Star Iron, Looks Like I Have to Elbow the If Line

This book seems to have no female protagonist, but a self-contained male and female protagonist who is ambiguous with the protagonist, but the other content is not bad. Overall, I give it four stars. Now I am curious about the future development of the male and female protagonist.

This book has mixed reviews, but I think it is very well written. First of all, the author's way of shaping the character of Wukong is amazing, completely breaking the old stereotype of Wukong obeying Grandma Rong. Aunt Rong is no longer what she used to be, always chatting and doing nothing with Voldemort. Secondly, the description of Thanos's battle with Wei Wuxian is vivid and vivid, completely changing Wei Wuxian's cowardly and incompetent appearance in our hearts. Moreover, Thanos did not fall in love with Snow White from the beginning as in the original work, but only developed a secret love for her after witnessing Bai Zihua's chaos and abandonment, and the logic of the plot became extremely smooth. The writing is quite good, but there is one problem: why are there so few people? @ Saw

I thought the reviews were exaggerating, but it's really nice. The food and grass in the early stage, I lied to you that it will be fairy grass when fighting Foehn in the second volume. Tomato t0 collapse iron novel. Just because the author has watched the B-station up video of The Suffering of Despair and studied the worldview of Bentie, it has surpassed most Tomato Bentie novels. I don't know why the rating is low though. But if you want to read pure Beng Tiewen, this is the only way to go. Several other Bengtie stories with a score of 9 or above are just role-playing stories, which are impure, apart from romance stories with different styles. The protagonist's combat power is high, almost at the same level as the old man with a red nose (that is, his technological power is slightly inferior to that of a genius), but what's very valuable is that he doesn't have a bad character, and he doesn't lower his technology and genius level. And at the same time, he is worthy of the identity of the commander in mind and destiny (different from those pure historical and brainless fans). Read this book, don't be put off by the introduction, you won't be able to stop reading it, especially the second volume. The guarantee was triggered, and Shili really struck gold.

The if theme is very interesting as always. The author also hid the protagonist if under the if theme. This is so interesting. It is rare for Elio to observe the development of the protagonist. The interest of the plot has soared. The quality of the plot itself is not bad. The development of the original plot is quite good. I have a high desire to follow up on updates in the near future. I would like to encourage you with good reviews.

Overall, it was ok and a lot of fun. The main character has a brief sexual transformation and never marries a non-lily or bisexual man. The reason is because this book has a female protagonist. It hasn't appeared yet, but the author personally admits that it will happen later. Anyway, I'll take the first step and see you in the next book. In fact, I'm still reading... I don't know how many books this is about breaking my promise... I'll tell everyone when the heroine shows up, and we'll talk about it then. Editor 2: I haven't watched it anymore, meow. It's because I don't want to suddenly see the love line. If I make up for it again later, I will definitely tell everyone whether there is a female protagonist.

It's an interesting book, but it's obvious that the outline has been changed. The first version should have been about the protagonist staying in the Nether Prison for decades, and then the if line broke out, and then came out during the chaos in Luofu, or returned to the timeline with the help of mechanical gods to create a reincarnation-like setting. Now this version is somewhat inconsistent with the introduction. I suggest the author rewrite the introduction, or have more ideas to make the if plot explode? The plot is not that poisonous, but the protagonist is really separated after the outline is changed. In his previous life, he suddenly changed from a small leader who was secretly taught by the King of Medicine to an "old monster" who has been hidden for many years. The difference is indeed serious... Also, the author should write less about male protagonists. It is indeed a bit disgusting to read too much of this stuff, and most of the readers attracted by Bengtie hope that the protagonist can interact more with the plot characters in the game. It is really not a good choice to use a corner as the "peace of mind" in the article (family type) Places are more for readers to soothe their mood. When you finish reading the ups and downs of the plot, you need this kind of psychologically safe place to write about your daily life. Otherwise, being tense all the time will make people tired.) And remote places will inevitably reduce the interaction between the protagonist and the original plot characters... Summary: Although I am young, if I write down carefully, I can become a good source of food.

