The ratings have just come out. I don't ask you to give me good reviews. I just need you to tell me your true feelings after reading it. As long as it's not malicious abuse or anything like that, I'll accept any praise or criticism.
Special note: This article uses the shell and world view of Genshin Impact to write a story about what a truly high civilization should do if it falls into a lower civilization.
The main purpose of writing is [hard-core wit fighting/civilized game/logical self-consistency/top setting/philosophical speculation/deep thinking and high cognition]. If you just want to have a simple mindless fun and relax, then this work may be a little difficult, I hope you can understand.
I can proudly claim that the spiritual practice system of this novel is the top-level setting of the entire Internet novel interruption format, and the grand unified theory of all extraordinary systems.
Although this book only shows part of it, you can still give the part that has been shown to anyone for evaluation.
This is a completely different kind of fan fiction. Here, you can see the top settings of cultivating immortals, advanced political intrigues and strategic games.
Let you feel advanced intelligence and pleasure.
In the early stage, it was slightly lacking due to my unskilled brushwork. It gradually gets better from about forty to fifty chapters.
Please feel free to watch it to give you a different experience.
Reader comments
It's okay, but I feel like it was expanded using AI
The outline is okay, and the background of the diverse immortal dynasties is great! The people of the upper dynasty do not worship the king of the lower dynasty!
It's so awesome, and the level of education is even better than that Genshin Impact fanfic that has written more than 1,600 chapters. It is said that readers read not only the book, but also the author himself. I have deeply realized that the author's vast knowledge reserve is so vast that it can crush people to death. Compared with the political intrigues in the book, what amazes me more is the things from the Ming and Han Dynasties. Everything is so logically self-consistent and perfect. It really makes me feel that the author has really been to the Ming and Han Dynasties. Although I can't understand most of the content in its practice system, I can still feel its strong rationality. [Learned][Learned][Learned]
Anyway, it's awesome, don't stop updating [I'm about to cry]
This book may have certain requirements for readers.
For those who are willing to use their brains and can calm down to read the book, this is a very good work.
But if you just want to pursue mindless fun, fast pace, extreme emotions and relaxation, what can you say about this book? He pursues a kind of logical and intellectual beauty, rather than non-stop excitement.
Although it is a fanfic, the author is actually using the works of a fan to illustrate something.
For those who pursue logical rationality, like intellectual pleasure, and like to explore in-depth content, it is a rare masterpiece based on the current total content of nearly 400,000 words.
I would like to give a suggestion to new readers. Don't read this novel as fast food literature or a cool novel. Instead, you should calm down and slowly follow the perspective of the protagonist and look at the story bit by bit.
Immersive experience, various cultural changes, and when you reach the key points of the plot, you will feel the real shock and understand what the epic of civilization is.
The author should be suitable for writing about cultivating immortals. Now writing second games is indeed a bit overkill. And I don't think the author is a novice because his writing skills are very strong (it may also be due to precipitation and study). At least he should be able to write a phenomenal book in Tomato
So far, it seems pretty good. I like this kind of logical and logical style of writing, which contrasts with the wanton expression of personal emotions. However, the risks of this style of writing do exist. One is that the author may appear to be a die-hard fan of something and push it hard, causing readers to not buy it. The other is that the author has finished writing the settings, and then there is not much to write when pushing the plot. The more he writes, the weaker he becomes, or the early stage is too fast, and the later steps are too high, resulting in no waves.
A very good book, complete system, clear structure, five-star praise. This ability system is one of the few good systems I have ever seen. Unfortunately, it is a fanfic. If it is original, maybe there is a chance to reach the level of the Lord of Mysteries and the Naming Technique of Night?
How can I put it, the writing and plot are very good, but the whole movie is full of conspiracy theories that make people feel uncomfortable. I don't know what it is like in the author's setting, but in the game background, Travelers and Tianli are not completely hostile. Tianli is actually the Traveler's spaceship AI. Its purpose is to find a planet with the potential to resist the dark destiny (the Abyss) and transform it into a new home. Therefore, after the anti-lord is bewitched by the Abyss, the Traveler is destined to be the next master of Teyvat.
I personally feel very good about this book. I am very satisfied with both the details and the smoothness of the writing.
The author's writing is very strong, and I can feel the intention in the article. I hope the author will continue to work hard and never run away! ! !
The author's writing is very strong, and the plot and setting are also refreshing to me. It can be said to be a breath of fresh air on various platforms, especially Tomato. It gave me a feeling that this is how advanced civilization should be.
