[Shuangwen][Dragon Ball][One Punch Man][Super God World][Infinite World]
Travel through the Dragon Balls and become a Saiyan.
The beginning is Hell Difficulty: Countdown to the destruction of Planet Vegeta!
Looking at Aunt Ji Nei beside me, I took her hand without hesitation: "Aunt, come with me!"
When Frieza's death ray lights up, we are the last surviving Saiyans, landing on a primitive planet where giant beasts are rampant.
From then on, the most ferocious Saiyan in history was born! Use the planet as your training ground and the giant beast as your whetstone.
When I was able to transform into a Super Saiyan and blow up the planet with one punch, I realized that this was just the beginning...
One Punch Man World: I gave Saitama a hearty battle and became a god in Boros' mouth.
Super God World: I step on Hua Ye and become the king of gods!
Pirate World: With just one move of my hand, it's the end of the world!
.........
Aunt Ji Nei: "When you pulled me onto the spaceship, you didn't say it would turn out like this..."
This is a journey that travels through thousands of realms and becomes an invincible legend!
Reader comments
It's generally very good, but the brain circuits of the author and the protagonist are far from ordinary people. How can I put it, the brain circuits are very strange. It's clear that you can get away with it, but you have to spend resources, and you have to rely on the system to solve problems that you can think about by yourself. The overall logical structure is still very good. It's not easy to give ten stars to the writing.
It's not bad, but I don't know if the heroine has Bulma and No. 18 (I really like these two in Dragon Ball). In addition, the protagonist's strength has improved so quickly. How to write about it later? Quickly travel through all the worlds?
It's okay, some are a little bit poisonous. Doesn't matter. It felt pretty good, but there was too little, and there was no explanation of the relationship between the protagonist and Kakarot's mother. Just one feature, I seem to have forgotten which one. But I still remember the strange feeling of being pregnant with the main character.
. Why do you need so many cards for a fight? It feels so good.
The plot is good. The logic flows smoothly. The rhythm is well controlled. The combat descriptions are also excellent. The plot is not depressing. The combat power is not suppressed. The characters are very comfortable. It's just that the author of emotional drama needs to be strengthened. But I like all the characters in emotional dramas. [Laughing]
It looks comfortable, but when did Qiqi contradict her? Anyway, Wukong is either busy practicing or saving the world. Qiqi is too empty and lonely. As Wukong's stepfather, she must help bring harmony to her family!
By the way, Bulma in the future world is twice as happy, and Bulma in Black Goku's world is three times as happy!
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This book is very good. Keep up the good work. I hope the author doesn't stop it midway or end it badly. First of all, this is my personal feeling. It doesn't matter how others judge me. Anyway, I think this book is very good and interesting.
From Tower of Tragedy to the latest chapter very very very very very very very very ink ink ink ink. Is it because you can't write it?
It looks pretty good, but less than a hundred chapters is a bit too little. I don't know if the subsequent plot will stretch my crotch.
Hurry up and write the following plot. What is the relationship between Parrott and Gine? Do they already have their own children? Bardock probably won't appear, after all, he rarely appears.
Okay, okay, I finished reading forty chapters in one go. It's a well-written Dragon Ball fanfic.
Very beautiful, very exciting.
Yeah, good. I like it very much.
I want to know when to go to Super God World
Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good
Okay, but there are no pictures, so it's not very friendly to people who haven't watched Dragon Ball.
It's okay, but I feel like the combat skills are still based on the official ones. Can't they be more innovative? Can't they adapt a lot of the skills from Chinese elements?
It's so good to watch. I haven't seen such unconventional fan fiction for a long time. Upgrading is also super cool. It's not overwhelming. I just write it like this and I won't accept Ji Nei in the future. [Adoration], I am a Cao thief.
I'll give you another 5 stars if I don't stop.
Good, good, good, good
No matter where you go, you will still be the same
It's generally very good, but the brain circuits of the author and the protagonist are far from ordinary people. How can I put it, the brain circuits are very strange. It's clear that you can get away with it, but you have to spend resources, and you have to rely on the system to solve problems that you can think about by yourself. The overall logical structure is still very good. It's not easy to give ten stars to the writing.
It's not bad, but I don't know if the heroine has Bulma and No. 18 (I really like these two in Dragon Ball). In addition, the protagonist's strength has improved so quickly. How to write about it later? Quickly travel through all the worlds?
It's okay, some are a little bit poisonous. Doesn't matter. It felt pretty good, but there was too little, and there was no explanation of the relationship between the protagonist and Kakarot's mother. Just one feature, I seem to have forgotten which one. But I still remember the strange feeling of being pregnant with the main character. . Why do you need so many cards for a fight? It feels so good.
The plot is good. The logic flows smoothly. The rhythm is well controlled. The combat descriptions are also excellent. The plot is not depressing. The combat power is not suppressed. The characters are very comfortable. It's just that the author of emotional drama needs to be strengthened. But I like all the characters in emotional dramas. [Laughing]
It looks comfortable, but when did Qiqi contradict her? Anyway, Wukong is either busy practicing or saving the world. Qiqi is too empty and lonely. As Wukong's stepfather, she must help bring harmony to her family! By the way, Bulma in the future world is twice as happy, and Bulma in Black Goku's world is three times as happy!
Good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review, good review
This book is very good. Keep up the good work. I hope the author doesn't stop it midway or end it badly. First of all, this is my personal feeling. It doesn't matter how others judge me. Anyway, I think this book is very good and interesting.
From Tower of Tragedy to the latest chapter very very very very very very very very ink ink ink ink. Is it because you can't write it?
It looks pretty good, but less than a hundred chapters is a bit too little. I don't know if the subsequent plot will stretch my crotch.
Hurry up and write the following plot. What is the relationship between Parrott and Gine? Do they already have their own children? Bardock probably won't appear, after all, he rarely appears.
Okay, okay, I finished reading forty chapters in one go. It's a well-written Dragon Ball fanfic.
Very beautiful, very exciting.
Yeah, good. I like it very much.
I want to know when to go to Super God World
Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good
Okay, but there are no pictures, so it's not very friendly to people who haven't watched Dragon Ball.
It's okay, but I feel like the combat skills are still based on the official ones. Can't they be more innovative? Can't they adapt a lot of the skills from Chinese elements?
It's so good to watch. I haven't seen such unconventional fan fiction for a long time. Upgrading is also super cool. It's not overwhelming. I just write it like this and I won't accept Ji Nei in the future. [Adoration], I am a Cao thief.
I'll give you another 5 stars if I don't stop.
Good, good, good, good
No matter where you go, you will still be the same
There is this afternoon