In this world where weirdos are frequent, KING, the S-class hero with three scars on his face and known as the "Strongest Man on the Surface," possesses terrifying power worthy of his name, enough to shake the earth.
Every move he makes is accompanied by the terrifying roar of the "Emperor Engine", crushing all disasters with absolute power.
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There is a very strange sense of calm, just like the life that King pursues in the book, and the author did everything King thought he would do in the original work, and added a bit of realism, which is beautiful.
It's a cool, logical and cool article. I probably wouldn't recommend it. The popularity isn't right. The popularity of other King's articles is pretty good.
This book is definitely not behind any king's text
It's too early to tell. This book doesn't fit the plot of King gaining power. King is passionate. If he has the ability, he will deal with the strange incidents he sees. He will not leave voluntarily if he finds it troublesome.
The king will not protect the bad guys just because he has the ability. The underground restaurant plot. Even if the Hero Association came here with selfish motives, the king will not break up the fight. Also, the king should not exist in a place like this. This is indeed a place that hides evil and evil. Even if there are one or two good people in it, it should not exist.
There are many original works. The king here is really as strong as Saitama. His mentality is more like that of an office worker with a hand fetish. It feels more like a daily group portrait, which is the daily life of the strongest man on earth. This kind of rhythm is not suitable for most people, but everyone has their own preferences. If you don't like it, just leave. There is no need to leave a comment and your money will be confiscated.
I think it's not bad. The king is the author's own king. As long as you control it properly, there will be no problem. It's just nitpicking to try to connect with the original work after they've shown such strong fighting prowess.
But the way you write it, the author, is definitely different from traditional drama conflicts. It can be said that the expression of personality is very strong. So screening readers can be ruthless, so authors be prepared.
This setting of pursuing a peaceful life is considered a very good one among Tomato's KIGN novels, and it is quite consistent with the original KIGN's forced 'low-key' life.
The characters are also consistent with the original work.
The writing is also clean, the plot is smooth, and the overall look and feel is quite good.
It's just that the plot preparation is a bit lacking. The first few chapters are a bit difficult to get into, and the battle descriptions are a bit repetitive (?). However, based on KIGN's strength and pursuit of peace, such uninteresting battles are quite suitable (but the battles are indeed a bit boring).
Overall, this book is very good. I would like to give it five stars for encouragement.
This kind of fanfic is much better than the cookie-cutter one that follows the main story. The best one-punch fanfic I have ever seen is that it looks at the world of One-Punch from another perspective, rather than changing the protagonist or watching it from the perspective of watching anime.
How to put it, let's talk about the rating first, 4.5.
The writing style is very good and has a very free feeling, but there are too many details and the overall situation is not very good. The characters created are a bit scattered? The general description is a bit sparse, and there are few truly fleshed-out characters. Among the supporting characters, Iai, the violinist, and the tornado after the hot spring chapter are all relatively comprehensive. I don't know if the violinist has any foreshadowing. If not, it would be a pity. Most of the time, it's just a plot to enrich the king's image and mention a few other characters.
In terms of plot,... Well, it's a bit lacking now, but it feels pretty good.
Among the One Punch fanfics, it is all excellent. If there are no big surprises or changes, it must be a top-notch One Punch novel.
Up to now, I have updated to Chapter 80. It's great. King's human face is alive. Just like Saitama in the original work, King's character is invincible. In the original work, Saitama's human face is daily. The most direct one is the part about swatting mosquitoes. But that is Saitama, the sincere and unchanging hero Saitama. This The King in the movie is different. His daily life is also depressing. When Qianyin disappears at the beginning, I am thinking that there may be two endings. One is to use her death to make King more depressed until he explodes, or to be calm. The other is to use her more miserable life to let King pick up his true feelings. Looking at it now, it's great, great, that invincible divine King also has human troubles, it's so good. 4.8 Points is great [love]
It's not much to read, but it's very comfortable to write. It's not as bad as others said. I don't know what's going on lately. I feel like there are no good books on Tomato anymore. I read a lot of them and I got a little angry. This is one of the few books that I can read. King's fighting aspect is relatively concise (maybe the author doesn't know how to write fighting?), Perhaps to highlight King's invincibility, which is solved with one punch. It can expand the protagonist's methods, and describe more about the oppression of the Emperor's engine. That kind of ordinary and invincible flavor is here. This is only my personal feeling. I can say anything wrong.
