The story mainly tells the story of Lin Fan, who participated in a folk song competition with Amei in order to repay Amei's family for saving their lives, just to get the bonus to help Amei's father cure his illness, and repay the family's story. It also tells how Lin Fan used his talent to defeat his opponents step by step, and finally became the king of folk songs. The antiphon is a classic.
Reader comments
The core is good, the storyline is well-organized, and the atmosphere is warm.
The only fly in the ointment is the part about folk songs: folk songs pay attention to coherence and clear organization, but people must first understand what the words are. However, the annotations in the margins are a bit stealing the show, and there is a suspicion that the word count is crammed, and the whole article feels like it is written for reading comprehension, which is not a good read. ——Personally, I think it is better to let the mountain singers read the complete song first, and then explain the lyrics at the end of the article. This will make it easier to understand the meaning behind the lyrics without delaying reading the article, killing two birds with one stone.
The story tells the story of an uncle who used his talents to help his eldest daughter win the King of Folk Songs in order to report on a family's lifesaver. The plot of the story is touching and vivid, and it is worth recommending.
The core is good, the storyline is well-organized, and the atmosphere is warm. The only fly in the ointment is the part about folk songs: folk songs pay attention to coherence and clear organization, but people must first understand what the words are. However, the annotations in the margins are a bit stealing the show, and there is a suspicion that the word count is crammed, and the whole article feels like it is written for reading comprehension, which is not a good read. ——Personally, I think it is better to let the mountain singers read the complete song first, and then explain the lyrics at the end of the article. This will make it easier to understand the meaning behind the lyrics without delaying reading the article, killing two birds with one stone.
The story tells the story of an uncle who used his talents to help his eldest daughter win the King of Folk Songs in order to report on a family's lifesaver. The plot of the story is touching and vivid, and it is worth recommending.