I'm a new writer, still finding my feet.
[Naruto fanfiction] [Native-born heroine] [Please overlook plot holes] [A growth-type power-up (modeled on Naruto and Sasuke)] [Strong, beautiful, and satisfying] [One-sided crushes by the dozen] [Feel free to self-insert or ship]
Once upon a time, Kanna's world was very small.
Small enough to hold only her brother's retreating figure, Sasuke's awkwardness, Itachi's gentleness, and the warm bustle of Konoha's barbecue restaurant.
Then one day, her golden dream shattered.
Her brother was "dead," her clan was gone, and even Itachi had become a bloodstained demon.
They spoke of revenge and conspiracy.
But on the last note Shisui left for Kanna, he wrote only: "Stay steadfast forever."
"A true ninja is someone who can endure anything!"
So Kanna wiped away her tears, opened her sealed eyes, and wielded forbidden power.
She would see what had become the root rotting Konoha;
She would uncover the truth that made her brother willing to die;
She would find out what had turned the world into this;
In her own way, Kanna would protect everything she held dear.
Even if it meant standing against the entire world.
"Where moonlight falls, I will go. With only this body, I will reshape the world!"
This is an ode dedicated to everyone.
The writing is quite comfortable, so far it looks good. The heroine is also well-developed. I feel it has potential. I highly recommend it.
Why doesn't the author update it?