It's too early to tell, what did the king do, where did it show up, Qianyin died, the protagonist was angry because his daily life was broken, and then, in the end, the bald devil solved the main problem, I don't understand where the king is, what did you do as the king, do you want to write a high-end version of Lu Mingfei? Take off your pants and fart. Other places are pretty good and have the usual taste, so I can keep watching.
To comment on my personal opinion (different people have different requirements, purely personal opinion), the king in this book is very strong in the same echelon as the bald man, but he does not have a large-scale attack (that is, he directly kills the opponent but does not cause much damage). At present, there is no emotional line (part of the Monster Fighting Association).
The king in the article did not rely on the system but relied on himself to become stronger. Basically, he did not suddenly become stronger. He worked hard step by step before breaking the limiter. Different from the original work, the king in this article had certain strength before breaking the limiter (he was hunting monsters on his own before the establishment of the Hero Association), and he was still slowly getting stronger. At that time, he was still a passionate person who wanted to become a hero. Later, to some extent, he caused a lot of casualties, which led him to deny himself, "Am I really a hero?" At the same time, he truly became stronger during that incident, which explains the origin of the "Emperor Engine" in this book and the origin of the scar, and he became a god in the process.
After the passion in my heart was extinguished, my personal goal was to live a peaceful life. I joined the Heroes Association because I was alone before and many witnesses recognized me. If my identity was exposed and I didn't join, I thought it would be very troublesome in the future. After gaining power, King had no ambitions. When leading the team, he served as an insurance to allow others to gain experience and become stronger without directly speedrunning. His "justice" also became blurred as his passion faded. After that, his emotions became very weak and he did not reveal too much. After making an unauthorized suggestion for others, he would ask the other person's wishes (at the beginning, he would ask himself whether the other person would accept the unauthorized suggestion? Those), but he still had sympathy and did not have a pure "weirdos deserve to die" proposition.
During the battle, he has no flashy moves, only simple and pure attacks (high damage with the left hand, high damage with the right hand [laughing evilly]), which are basically just one strike (for example, kicking a dragon to death like a roadside).
Here is my personal opinion on this book, I hope it can help you.
And the author who suffers again, Haokang Aikang [laughing evilly]
A very nice article about King. The King in the book is very strong and has a very lovable character. His main goal in life is to protect his daily check-in life from being ruined by weird people and various incidents. The portrayal is quite good. The controversial part is the portrayal of the character Qianyin. I personally think it is quite poor. The main difference is that it is too abrupt and unnatural, and the character of King Such a relatively aloof character would suddenly be interested in a certain character, as well as the sudden emotional line. Ten years ago, it might have been touching. Now, this routine of resurrection from the dead is a bit boring and disgusting. The portrayal of the protagonist King is very good, and the original content is also very good. Just don't write any more bad emotional scenes. It looks quite awkward and humorous.
Don't be fooled by the title and unappreciative book reviews, read here!
Different from other One-Punch fans who mainly write about passionate battles, the words in this book are filled with a calmness and tranquility like a mountain stream, and occasionally there is a slight sound of water flowing.
Those who are looking forward to stacking up combat power and fierce battles can turn left and leave. Maybe... Delicate writing is not very suitable for you? Well, you can also try reading it, and you won't lose anything.
If you can get past some of the slightly AI-modified parts above and are willing to accept this kind of silence and tranquility, then you can taste the peaceful daily life of the powerful king, as well as the less-daily battles and resolutions of events that are usually broken by him.
