Of course, it may have something to do with the perspective. If MiHoYo kills Sansan Heng Ji Zi and Lao Yang in the future, he might feel uncomfortable... Sure enough, he can't sympathize with the pain unless tragedy happens to him or his relatives and friends, alas (๑•́ω ก ๑)

The oppressive feeling written by Dark Lops is so cool

Yes, it is in line with Ote's concept of understanding, feeling, and looking for "love", big love, small love, and love for all living beings. Why does life sleep? Life sleeps because of fragility! But life is bright because it is short! Like a flash of fireworks! But green and gorgeous!

It's super cool. Dark Lopus Cero Unit 2. I'm very curious about what it will look like. I just saw the Xianzhou movie. If it's the same as Zero, it would be more powerful. () I feel like the protagonist can be called Lopus Cero after he completely accepts the light?

Very well written And it's not too fancy I hope it will continue and not end up being bad. The protagonist is a little pitiful😭😭😭 As a robot, Zero's shadow, he is just an impostor. When he needed a miracle, what he got was ridicule and teasing from the gods (this irony reached an even higher peak when Hoshi received a real miracle and became Ultraman Galaxy) (After reading the ending:) After chasing it for more than half a year, I will tell you my thoughts. Dark Lopus' power itself is neutral. It will not automatically move towards justice, nor will it slide towards evil. The real choice is the "person" who uses the power. When an intelligent life is weak or inhumane, he does not have to face this problem. For example, at the beginning of the work Dark Lopus Sero, the theme is a story about mechanically acquiring a heart. When a being with a heart still has strong power, then I have to answer this question: How should I use this power in the first place? Dark Lopusero's answer is very direct. I want everyone to have happiness, but there is always a moment when happiness is lost, so he chose to add eternity in front of happiness. It can be said that Dark Lopusero's paranoia is the necessary "price" for gaining a heart. It is because he has a heart that he knows how to regret loss and pursue perfection; and it is precisely because of this Gentle expectations have given rise to almost extreme ways of acting. Human nature has given rise to evil and kindness, and obsession has given rise to evil planets. They always advise people to let go of the past and rush to the future. But in my opinion, the future of abandoning the past is endless suffering. All the good things in the world are fleeting. If you just indulge in the past, you will also miss the way forward. Mr. Xing advises people to let go of the past and rush to the future, but in my opinion, the future of abandoning the past is endless suffering. All the beauty in the world is fleeting. If you just indulge in the past, you will also miss the way forward. ◢▸●◂◣

The character creation is good, and it really feels like writing a dark Lopsero. The growth of the characters is also okay. The author updates quickly, and the number of words in each chapter is quite large (at its peak, one updated chapter was about 4600 to 4800). The future is promising.

The plot is smooth and the writing is natural, very good

I like watching Ultra and Bentie, and I find it very suitable for my taste, and the protagonist is also a tsundere omnic (*¯¯*)

First of all, the plot: it is very well written. The protagonist, as a mechanical being, witnesses human beings, life, etc. In this world. He takes his time and becomes a human step by step. Although the Pei sisters said that the shaping is a bit crooked in the middle, it is not bad. The description of the apprentice later is more detailed and better. The problem is the ending. I am very curious about what the author planned? Then there is the old problem of integrating the world view, combat power: okay, the protagonist has the same combat power as Zero Zero in 2009, not as good as Star God, but the rest is okay. Although I have an opinion on this point, I think the protagonist should only have weak points and omnipotence, but it is okay. I am more worried that the author really takes the statement that he has been nerfed after the 2009 game seriously, then it will not be good.

After reading it for so long, I remember that I haven't given a book review yet. The plot line of the book is very detailed, I can trace the source and clarify the logic, the characters are very three-dimensional, and the transition of the plot is very precise. There are one or two parts of the novel I wrote that pay tribute to this book. I really want to chat with the author...

I gave it five stars to show my support. It's okay in Tomato, but I don't like it. I'm too lazy to watch the main character pulling his own strings [awkward laugh]

The book is okay, but some of the settings are unclear. The most important thing is that there are a lot of debates between gods and men in the paragraphs, and there are all kinds of mess. It is recommended to close the comment area before reading, and the author always speaks, which feels like a spoiler, which will lose part of the experience. [Awkward laugh][Awkward laugh][Smile] There are a lot of these three expressions in the commentaries of this book [Smile][Awkward laugh][Awkward laugh]

It's really good. If you like Ultraman and Star Railroad, then if you don't read this book, to be honest, you will really regret it. It's simply great. Come on, author.

Very nice and detailed, each character is unique. The two Persi sisters are funny, Zhu Moyong's determination for revenge, especially the process of Dark Lopusero's affection, and the tenderness that Zhu Moyong can only show when he is his most cherished apprentice. However, the final ending when he went crazy and paranoid to pursue eternal happiness due to the death of his apprentice is heartbreaking. And Freya is really a very gentle person

The bondage armor is a bit slow to take off, and I won't break free until Chapter 154. There are more than 70 pictures of fighting against Foehn. Generally speaking, there are climaxes and daily routines. It's still a readable novel. You can also use it for passing away at ordinary times.