Elf: the Two Eldest Brothers at the Beginning, Are They Called Civilians?

Didn't we agree to have a female protagonist? It's over 60 chapters, and the emotional line has not been developed yet.

There are definitely few people and the data is not very good, but I think the content is still okay. Waiting for your update, just don't stop. As long as I don't cut it, I think this book can be rated as a 9 in terms of quality. I feel that the current rating is lower.

It's okay. Those who are not well versed in reading can read [Chigua].

I want to raise it to 100,000 words. Come on

Except for the fact that I'm not used to the Pokémon sounds set by the author when I listen to the book, it's good.

More than Niu B, invincible, full score if you have Gengar.

It's a pity that Duolong is not a different color. I feel that he is very handsome with different colors. The ordinary color is almost boring. The author should find a way to dye him.

Ok ok ok

There are so few people watching. There are so few paragraph reviews.

Chapter 77 is really nice. It's really nice to use the substitute Pokémon on TV

The Rainy Day team actually doesn't have the Rainy Day general, Thorn Dragon King.

I'll give it five stars for now. I hope the author can maintain or even improve his level.

I'll give it a 4-star rating first. I think the protagonist's strength has risen too quickly.

It's not bad, but the main character doesn't know how to direct and it's a bit uncomfortable to watch.

Are you awesome, you chicken brother?

Fortunately, my IQ is relatively online.

It's okay, but in terms of strength, it feels the same whether it's an ordinary level or a king level.

Five stars is just the limit of the system. I think this book should be full of stars.

Everything else is okay, but I always feel that the performance of the protagonist and the people around him are not consistent with his age. There's a tearing feeling [rolls eyes]

Rare quality, come on! 💪💪💪💪💪💪

Let's just put one code into another code. It looks good, but actually I still prefer to fight within the rules [Thinking]

Some of the plot jumps are a bit sudden, but I like the rhythm very much. It does not deliberately suppress the growth of high-talented Pokémon, nor does it allow low-talented Pokémon to grow too quickly.

Alas, the number of viewers is too small, and I feel something is wrong that I can't explain. Anyway, I feel it's pretty good, but there's no traffic. I hope the author can write more. I feel very good. Although there is still a certain distance from those peak Pokémon novels, it is a pity that the traffic is bleak. Also, I don't agree that Sirona is not the queen of all females.

It's still possible, come on! When will the second chapter of Time Travel come out?

Not bad, pretty good

I think it's pretty

It's good-looking, but there are few emotional lines in the early stages.

The third book is pretty good, but my age is inconsistent with my need to do things well.

I feel like this book is pretty good. I read it in a little more than a day.

I have read all three of the author's Pokémon novels and they are very good. If you can read it all, I think it is a great work. 9 Points