It's really good. The four-category cultivation system of Heaven, Earth and Sacred is really good, and I also agree with the concept of Immortal Dynasty. I'm just a bit stupid. Many of the lost sentences in the original text still need to use my brain to understand, but it just happened to exercise my rusty brain.
The self-constructed practice system is good. The writing of the article is a bit lacking, but there are no major problems. It is updated at regular intervals every day and has a lot of words, so it is still very good. If you are bored in your spare time, you can still watch it
It can be regarded as top-notch on all platforms, and it is a rare masterpiece on Rotten Tomatoes. However, it may be a bit picky and does not cater to foreign persimmons' fast, refreshing and ruthless writing style. However, this is a free novel. As long as the work uses less or no AI, unless it is particularly disgusting, I will give it at least three stars. In short, it is not more BB, it must be five stars [Thinking] (Breaking news!)
I don't review many books. If it's good, it's good. If it's not good, it's not good. It seems to be similar to the idea of a world of unity. Apart from being a bit idealistic, the content is actually okay. Life is a long road. If you take it step by step, you will win with a clear conscience. [Laugh]
The writing is great, and it perfectly describes the vision, knowledge, conduct, style, etc. That a truly advanced civilized citizen should have. He is not the kind of otaku who comes from an advanced civilization but smells like a diaosi.
This is the correct way of cultivation. Real cultivation should lead to a jump in life levels. Only strong strength and long life are not complete cultivation. This is so correct.
Now it seems that Genshin Impact is really calculating and not sincere at all.
The setting of the Four Immortals is pretty good.
It's very interesting to watch, the concept of the exercises is very good, and the relationship between science and fantasy is also very good.
It's very interesting. This book is not about mainstream fighting and romance. Although it is not the theme of cultivating immortals, it covers all aspects very well, including the game of power...
I can't understand it a bit, but it feels awesome.
Compared with other Genshin Impact fans' brainless and refreshing articles, it feels fresh and the move system in the article has a sense of cultivating immortality.
But the article is a bit self-indulgent. It keeps emphasizing how strong the protagonist's background is, but it is all said from the protagonist's mouth. It is somewhat strong on the outside but weak on the inside, just like the more a person lacks something, the more he has to show off.
At the same time, the plot is too little and delayed, and the text describing the background only takes up 1/4 to 1/5. These overly straightforward words neither look like foreshadowing nor promote the plot. They are like a lot of useless things, stuffed directly into the head, and will only make the reader feel cumbersome and long-winded. Where is the fun?
The protagonist's background, methods, and world view should be gradually reflected in the plot. Just write some foreshadowing beforehand, and then slowly patch it up in the process.
Overall, this book is beautiful, but there is too much introduction.
Any work can more or less reflect the values of its true creator. Sir, I am so honored to resonate with you!
Cultivation system brainstorming praise [like]
I like this style very much
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Five stars, five stars, must be full
[Like] Not brainless, no fighting between left and right brains
The book is nice to read, and the background setting is macro.
It's okay, but I feel like it was expanded using AI
The outline is okay, and the background of the diverse immortal dynasties is great! The people of the upper dynasty do not worship the king of the lower dynasty!
It's so awesome, and the level of education is even better than that Genshin Impact fanfic that has written more than 1,600 chapters. It is said that readers read not only the book, but also the author himself. I have deeply realized that the author's vast knowledge reserve is so vast that it can crush people to death. Compared with the political intrigues in the book, what amazes me more is the things from the Ming and Han Dynasties. Everything is so logically self-consistent and perfect. It really makes me feel that the author has really been to the Ming and Han Dynasties. Although I can't understand most of the content in its practice system, I can still feel its strong rationality. [Learned][Learned][Learned] Anyway, it's awesome, don't stop updating [I'm about to cry]
This book may have certain requirements for readers. For those who are willing to use their brains and can calm down to read the book, this is a very good work. But if you just want to pursue mindless fun, fast pace, extreme emotions and relaxation, what can you say about this book? He pursues a kind of logical and intellectual beauty, rather than non-stop excitement. Although it is a fanfic, the author is actually using the works of a fan to illustrate something. For those who pursue logical rationality, like intellectual pleasure, and like to explore in-depth content, it is a rare masterpiece based on the current total content of nearly 400,000 words. I would like to give a suggestion to new readers. Don't read this novel as fast food literature or a cool novel. Instead, you should calm down and slowly follow the perspective of the protagonist and look at the story bit by bit. Immersive experience, various cultural changes, and when you reach the key points of the plot, you will feel the real shock and understand what the epic of civilization is.