Then, the original heroine of this book - Qianyin, a violinist (and Mitsuki who assists her)
The appearance, experiences, and encounters of the characters are all concise and complete, and a vivid character image is outlined in just a few strokes.
The background is clearly explained, the psychological journey is complete, and the characters are three-dimensional.
Underneath the aftermath of the battle of the extraordinary and powerful, are the powerlessness, hardship, and disasters of ordinary people, and... As a weak person, he also has the tenacity of life.
——I can actually read "the body is disabled but the mind is strong" in Tomato, it's really surprising
There is no problem at all with the appearance of the original characters in this book. The one who thinks there is a problem is that he himself has a problem.
Personally, I think it can be used as a model for fan fiction.
It's a wonderful feeling. A different king feels very interesting, but there are too few updates.
The author's level is very capable, the author also has the strength of Long Dian, and the protagonist is perfectly created. There were no high-octane scenes during the writing process, but this feeling suited the protagonist very well. With him around, everything would not be calm. At least for now, he deserves this score. [Like][Like][Like]
You can make up for King's past. For example, after being wounded by an octopus monster, King hated his own weakness and embarked on the same path as Saitama.
So far..._(:з∠)_It looks good. Judging from the King portrayed in the chapters "Individualism" and "Determination", he is a serious person with a gentle heart. He will help others and protect what he wants within the scope of sight based on his inner judgment.
From what I've read so far, it feels like it's telling King's story and daily life in a calm tone. Using King's perspective of solving events makes me curious about what kind of daily life he really wants to protect? What kind of persistence does he have?
Also, could it be that spending several chapters to create the character "Qianyin" is to lead to something below? [Thinking]
Will King make any changes in the future? Does the novel have any main goal? Or... What kind of King does the author want to create?
Looking forward to the follow-up content_(:з∠)_
It's very peaceful and normal. Although there are some conflicts, they are resolved quickly. The author's writing style is very good and looks very comfortable. It's good to read a few articles occasionally, but if you keep reading, it will seem dull. The king in the author's writing is similar to parallel time and space. He has strong strength and a very calm character. It describes his daily life as a hero and the difficulties he faces. Forgive me for not being able to describe the feeling because of my poor language skills, but the author's writing is really good and it's really comfortable to watch, but it's a bit bland. This is also the theme.
To be honest, I have been reading this book for a long time. I read it every day when it is updated. This book gives me a good feeling. It expresses the real image of the king in the hearts of our readers. The author's writing style is really good. Whether it is the king's growth, daily life or battle, it is all very comfortable to write. But why is the rating of this book so low? There is definitely no problem in terms of quality. Maybe the popularity of Punch on a Tomato fandom is relatively low, but I still hope the author will continue writing because this is indeed a good book.
It's a very interesting book. Finally, someone has linked the identity and strength of King, the strongest person on earth.
I like this style very much. It is calm and powerful, as if it can crush everything. There may be some flaws in the character, but they have been improved. All in all, I think this book deserves more than this.
It's really good. The author is a newbie and his writing is not very good. Some people say it's AI, but I don't think so, because the author said he copied other authors' works, and the character description is very good in the later part, especially the psychological confusion of the king. The first part is very similar to Kira Yoshikage's pursuit of an ordinary life. Anyone who affects his daily life will die, but the number of chapters is too few, please write more! ! ! ! !
Can you draw that woman to life?
Very good, I have the desire to read more
The protagonist in the author's works is gentle yet powerful, peaceful and at ease, with a transcendent state of mind.
King in the eyes of other heroes
Very good, Qianyinbie is really gone, author, please don't force me to beg you [crying]
It calms me like the sound of a thousand notes
I can find my tenacity
Uh-huh, I don't mean anything else. "[OK]" is what it means. Do you understand? So can it be updated 10,000 times a day?