It's great. I hope the author can polish it slowly. Recently, this book always pops up when I search for books. I feel that if I continue writing, it will be a good debut. I hope the plot will be polished more. There are also some settings. Don't swallow the original settings. Jiaoqiu is also a doctor. Although it is for fun, I bought it 💊 and it feels a bit deviated from the original setting.

Excellent, it's so well written. You don't follow the train crew, you act on your own. The protagonist has the kindness of a man with a rich destiny, the justice and toughness of a patrolman, and the joy of fun to ensure the fun of the plot. The combination creates a character that I like very much.

The plot, writing, and characters of this book are all handled very well. Although the score is low, it cannot cover up its excellence. But I would like to put forward some humble opinions here: I think the author can write a paragraph of review later in the article, review himself, and review the person "Jiang Shuci". The excellence of a story lies in the author's understanding, and the soul of the characters comes from the characters' feelings about the story. Lu Mingfei in "Dragon", Daai Xianzun, etc. Are all characters that can be remembered deeply because they definitely have rich stories, unique characters, and are symbols of reality. Jiang Shuci is a mortal soul, but he has the predecessor of "Jiang Ci", which forces him to make progress and forge a sharp sword to kill his past self. If I want to face the past and understand my original intention, I must conduct a deep examination. Finally, I would like to encourage the author again. There is really nothing wrong with this book. As long as the author can finish it, I will definitely read it.

It's really beautiful, especially the scene where I elbow Foehn, it feels like the joy in my heart is perfectly reflected. Change the imperfect future and create a HE ending that makes everyone laugh. This is what happiness should do!

The characters I see so far are not broken. Then it is not about following the protagonist through the main line of the game, but integrating your own story with the main line. You don't recruit girls carelessly. Is this what I appreciate most so far? Like? Of course, after all, I come from the Mao Guesthouse, and all of them are about the Firefly falling in love, the Robin falling in love, accepting the Big Black Tower, etc. What I want to read is an adventure story.

It's very good. The author has a good understanding of the story of the gangsters in Bengtie. As for the two male protagonists they mentioned, they are just passers-by and have not had a role in the scene for a long time. Moreover, the protagonist is a pure fate walker and has no love.

It was very enjoyable to watch, there is no weak plot, and there are no poisonous points. I started to follow it from the middle of the second chapter. It is really good to watch. As an aside, I have never played Beng Tie, but I have read dozens of Beng Tie's books. I can reconstruct and connect the overall plot through the novels I have read [face covering]. Also, I have recently been following "Beng Tie: I was picked up by Kafka and I followed with one click" and "Beng Tie: I just traveled through time!" You want me to save the Black Tower? Why are the protagonists all named Jiang? Is there any unwritten rule [face covering]

Ms. Heita is talented, Ms. Heita has extraordinary intelligence, Ms. Heita is extremely smart, Ms. Heita is unparalleled in elegance, Ms. Heita has a beautiful heart and beautiful mouth, Ms. Heita has a wise heart and ingenious mind, Ms. Heita has both talent and beauty, Ms. Heita is like a fish and a wild goose, Ms. Heita is naturally beautiful, Ms. Heita is beautiful and fragrant, Ms. Heita has a beautiful face! Let us sing for the Black Tower. The Black Tower's beauty surpasses the universe, the Black Tower's knowledge is famous among thousands of stars, the Black Tower's name resounds throughout the world, and the Black Tower's power reaches the sky and the earth! She wakes up my sleeping soul, answers my doubts, and is illuminated by her thousands of mirrors, and I fall head over heels in admiration! She is our great god, she is our shining light! Let us sing the praises of the Black Tower. The incomparably beautiful Lady of the Black Tower awakens "nothingness"! The naturally beautiful Ms. Heita makes "Tonghe" sing! The beautiful lady of Heita is praised by "pure beauty"!

It looks good. This kind of opening attracts me. I look forward to when he elbows the if line.