The author should be suitable for writing about cultivating immortals. Now writing second games is indeed a bit overkill. And I don't think the author is a novice because his writing skills are very strong (it may also be due to precipitation and study). At least he should be able to write a phenomenal book in Tomato
So far, it seems pretty good. I like this kind of logical and logical style of writing, which contrasts with the wanton expression of personal emotions. However, the risks of this style of writing do exist. One is that the author may appear to be a die-hard fan of something and push it hard, causing readers to not buy it. The other is that the author has finished writing the settings, and then there is not much to write when pushing the plot. The more he writes, the weaker he becomes, or the early stage is too fast, and the later steps are too high, resulting in no waves.
A very good book, complete system, clear structure, five-star praise. This ability system is one of the few good systems I have ever seen. Unfortunately, it is a fanfic. If it is original, maybe there is a chance to reach the level of the Lord of Mysteries and the Naming Technique of Night?
How can I put it, the writing and plot are very good, but the whole movie is full of conspiracy theories that make people feel uncomfortable. I don't know what it is like in the author's setting, but in the game background, Travelers and Tianli are not completely hostile. Tianli is actually the Traveler's spaceship AI. Its purpose is to find a planet with the potential to resist the dark destiny (the Abyss) and transform it into a new home. Therefore, after the anti-lord is bewitched by the Abyss, the Traveler is destined to be the next master of Teyvat.
I personally feel very good about this book. I am very satisfied with both the details and the smoothness of the writing. The author's writing is very strong, and I can feel the intention in the article. I hope the author will continue to work hard and never run away! ! !
The author's writing is very strong, and the plot and setting are also refreshing to me. It can be said to be a breath of fresh air on various platforms, especially Tomato. It gave me a feeling that this is how advanced civilization should be.
It's really good. The four-category cultivation system of Heaven, Earth and Sacred is really good, and I also agree with the concept of Immortal Dynasty. I'm just a bit stupid. Many of the lost sentences in the original text still need to use my brain to understand, but it just happened to exercise my rusty brain.
The self-constructed practice system is good. The writing of the article is a bit lacking, but there are no major problems. It is updated at regular intervals every day and has a lot of words, so it is still very good. If you are bored in your spare time, you can still watch it
It can be regarded as top-notch on all platforms, and it is a rare masterpiece on Rotten Tomatoes. However, it may be a bit picky and does not cater to foreign persimmons' fast, refreshing and ruthless writing style. However, this is a free novel. As long as the work uses less or no AI, unless it is particularly disgusting, I will give it at least three stars. In short, it is not more BB, it must be five stars [Thinking] (Breaking news!)
I don't review many books. If it's good, it's good. If it's not good, it's not good. It seems to be similar to the idea of a world of unity. Apart from being a bit idealistic, the content is actually okay. Life is a long road. If you take it step by step, you will win with a clear conscience. [Laugh]
The writing is great, and it perfectly describes the vision, knowledge, conduct, style, etc. That a truly advanced civilized citizen should have. He is not the kind of otaku who comes from an advanced civilization but smells like a diaosi.
This is the correct way of cultivation. Real cultivation should lead to a jump in life levels. Only strong strength and long life are not complete cultivation. This is so correct.
Now it seems that Genshin Impact is really calculating and not sincere at all.
The setting of the Four Immortals is pretty good.
It's very interesting to watch, the concept of the exercises is very good, and the relationship between science and fantasy is also very good.
It's very interesting. This book is not about mainstream fighting and romance. Although it is not the theme of cultivating immortals, it covers all aspects very well, including the game of power...
I can't understand it a bit, but it feels awesome. Compared with other Genshin Impact fans' brainless and refreshing articles, it feels fresh and the move system in the article has a sense of cultivating immortality. But the article is a bit self-indulgent. It keeps emphasizing how strong the protagonist's background is, but it is all said from the protagonist's mouth. It is somewhat strong on the outside but weak on the inside, just like the more a person lacks something, the more he has to show off. At the same time, the plot is too little and delayed, and the text describing the background only takes up 1/4 to 1/5. These overly straightforward words neither look like foreshadowing nor promote the plot. They are like a lot of useless things, stuffed directly into the head, and will only make the reader feel cumbersome and long-winded. Where is the fun? The protagonist's background, methods, and world view should be gradually reflected in the plot. Just write some foreshadowing beforehand, and then slowly patch it up in the process.
Overall, this book is beautiful, but there is too much introduction.
Any work can more or less reflect the values of its true creator. Sir, I am so honored to resonate with you!
Cultivation system brainstorming praise [like]
I like this style very much
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
Five stars, five stars, must be full
[Like] Not brainless, no fighting between left and right brains
The book is nice to read, and the background setting is macro.
Very beautiful, highly recommended