Compared with other One Punch King fans, they are much better. Those who forcibly add systems and external forces fall into the inferior category.
Break the stereotypes and create alternative stories. It's just that the chapters are a bit short and not enough to read.
There is a very strange sense of calm, just like the life that King pursues in the book, and the author did everything King thought he would do in the original work, and added a bit of realism, which is beautiful.
It's a cool, logical and cool article. I probably wouldn't recommend it. The popularity isn't right. The popularity of other King's articles is pretty good. This book is definitely not behind any king's text It's too early to tell. This book doesn't fit the plot of King gaining power. King is passionate. If he has the ability, he will deal with the strange incidents he sees. He will not leave voluntarily if he finds it troublesome. The king will not protect the bad guys just because he has the ability. The underground restaurant plot. Even if the Hero Association came here with selfish motives, the king will not break up the fight. Also, the king should not exist in a place like this. This is indeed a place that hides evil and evil. Even if there are one or two good people in it, it should not exist.
There are many original works. The king here is really as strong as Saitama. His mentality is more like that of an office worker with a hand fetish. It feels more like a daily group portrait, which is the daily life of the strongest man on earth. This kind of rhythm is not suitable for most people, but everyone has their own preferences. If you don't like it, just leave. There is no need to leave a comment and your money will be confiscated.
I think it's not bad. The king is the author's own king. As long as you control it properly, there will be no problem. It's just nitpicking to try to connect with the original work after they've shown such strong fighting prowess. But the way you write it, the author, is definitely different from traditional drama conflicts. It can be said that the expression of personality is very strong. So screening readers can be ruthless, so authors be prepared.
This setting of pursuing a peaceful life is considered a very good one among Tomato's KIGN novels, and it is quite consistent with the original KIGN's forced 'low-key' life. The characters are also consistent with the original work. The writing is also clean, the plot is smooth, and the overall look and feel is quite good. It's just that the plot preparation is a bit lacking. The first few chapters are a bit difficult to get into, and the battle descriptions are a bit repetitive (?). However, based on KIGN's strength and pursuit of peace, such uninteresting battles are quite suitable (but the battles are indeed a bit boring). Overall, this book is very good. I would like to give it five stars for encouragement.
This kind of fanfic is much better than the cookie-cutter one that follows the main story. The best one-punch fanfic I have ever seen is that it looks at the world of One-Punch from another perspective, rather than changing the protagonist or watching it from the perspective of watching anime.
How to put it, let's talk about the rating first, 4.5. The writing style is very good and has a very free feeling, but there are too many details and the overall situation is not very good. The characters created are a bit scattered? The general description is a bit sparse, and there are few truly fleshed-out characters. Among the supporting characters, Iai, the violinist, and the tornado after the hot spring chapter are all relatively comprehensive. I don't know if the violinist has any foreshadowing. If not, it would be a pity. Most of the time, it's just a plot to enrich the king's image and mention a few other characters. In terms of plot,... Well, it's a bit lacking now, but it feels pretty good. Among the One Punch fanfics, it is all excellent. If there are no big surprises or changes, it must be a top-notch One Punch novel. Up to now, I have updated to Chapter 80. It's great. King's human face is alive. Just like Saitama in the original work, King's character is invincible. In the original work, Saitama's human face is daily. The most direct one is the part about swatting mosquitoes. But that is Saitama, the sincere and unchanging hero Saitama. This The King in the movie is different. His daily life is also depressing. When Qianyin disappears at the beginning, I am thinking that there may be two endings. One is to use her death to make King more depressed until he explodes, or to be calm. The other is to use her more miserable life to let King pick up his true feelings. Looking at it now, it's great, great, that invincible divine King also has human troubles, it's so good. 4.8 Points is great [love]
It's not much to read, but it's very comfortable to write. It's not as bad as others said. I don't know what's going on lately. I feel like there are no good books on Tomato anymore. I read a lot of them and I got a little angry. This is one of the few books that I can read. King's fighting aspect is relatively concise (maybe the author doesn't know how to write fighting?), Perhaps to highlight King's invincibility, which is solved with one punch. It can expand the protagonist's methods, and describe more about the oppression of the Emperor's engine. That kind of ordinary and invincible flavor is here. This is only my personal feeling. I can say anything wrong. It's too early to tell, what did the king do, where did it show up, Qianyin died, the protagonist was angry because his daily life was broken, and then, in the end, the bald devil solved the main problem, I don't understand where the king is, what did you do as the king, do you want to write a high-end version of Lu Mingfei? Take off your pants and fart. Other places are pretty good and have the usual taste, so I can keep watching.
