HP Gives the Magic World a Bit of a Shock to the World of Immortality

I really like this kind of protagonist. Although he is powerful, he has a gentle personality and can occasionally be a bit naughty. Although the text has no CP, he has a lot of good fights with many people. The cool points in the plot are also well written and it is not embarrassing to watch. But I think it should be a big cool point and a climax. However, it may be due to the background setting of the magical world and the protagonist's combat ability is at the ceiling level. There is no big climax in the plot, but it does not affect the author's writing. It is really good-looking. I have to control it hard. Must it be a five-star score? As for the side story, I think I support the main character more. The author seems to write one as the main character and the other as the main character, but they are both very interesting. Our friends are really talented. This book is really worth reading. Emmm, I don't think I have much to say, so that's it.

Good-looking, Qingshang is so gentle, capable, resourceful, and loving [shy][shy][admiration][admiration][admiration][snickering][smirking][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][please update]

The male protagonist has a good rapport with everyone, no matter Draco, Tom or Theodore, they all have a good rapport.

I haven't skipped the entire story. This is the only HP series fanfic I've finished reading. The content includes both "fun" (laughter) and sadness. There is no OOC in the character, and there is no forced change of character to fill regrets (in my opinion). Tom still doesn't understand love, but he chooses the right path. After reading it, I was thinking that everyone has personality and is independent. We don't need to become people who cater to others for the sake of the surrounding environment or other people's bad words. There is no need to cover up your own shining points and be someone who is expected. We all have flaws, which is unavoidable, but we must also discover our own shining points and take the right path. Although we may not meet a guide, an upright and young person has infinite possibilities that cannot be measured in value, and opportunities are at his feet. (It's a bit nonsense, but it's very well written. It retains the characteristics of the original characters and extends the future of each character. It's very realistic. Although there is a limited life, this is the best ending. In addition, although I was a little worried about Harry's birth at first, but thinking about some of the things his father has done for generations (I believe in Christianity) and the beautiful Lily, I feel that this ending is still very acceptable. After all, no one asked Harry if he wanted to be a savior, and Harry's adventures can only be carried out in other parallel universes.)

It's very interesting, but I hope the protagonist can make some friends. Now the protagonist feels very distant from the world.

Ber, how come such a beautiful article is finished and not many people have read it? ! ✋❓🤚It's very fun and funny, and it's hard to calm down😭😭😭

This is really beautiful. It's so cool to watch.

The main body is good, not too OC, and quite creative. It's a good novel. Recommended if you like the main character who is a cultivator

The writing is very good, it's beautiful, I love reading it, it's really good!

It's so good, especially the protagonist and Tommy

Very funny, rather than when I was teaching him

I don't know why so few people read it, this is a treasure novel

The writing style and writing style in the early stage actually made me feel a little uncomfortable. Maybe it was due to too many broken sentences in the book. But the plot is really interesting 😋😋😋

Super super super super super beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! Come and see it! ! ! ! ! ! Really nice to look at! ! ! ! ! !

The male protagonist is invincible, the whole story is very enjoyable and stress-free, very good, no cp, no abuse

It looks good, but not enough! I just like reading this type of book

It's very nice to read. You might think it's a bit hard to read at first, but overall it's a very enjoyable article. The main character is a fishing beauty [smile]

It's super cool. It's great to watch. I'm very happy. The fun character design suits my taste. Why is there no rating? He deserves 5 stars [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]