Summary: Good-looking and recommended. Excellent: The writing is humorous, and the plot is the most interesting Bengtie fan to watch. Disadvantages: 1. The outline has most likely been changed. 2. There are duplicates in places that have not been deleted. It is recommended to change the introduction

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him, but I'm more thoughtful. Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain, "Young man, you are proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It showed Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. Luffy fought against Ultraman for Rem, and the whole episode was full of light. But Pikachu's skin is indeed too thick. If Yasuo hadn't blocked the 100,000 volts with a wind wall, and then followed it with a steel-cutting flash, this wave of turtle Qigong would have been interrupted. But I care more about Lin Daiyu's words to the Avengers: "Brother Baoyu, are these weirdos wearing leather jackets here to rob the Grand View Garden?" It shows that Lin Daiyu is unable to get down from Iron Man flying in the sky. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.~ Meow

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The three outlooks are extremely upright, but a little skewed. This is how a person's destiny is skewed. There is currently no obvious CP, suspected of being a wolf treasure The best thing is that the original plot is not copied mechanically (as someone who plays the original game and has read a lot of fans, it is quite friendly)

The early stages of the story were not very good, but the appearance of Xi Lian made up for this. The fairy tale love is really lovable and addictive, and this story is even more perfect. I can't deny the shortcomings in the early stages of the story, but fairy tale love is already the greatest gift

It's a good book, the story line is rigorous, the characters are not OOC, and what attracts me most is the funny language and humor. It is a masterpiece among the Bengtie fandom, but I don't know why, but few people seem to read it. The character is very charming

The first part is food and grass, and the timeline that is elbow-to-elbow with Foehn is fairy grass. So far I've seen the Ompharos part, which is a bit unbearable. It doesn't quite meet my expectations? (Maybe) Therefore, five stars are given to Laojiang who defeated Fenfeng. I plan to change the taste now, maybe I'll see if I can continue to taste the saltiness after a while? (Who knows what will happen next)

I have approved it before, Onfalos IF was five-star before. Logically speaking, it should be cool and burning, but then maybe in order to follow the main line, it entered the stage of adding more noodles, more water, more water, more noodles. I couldn't stand it anymore, but it is indeed worthy of five stars.

My favorite is still the first if line of Foehn Feng, it is very exciting. The main reason was that I had been chasing her for a long time, and then I suddenly decided to cast an if-line Xi Lian as the heroine. I don't think it's acceptable. Let's see you again when we are destined.

Advantages: The author likes to describe the forces of the universe. Who doesn't want to see the love and hatred between these destructive gangsters, unlike many books, as if the universe is just a few planets between nameless guests.

It's pretty good, but the protagonist is either solving trouble or on the way to solving it. It's okay at first, but it gets a bit annoying as time goes by. However, the author's writing is not bad, but adults who go to work every day can't accept this kind of plot that is no different from real life.

You can read it, it can be considered a masterpiece of Star Iron. I said with more than 10,000 hours of reading time, it is considered gold in tomatoes, and there are also the boys and girls they say. Good looking➕malnourished🟰boy and girl ? I personally don't quite understand it... [Laughs] In short, I personally think that if this book can grow up normally, the rating will be around 9.1. In short, believe me

Being stabbed in the back, the Great Love Wolf turned out to be the Messenger of Joy [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky smile] [sneaky laugh]

His Anka... Is it Xiao Nanliang as mentioned in the comment area? I'm not sure, but the author's description feels very wrong. He blushes from time to time, blushes, blushes, and is shy. Is this Xiao Nanliang? It's weird. I'm thinking that Zhengtai who reads other books is not so weird. I heard people in the comment area say that the heroine is Xi Lian. I'm reading it now. I'll tell you when I see it. It's indeed Xiao Nanliang, that's what the male protagonist thinks, then Anka... In short, you can read the description at the end, especially the blushing cheeks in a certain chapter, the sweat on the body, etc. Other than that, the writing is okay. My personal suggestion is to skip the chapter about Anka and just read the rest. It can be seen that the author likes Xiao Zhengtai Nanliang very much, and contains private goods in the book

Let me comment that I have just finished the story of Xianzhou and haven't gotten into it yet. The plot of Xianzhou was a bit frustrating at first glance, but after listening to Jing Yuan's explanation, I felt it was acceptable and the characters were much fleshed out. It's not considered poisonous at the moment. Now go to the Glazed Light Belt, the plot has not yet unfolded.