To comment on my personal opinion (different people have different requirements, purely personal opinion), the king in this book is very strong in the same echelon as the bald man, but he does not have a large-scale attack (that is, he directly kills the opponent but does not cause much damage). At present, there is no emotional line (part of the Monster Fighting Association). The king in the article did not rely on the system but relied on himself to become stronger. Basically, he did not suddenly become stronger. He worked hard step by step before breaking the limiter. Different from the original work, the king in this article had certain strength before breaking the limiter (he was hunting monsters on his own before the establishment of the Hero Association), and he was still slowly getting stronger. At that time, he was still a passionate person who wanted to become a hero. Later, to some extent, he caused a lot of casualties, which led him to deny himself, "Am I really a hero?" At the same time, he truly became stronger during that incident, which explains the origin of the "Emperor Engine" in this book and the origin of the scar, and he became a god in the process. After the passion in my heart was extinguished, my personal goal was to live a peaceful life. I joined the Heroes Association because I was alone before and many witnesses recognized me. If my identity was exposed and I didn't join, I thought it would be very troublesome in the future. After gaining power, King had no ambitions. When leading the team, he served as an insurance to allow others to gain experience and become stronger without directly speedrunning. His "justice" also became blurred as his passion faded. After that, his emotions became very weak and he did not reveal too much. After making an unauthorized suggestion for others, he would ask the other person's wishes (at the beginning, he would ask himself whether the other person would accept the unauthorized suggestion? Those), but he still had sympathy and did not have a pure "weirdos deserve to die" proposition. During the battle, he has no flashy moves, only simple and pure attacks (high damage with the left hand, high damage with the right hand [laughing evilly]), which are basically just one strike (for example, kicking a dragon to death like a roadside). Here is my personal opinion on this book, I hope it can help you. And the author who suffers again, Haokang Aikang [laughing evilly]
A very nice article about King. The King in the book is very strong and has a very lovable character. His main goal in life is to protect his daily check-in life from being ruined by weird people and various incidents. The portrayal is quite good. The controversial part is the portrayal of the character Qianyin. I personally think it is quite poor. The main difference is that it is too abrupt and unnatural, and the character of King Such a relatively aloof character would suddenly be interested in a certain character, as well as the sudden emotional line. Ten years ago, it might have been touching. Now, this routine of resurrection from the dead is a bit boring and disgusting. The portrayal of the protagonist King is very good, and the original content is also very good. Just don't write any more bad emotional scenes. It looks quite awkward and humorous.
Don't be fooled by the title and unappreciative book reviews, read here! Different from other One-Punch fans who mainly write about passionate battles, the words in this book are filled with a calmness and tranquility like a mountain stream, and occasionally there is a slight sound of water flowing. Those who are looking forward to stacking up combat power and fierce battles can turn left and leave. Maybe... Delicate writing is not very suitable for you? Well, you can also try reading it, and you won't lose anything. If you can get past some of the slightly AI-modified parts above and are willing to accept this kind of silence and tranquility, then you can taste the peaceful daily life of the powerful king, as well as the less-daily battles and resolutions of events that are usually broken by him. Then, the original heroine of this book - Qianyin, a violinist (and Mitsuki who assists her) The appearance, experiences, and encounters of the characters are all concise and complete, and a vivid character image is outlined in just a few strokes. The background is clearly explained, the psychological journey is complete, and the characters are three-dimensional. Underneath the aftermath of the battle of the extraordinary and powerful, are the powerlessness, hardship, and disasters of ordinary people, and... As a weak person, he also has the tenacity of life. ——I can actually read "the body is disabled but the mind is strong" in Tomato, it's really surprising There is no problem at all with the appearance of the original characters in this book. The one who thinks there is a problem is that he himself has a problem. Personally, I think it can be used as a model for fan fiction.
