Dragon Clan************

Very nice to watch, and I want to see Justice Severn elbow Nidhogg in the mouth! ! !

The writing is quite good, but the beginning is a bit long. New viewers can just start reading from chapter 49. I'll save you the trouble in the beginning: The protagonist was swept away by the turbulence and was rescued by the Morohoshidan. The Morohoshidan brought the protagonist to this world to open a gym, met Eri, joined the execution department, and entered Kassel in Chapter 49. Just start reading from here. I read it again (beginning of Chapter 15). The protagonist's character is OOC (the characters in the book are inconsistent before and after), so I deducted one star.

It's a rare combination. I hope it can be written to the finale, instead of writing one or two hundred chapters and ending the update before it's even finished, such as the Dragon Knight book, the Reborn Dragon Trilogy book, and the Naruto Dragon Clan book [facepalm][facepalm] ][face covering][almost crying][almost crying][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]

The cute little monster will finally be saved by the righteous Ultraman one day

So broad, so broad, I, King Beria, am here to support you. [Eat melon]

The quality is okay. It's just that the early stages were a bit too bland. [Laughing] I know, I don't understand where it is anymore. The main character is a little too robotic. Like a cold machine, it would be better to have a little enthusiasm. [Facepalm] This description is too biased towards Chu Zihang in the original work. Not like the protagonist of the Austrian classics. The main character is portrayed like Tamaki Daizuto. [Think]

The ultimate lover Wang makes his grand appearance [punches]

Personally, I think it's okay, but it would be better if the protagonist had his own Ultra body, so that he could transform into his own Ultra when Seven is away. I hope the author can agree (͏ ˉ ꈊ ˉ)✧˖° After reading it again, I felt that the main character did not have the power of Ultraman, which was good. I felt that it was also good that Eri Yi was the heroine. After all, I was searching for Eri Yi and then found this book. I hope it will be a single female protagonist, Eri Yi.

Author, your book is actually quite good, but the early plot is a bit delayed. I don't know if you can persist in updating it to the later stage. I hope your book will become popular.

It's okay according to Tomato standards. Also, remember to change it after using the tool. Don't make it too obvious.

Not bad, but there is no punctuation in the dialogue, which is not very comfortable to read. The author will make some changes.

The writing is quite good. As for why there are so few people, it's probably because there are too few Ultraman elements.

A relatively superior work

Ultraman Seven's power does not appear most of the time. It mainly depicts the protagonist's thoughts and changes to the world.

Objectively speaking, what I wrote is still okay. I hope I can stick to it.

I really like this kind of fanfic. I hope I can write it down and have a good ending. I read fanfic just for the pleasure of reading novels [Code]

Why was it removed? I was halfway through reading it and it was suddenly taken off the shelves. This book doesn't seem to violate any rules. What's going on? @Look at me Tian Xingjian The author will come out and explain @Look at me Tianxingjian

So the male protagonist is actually Zero's human body, right? [Chigua] The son logged into his father's account, so that's right

Good-looking, very immersive

Not bad, a very good book

Come on, suddenly enlightened

The characterization is good.

Haokan, Saiwen is the real Saiwen, not gzz

Yes, yes, I want to watch this

I thought it was the system, but turned out to be Severin as my teacher. There is no pop-up value, which is really awesome. I want to see this mouth! ! !

This book is quite good. I can feel the spirit that the protagonist inherited from Severn.

Here comes the question, which country is the male protagonist from?

Can you do a transformation in front of everyone, that would be really cool [Adoration]

This book is so good, as good as Li Xiang's book. The author, please say goodbye to the eunuch, and write 2 million words without saying anything [crying][crying]

It's okay, come on!