I Watched the Mountains and the Sea at the End of the Day

I feel that the author is very talented, but the world view he wants to write is very big, and there are a lot of characters. I can't remember it. Overall, I am very happy to read it. I have always wanted to read a cool article about a non-CP heroine cultivating the world view of immortality. This is really suitable for my appetite. I like it. I hope more people can read this good book. The only uncomfortable part is that the description of the heroine's advanced training is very repetitive. When encountering danger, there is always no time to use it. It feels a bit boring to see too many repeated words and descriptions. The author, You are my god, actually updated so much. After the college entrance examination, some people watched it [Adoration]

So far, I think the book is very interesting, the pace, writing, and plot are good! The author seems to want to write a big world view, but since the bigger the world view is, the easier it is to eunuch (this is true!), So I will directly give five stars to support the author and hope that the author will continue to write. I'll write a detailed comment after reading it later!

In fact, I think this book is very beautiful and the writing is also very good. Everyone has their own personality... The characters can be created. But the heroine's improvement is a bit slow. Every time the heroine breaks through a small realm, the author has to shape the heroine's state of mind or psychology or fighting, breakthrough or exhaustion. In fact, I think the heroine is a genius, so it doesn't have to be so "troublesome" (because the heroine can cross two big realms and kill enemies. Why is it so troublesome? Or should I use the word troublesome because I can't think of anything else? I know the author wants to describe every progress of the heroine in detail. It reveals every step that the heroine takes towards the road she wants in her heart. But I think I can write a little bit about it, that is, when writing in detail, I should briefly mention when the heroine breaks through [send heart]). The second is that every time the heroine crosses two super realms and kills enemies, she feels shocked and incredible. This is too much. I know that the world view created by the author is huge, but this is too much. I know that you cannot use other books to judge your writing. But the heroine's golden elixir kills yin and yang to transform into gods and kill destiny. [Thinking] Is there a loophole in this? What do people do in the destiny realm? After practicing for so many years, there is no magic weapon, no special moves. Are the heroine's sword moves so powerful? I may be a little deliberative, but I know that according to the author's writing style, if you want this book to be popular, you have to pay attention to the details, because I know the author, your book will be popular sooner or later [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] This book is very good to read I will keep reading. Author, I hope you can pay attention to a little more every time you write and give people a little more details. This is this book. The only two bugs I have seen so far are relatively small and big. Okay, I will talk about the advantages. It's not a saint, it's neither sentimental nor merciless. This article is a story about a heroine. The author's writing is very good. Anyway, it's very, very beautiful. It's just a little flaw. Well, it seems that these are the only ones I've seen here. Of course, they are just shortcomings. There are many more advantages. It's just that the author has updated. I'm going to read it. 🤓(◦˙▽˙◦)

I have read dozens of chapters so far and I feel very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Writing style: There is no gorgeous rhetoric when reading, it is just a very ordinary white description, simple and unpretentious. But every detail is captured perfectly. The author's writing power is sufficient and does not make the article seem too frivolous. The plot transitions are reasonable and the rhythm is well controlled. It is not procrastinating or rushed. It is just right and it is very comfortable to read. The writing is simple, like the aftertaste of chewing rice. Plot: There is warmth but also progress. The heroine is very decisive and has a clear goal. She has been moving towards her goal. The characters are vividly drawn, each one has their own characteristics, and they will not appear one-sided. The world view is also grand, and the heroine will continue to break through herself. Good looking, good looking, good looking, author, come on

Entering the meridians, introducing Qi into the body and dredging the meridians, is the foundation of spiritual practice. Awakening, opening the body's secret acupoints, doubling the true energy, and enabling preliminary use of spells. Golden elixir, the true energy is condensed to the extreme. When the elixir is formed in the Dantian, the lifespan is greatly increased, which can be regarded as a true entrance into the palace. Through spiritual communication, the golden elixir transforms into an infant, and the divine consciousness is born. It can control objects, fly, and perceive the heaven and earth. Yin and Yang, comprehend the changes of Yin and Yang, harmonize the dragon and tiger, and manifest your magical powers. Destiny, touch the trajectory of your own destiny, and you can get a glimpse of the secret. Hole the void, break the void, and initially master the power of space. Ask, practice your own way, and heaven and earth will prove it. Creation, the creation that takes over the heaven and earth, the mystery that invades the sun and the moon, is already the pinnacle of the mortal realm, and a single thought can move mountains and rivers. "

Good looking I have read over a hundred chapters so far. The writing and setting are great, and the world view is also great. I just feel that sometimes there is no foreshadowing in the plot and settings. The inexplicable word formulas, literary methods, and Taibai changes appear without warning, which makes me collapse. For a person who loves to dwell on details, there is always something that has no beginning and end, and I always feel that I have missed something... I feel very anxious. The switching of scenes and events is like a PPT. The fast pace is not such a fast method. Orz can have appropriate details.

Recommended, recommended. The author writes in great detail and describes the emotions in great detail.

It's very interesting. It's been a long time since I've seen a book that appeals to my taste. Good luck😍

It's beautiful. The heroine is a super genius. It's very enjoyable to watch. The pace is quite fast, maybe because the world view is relatively large and most of the characters are relatively stereotyped.

The writing is good and refreshing, the plot is natural and will not make people feel awkward. I really like novels with a big world view

The writing is sophisticated, and it tells the real path of inquiry. The heroine is very good.

Very delicate, no cheats, very interesting writing about cultivating immortals