It's a wonderful feeling. A different king feels very interesting, but there are too few updates.
The author's level is very capable, the author also has the strength of Long Dian, and the protagonist is perfectly created. There were no high-octane scenes during the writing process, but this feeling suited the protagonist very well. With him around, everything would not be calm. At least for now, he deserves this score. [Like][Like][Like]
You can make up for King's past. For example, after being wounded by an octopus monster, King hated his own weakness and embarked on the same path as Saitama.
So far..._(:з∠)_It looks good. Judging from the King portrayed in the chapters "Individualism" and "Determination", he is a serious person with a gentle heart. He will help others and protect what he wants within the scope of sight based on his inner judgment. From what I've read so far, it feels like it's telling King's story and daily life in a calm tone. Using King's perspective of solving events makes me curious about what kind of daily life he really wants to protect? What kind of persistence does he have? Also, could it be that spending several chapters to create the character "Qianyin" is to lead to something below? [Thinking] Will King make any changes in the future? Does the novel have any main goal? Or... What kind of King does the author want to create? Looking forward to the follow-up content_(:з∠)_
It's very peaceful and normal. Although there are some conflicts, they are resolved quickly. The author's writing style is very good and looks very comfortable. It's good to read a few articles occasionally, but if you keep reading, it will seem dull. The king in the author's writing is similar to parallel time and space. He has strong strength and a very calm character. It describes his daily life as a hero and the difficulties he faces. Forgive me for not being able to describe the feeling because of my poor language skills, but the author's writing is really good and it's really comfortable to watch, but it's a bit bland. This is also the theme.
To be honest, I have been reading this book for a long time. I read it every day when it is updated. This book gives me a good feeling. It expresses the real image of the king in the hearts of our readers. The author's writing style is really good. Whether it is the king's growth, daily life or battle, it is all very comfortable to write. But why is the rating of this book so low? There is definitely no problem in terms of quality. Maybe the popularity of Punch on a Tomato fandom is relatively low, but I still hope the author will continue writing because this is indeed a good book.
It's a very interesting book. Finally, someone has linked the identity and strength of King, the strongest person on earth.
I like this style very much. It is calm and powerful, as if it can crush everything. There may be some flaws in the character, but they have been improved. All in all, I think this book deserves more than this.
It's really good. The author is a newbie and his writing is not very good. Some people say it's AI, but I don't think so, because the author said he copied other authors' works, and the character description is very good in the later part, especially the psychological confusion of the king. The first part is very similar to Kira Yoshikage's pursuit of an ordinary life. Anyone who affects his daily life will die, but the number of chapters is too few, please write more! ! ! ! !
Can you draw that woman to life?
Very good, I have the desire to read more
The protagonist in the author's works is gentle yet powerful, peaceful and at ease, with a transcendent state of mind.
King in the eyes of other heroes
Very good, Qianyinbie is really gone, author, please don't force me to beg you [crying]
It calms me like the sound of a thousand notes I can find my tenacity
Uh-huh, I don't mean anything else. "[OK]" is what it means. Do you understand? So can it be updated 10,000 times a day?
Compared with other One Punch King fans, they are much better. Those who forcibly add systems and external forces fall into the inferior category.
Break the stereotypes and create alternative stories. It's just that the chapters are a bit short and not enough to read.
There are actually three characters in one word