HP: the Fall of the Pale Peacock

In the early stage, Lucius struggled and escaped, but was eventually forced to return to the embrace of the Dark Lord. I hope that Xiao Lu can pry open the Dark Lord's defense and in turn control the Dark Lord to fight with him. Hahaha, come on, madam, the emotions are written very delicately, without the kind of industrial abuse and desserts that are tortured for the sake of being tortured and sweet for the sake of sweetness. The period under the rule of the Dark Lord is indeed extremely depressing. I hope Lucius can regain the glory of platinum.

It's very beautiful, and the character descriptions are very good (but how can I put it, I always feel that Lu likes Draco a little too much. An innocent person would actually like the product of rape. I know that he doted on Draco in the original work. This feeling is purely my personal opinion)

Not bad, not bad I just feel that Draco's position in this article is a bit... Um... As if he was born to torture Lu, and there is no plot behind it. Of course, I don't deny Draco's role: making Lu gradually dependent, whether it is physical or psychological dependence In short: abuse is really abuse. This is also very subtle, but it is also very beautiful. There is a wonderful feeling of symbiosis between the knife and the sugar. You can't separate them. If you separate the knife, you can't taste the sugar. If you separate the sugar, it will be connected to the knife. Anyway, it looks good. Please be patient and watch. This kind of perverted "love" I think is delicious ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃelegant

It's okay. The writing style is improving chapter by chapter, which can be seen with the naked eye (although sometimes it may be inadvertently OOC), but overall it is still a very high-quality fanfic. But the relationship between the two people was not equal from the beginning. I watched it in one sitting at 5 a. M. In the morning. Later, I saw that Lucius was broken and rebuilt. He finally put himself back together little by little, only to be broken again. He was kneaded into a docile and hollow appearance. The proud soul that attracted me at the beginning seemed to have really died. I really feel that Lucius was tricked out of Stockholm by Lao Fu in the later period [face covering] I have to say that Dumbledore was right. The power of love made Voldemort, who wanted to leap to death, die for love. How can this not be considered defeating Voldemort with love? [Face covering] But I still think two people should be equal first and then love each other. (Every time I see Lucius being tortured, I will inexplicably think of Abu. Abu is looking at you with disappointment in the sky) [face covering] And I personally think that Lucius's feelings for Draco can be described as more contradictory and complicated. After all, it is forced by others. Lucius is still a man with a high social status. This, this, he is forced to have a child, and he is the child of someone he hates. He is such a proud person... Although there will be tenderness due to blood, after all, Draco can be said to be Lucius. The only relative in the world, so Draco's identity will be very complicated in Lucius's eyes - the child of a disgusted person, an unbearable witness, an innocent child, the only relative... And Draco's emotions towards Lucius, the "mother", should also be very complicated and twisted, so I think a more tense picture can actually be drawn between the two people.

It's really good to watch. In the early stage, Lucius was tortured, and in the later stage, Voldemort was not allowed to chase his wife in the crematorium [laughing]

This is a book I devoured in one gulp. I have always liked Harry Potter fans, especially those related to Riddle. I can accept their stories and even bless them, but due to my own understanding of Riddle, I think most of their stories are actually Be's. When I read this article, I was still shocked. I felt that I could not understand that in my eyes, the proud heir of the Malfoy family ended up like this. Even writing down his ending stroke by stroke was better than watching him become like this bit by bit. Maybe it's because I feel sorry for the boy at the beginning, so I always feel that one of them should die and the other be injured. I see him being tamed little by little.

I'm skipping to watch it, I'm a little sizy now, I'll come back to watch it when the time comes ￣ ￣)σ I read some skipped content, eleven years, a whole eleven years [smile] Can you still drink it? Otherwise, it's still Be. It's Draco Malfoy, not Riddle [stunned]

It's very beautiful, but when can you start torturing me?

