Stealing Pens: Wu Laosan's Lovely Palm

✍🏻The writing is beautiful. If Wu Xie knew this, he would not break his guard [laughing and crying] His third uncle has a wife and a family outside (≧ｗ≦) and he was walked like a dog by his third uncle🐶🌚It would be better if he watched the movie🤣🌚

It's a very unique and novel writing angle, and the interaction between the heroine and San is also very cute. From the reader's perspective, I have two suggestions: 1. The paragraph is too long and it is tiring to read, so it can be divided into more sections; 2. Some text can be more concise. For example, the text in brackets or the details of the scene description are useless to the content and can be deleted. It's just my personal thoughts and has no influence on the author's writing!

It's the first time I've seen an article from this perspective. It's great. I like it very much. I hope there will be more of it [Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses]

Be or he? I feel like the layout of the two male protagonists makes it difficult to get to the end with the female protagonist.

The writing is very nice. Generally, few people write about reconciliation stories without three provinces. After all, it is difficult to write. However, this book does not focus too much on their adventures. It mainly writes about their relationship with the heroine in daily life, and the love is scattered in the details of daily life. It is very beautiful. It mainly reminds them of their warmth, family support, and love guidance (which is the pull of emotions), which is relatively small and a bit dull. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's so beautiful. I look forward to when An An discovers Wu Shouzhuo's vest.

To be honest, I thought it was a very good book and it took me half a day to read it. I have watched a lot of Tomb Raiders fanfiction, and this was the first time I watched it from an angle I had never imagined. It was very clear, very everyday, very ordinary, and very warm. Of course, except for Wu Sansheng's attitude towards the heroine when Tamutuo came back, I thought everything else was very good. In the whole book, I only skipped about 2 to 3 chapters.

So far, I have read 55 chapters. At this point, the baby girl has actually discovered that they may be (just) two people. Maybe the response of love is too clear. The baby girl is willing to accept the awkward love they give. The baby girl is really good. She knows that the results of some things are not important. For the baby girl, whether it is A Mamoru or A Zhuo, love will not lie. Nubao had a slight guess that they might be doing something else, not the tea business. But none of this is important. What is important is the casual mention of strawberries, the responses in the observation diary, the surprise responses to every meal, and the cuteness and cuteness with the baby girl. Mouth can lie, but eyes and heart cannot. It doesn't matter if it's one person or two people, the important thing is that they are the girl's A Shou and A Zhuo. I didn't really like the second generation in the past. They were more inferior than the superiors and more than the inferiors. I thought about it boldly and absurdly. If I were myself, I wouldn't be able to do that. The thin words only briefly summarized their prison-like life. Looking at their lives from God's perspective, it seems inherently unfair. They can be anything. It seems like a good idea for three people to eat together.

It looks great, but it seems like puppies can't eat grapes, right?

It's quite interesting, it's really a new angle. Although it's finished, I still look forward to the author writing a spin-off after Wu Xie finds out.

Very nice, the subject matter is good

It's a very nice and heart-warming article. I just want to have a few more extras. I really want to see Xiaohua Wu Xie break her guard.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's very well written and really beautiful! Big cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Good, good, good, good, good, good

A rare article about sandwich biscuits, the content is quite heartwarming

Very novel subject matter, well written