Blue Archive: I Kidnap Aris from the Start

How should I put it, although I am not a reader who has read many BA fanfics (because I haven't finished the BA plot yet, so I am a complete novice), but after reading these days, I have the following points of view: 1. I think it is very well written. To be honest, every time I read it, I laugh from time to time. In this novel, I have generally understood the original plot of the Game Development Department (I haven't finished it yet, I will add a comment when the time comes). All in all, It is very perfect. 2. Although I have never written a novel (probably), but just reading it, I feel that the rhythm of this novel is a bit strange. I think some things can be stretched out a little bit. Although I am not good at it, it will make readers more comfortable. Then I feel that there are fewer details, but I won't comment here. In my opinion, it is already very good. Therefore, I sincerely hope that this book will continue to be written. What I said above are all my own opinions from the bottom of my heart. I don't want to ask the author to change anything. After all, I can't do it. And being able to write so many words is actually better than most people. Come on, it's a great book with potential. (I would like to ask, is the book signed for 150,000 words? It's okay not to reply. After all, privacy may be involved.) Here again, I wish the author good luck in writing the book, open up his mind, and do better and better, 100,000 Volts, State Grid. Woohehe~ Now that you've read it, let's add a comment. How should I put it? In fact, I can't see any problems. I can see that the overall situation is improving. The update speed is also quite fast. To be honest, I can't do it at this speed. I feel a little tired after writing two to three thousand words a day. When you have no inspiration, you can also read more about other BAs. There are also many new articles written very well. Come on, keep an eye on you. Remember, don't put too much pressure on yourself and focus on reality.

The potential is very high. The author will revise the early plots in the later stage, so the first few chapters will obviously feel like the transitional plot is too fast. You can relax the requirements a little first. However, the next few chapters are really on the right track and it will be comfortable to watch. It will be much better to take a closer look after I don't know how long the chapters have been changed [Note]

Come on, come on, you must update it, otherwise the author will be cursed to become a little loli [pouts]

After watching it for so long, I just remembered that I haven't rated it yet😅

It's pretty good so far. Except for the Millennium period, the protagonist has no performance in more than ten chapters. Kay and Alice are all in charge. The protagonist's performance is too little. I hope it can be improved in the future.

You still dare to abduct and traffic children. It seems that you will be punished😍😍😍

After reading the previous chapters, I feel very good so far. 👍 The writing is smooth and interesting, and it definitely has great potential! And Alice is so cute! ❤️

(An Alice cook walks quietly by)

Very human, just look and don't ask why

The author writes well, keep up the good work👍👍👍