After reading The Young Masters, I kept looking for books about Lucius Malfoy and the Dark Lord, but none of them had the feeling I wanted, until this book. When I read this novel, I felt it was a little better than average at first, maybe three or four stars. But when I read that Lucius attempted suicide, I didn't want to read anymore. Many old bookworms know that usually after this kind of plot, they wake up and fall in love again and again. In my opinion, it is Stockholm and Lima Syndrome. It is not even certain whether Lima Syndrome exists. It is most likely that the author is trying to force the love of the protagonists back. But this novel didn't. Lucius was still the same Lucius after he woke up, and the Dark Lord only noticed how special Lucius was to him. Until the last extra chapter, it was only the Dark Lord who finally realized that he loved Lucius after losing him, but it was unclear when he fell in love with him. As for whether Lucius loves the Dark Lord or not, who knows. The relationship between the two of them is like the statue made by Malfoy, the snake is tightly wrapped around the twisted person.

It's super good-looking, but I think Lu is a bit too miserable.

Twisted, sick, hopeless and powerless, and finally sink together. The large-scale writing of Tom perfectly presents Voldemort's morbid and twisted life of not understanding love.

This book is actually quite cruel to Luke, but it was really fun to read (there is a fertility potion in the middle... 😋 Well, after seeing what happened later, all I can say is that I have been torturing Luke😭😭

A kind of depressing beauty, not bad, it would be nice if there were some sweet extra stories about rebirth [face-covering][face-covering][face-covering] "The closed loop has been completed, and the cage has become eternity. This twisted awakening and symbiosis, at this moment, has reached its morbid and satisfactory ending." "When the curse of death was trapped on him, the evil and powerful Dark Lord finally understood what love was. He couldn't spend his whole life commemorating it, and could only use the sleeping poison to find him." Okay, actually I don't have any more tricks... I still feel torture｡°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°｡

It's pretty good. When I saw the white peacock in the name, I subconsciously classified it into another HP article. The result is completely different. It can be said that this is the first time I have seen this type of article. It is a different Vidi and Lucius.

The writing is quite good. Lucius was abused and his personality was completely broken. I had psychological expectations for him, so it's okay. In fact, Voldemort is a person who doesn't understand love and can only hurt, just like many female protagonists nowadays. But the introduction is purely a scam, haha, you will understand after watching the extra.

Very good-looking, but I don't like Rosier (don't spray), Lucius and Voldemort, Narcissa, the image is very restored [shy], I like it

It's a bit cruel to the Malvo family. I'm a little worried about whether Lucius's gender can be returned, but it's still pretty good. It's just a matter of whether the gender has been changed back.

The title of this book is really apt. To the end, it is almost a breakdown and reconstruction of Lucius, which is very depressing and depressing. My favorite type is being noble in front of others and surrendering behind others (it would be better if there is a pull), but in this article, Lucius was broken into pieces, and the struggle seemed to be in vain. The little dragon raised by the lord looked like the lord and gave him a fatal blow.

It's beautiful, very beautiful, the entanglement and pull between two people, Lucius's self-redemption and sinking, Fu Da's control and gaze. Although healthy love is good, twisted love is also deeply popular. Although the article is well written, I really want to give 0 points [crying] [crying] [crying], HEHE, double death is also HE, this is probably to trick people into killing them.

It ranks second among the HP fanfics I've read. The author has profound writing skills, and the conflict and entanglement between the two people is well written, especially the feeling of being entangled by thorns, which is really touching. Give a five-star review

Very nice. And all novels are free. Most of the authors there are also very logical.

Good food, just this Volushuang! !

Recommended, really, Jumbo looks great

This is so cruel, why is it marked HE?

Healthy love is sweet, but unhealthy love is really wonderful.

It's good to watch, but I think it's very boring, because Luke turned into a puppet in the middle, and his pride was compromised. I'm not satisfied with the ending. I hope Voldemort was killed by Luke himself.

The writing is very good, the emotional description is very delicate, the writing style is very good, I like it very much

Depressive beauty, unique character description

Super super super pretty👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Super possessive, I like it