[Super God Power System] [Single Female Lead: Yan]
After transmigrating into the Super God Universe, Kaluo became the last Saiyan in the Known Universe. By chance, he also met a little blond girl named Yan.
"Kaluo, look! I can fly!" Under his guidance, the young Yan wobbled up off the ground.
"Tch, who are you calling an angel? Your whole family are angels!" That was what Yan said as a teenager.
Then the demons launched a massive invasion. To help Yan become a Super Soldier who could stand on her own, Kaluo chose to leave the stage for a while, letting her believe he had been swallowed by the Void.
Thousands of years later, facing the legendary Ultimate Fear,
the newly crowned Angel King Yan stood before countless lives.
"So this is the Ultimate Fear... That's it?"
"Now, how will you deal with this move?"
The next moment, her eyes turned emerald green and her golden hair slowly lifted. A torrent of dark energy turned the wings on her back gold, while lightning crackled all around her.
[Super Angel: Second Stage]
[Tenfold Kaio-ken]!
Death God Karl: "What do you mean... her dark energy index soared exponentially, then increased tenfold again? That's not scientific!"
The writing is very good, and the destructive power of the battle is in line with the original work. Some super gods are capable of destroying objects within a radius of ten or dozens of meters, which makes me want to laugh when I see them. Not as good as a missile on Earth hahaha
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It's okay, but some of the timelines are wrong. For example, Leng is about 300 years older than Yan, not much older. Is Yan already a senior Tianshi before he has become Tianshi Leng? There is also Leng Chuan Feng Silver Armor. I remember very little about this metal. Almost all of it is in the treasure house of knowledge.
It's good-looking, and it's considered to be top-notch among Super Gods. I can give it a rating of 8.8. The plot is okay. The main storyline has just begun. For some people, the annoying point is that it's a nanny (we'll see if there will be nannies in the follow-up, we're starting to see some clues). Then, the strategy and battles are not described in detail, which makes it a bit boring. Overall, it's a good Super God Question.
Adhering to the principle of non-interference in the development of the planet, we vigorously fight against illegal invasion and war by illegal forces. My suggestion is that you can explore science and technology and write about people's livelihood at the end of the writing. After all, there are no wars outside the world. You can write about the civil war first. After writing about the civil war, you can write about going abroad. You can also write about the resource wars of the aerospace industry and the United Nations. You can also write about the triangle and the beast body. At the end, you can also write about the development of the earth into your current Z galaxy organization.
It's well written. It doesn't start with the earth spinning around, or another protagonist dragging the earth away! The protagonist's character is well portrayed, and he's not a bad guy!
I am sincere and generous. If I were to give it a rating, I should be able to score it eight points or higher. The basic logic is smooth and the emotional scenes are not abrupt.
Okay, I'll look at it
It's pretty cool, why are the ratings so low?
Not bad, the writing is very good. Keep up the good work.