After Escaping, the Tentacled Creature I Raised Became the Strongest in the Apocalypse

No malice, five stars. I just want to make some small suggestions. I have only read a dozen chapters so far. The author is very accomplished in emotional description and is very delicate. The world view is also quite attractive. However, the division of plot distribution is not particularly accurate. The emotional description in each chapter is completely greater than the plot advancement, resulting in a very slow and hasty plot. I can understand the numbness and pain of the protagonist in the laboratory, but too much emphasis will be counterproductive. There are also some conflicts in the world view and character settings. The background is the end of the world, and the protagonist has top-level healing power. Logically speaking, even if he is forced to do experiments, it should be to develop rapid treatment drugs or something that is appropriate to the theme of the end of the world, but the protagonist is just blindly doing "self-healing extreme experiments" "It's a bit tortured for the sake of torture. It feels like a very unnecessary and wasteful experiment of the protagonist's abilities (I only saw a dozen chapters), and Zero's exposure also conflicts with the protagonist's requirements. In short, there are many logical contradictions. I hope the author and teacher can write better works in the future! (Ps: I really like the teacher's world view and settings)

In the cage, two lives meet and redeem each other. Maybe we are still too weak now, but it doesn't matter, just move forward boldly. With you by my side, I won't be afraid of anything. From the first acquaintance to getting to know each other, we have gone through so much. Hiding in the Dawn Base, covering up in the Glimmer Settlement, and fighting side by side with the Iron Brand, the two little bitter gourds relied on each other and protected each other. After everything settled, they had a home that belonged to them. "The two embraced each other in the middle of the sea of flowers. The ruins were their background, and life was spreading under their feet. At this moment, it had nothing to do with the end of the world or identity. There was only mutual recognition of each other's hearts, and the pure love that was enough to shake all the haze." This is pure love that is absolutely loyal and sincere.

The author writes it very well, the plot has a tight rhythm, the atmosphere is just right, and the two male protagonists have online IQs. If it were me, I wouldn't be able to complete my plan to escape from the base, nor would I have the strong will like Shou. The two male protagonists depend on each other, influence each other, and understand each other. They are a match made in heaven. Suffering did not defeat Lin Xu. His will supported him and he met Zero. It was two little bitter gourds in the apocalypse who built their own home. It was very heartbreaking, but also comforting for them.

It's quite interesting and attractive. The weak protagonist fights against the huge and unshakable enemy. They are under great pressure and live under the feeling of helplessness, tension and powerlessness. There are also warm interactions in the middle. It's not a cool article. In the end, revenge cannot resolve the hatred.

It's pretty good. It's the type of post-apocalyptic wasteland that I like. I originally thought it was a bedtime cookie, but it turned out to be a serious drama. It took me a few days to read it. The writing is very delicate, the logic is smooth, and the emotional description is also very detailed. It is considered top-notch in Tomato.

It's very interesting to watch, the characters are very well designed, I just like to look at people, and the emotions are very delicate. People who watch it really want to cry 🥺 Super super super super super super super super super super super good looking 😘

I was originally worried that it would be a crisis, but after reading it, although I felt relieved from time to time, I could also feel the warmth of the two getting along. It was very well written! 😳😳[admiration]

Very nice, go go go go go go

Very delicate writing, I hope to end Lin's pain quickly, hateful researcher

Big, it looks great. Come on, keep up the good work! Nice to poke my XP 😳😳😳