Reincarnated as a Villain Loli, Heroine, Please Don't Come Over

It's very interesting. The writing is good and empathic, but I want to see the second heroine see the heroine's "death" [Thinking] Death Escape (fake death) [Love] The author worked hard to reach the ending, come on

It hurts, it hurts so much! What happened to the protagonist really killed me, and I felt very distressed. But this book is really nice, and the author's writing is great, but some parts could be described in detail. For example, the part where the protagonist escapes to Hanjiacun and meets Gouwa, you can talk about the process of getting along with Gouwa in detail. It would be a bit unreasonable to develop a deep relationship without even the process of getting along. Overall, this book is great. I hope to see similar articles from the author. Keep up the good work! [Blowing kiss]

Absolutely sadistic, (the plot is cliché, but the writing makes up for it) It's a book with a lot of sadism mixed with a little bit of sweetness, which makes me feel bad. I'm looking forward to the 350234th day when the author travels back and becomes the protagonist. I want to see the bad ending, mouth-watering

Overall it was good, but there were too many chapters about abusing the protagonist. Overall it was good. The plot of chasing his wife was not enough. There was too little sugar. The sugar was not worth the knife. It was uncomfortable. I'm looking forward to the author taking on the role of the protagonist [laughs]

This book of yours is a bit dangerous I'll talk about the shortcomings later. The first and most critical thing is that it would be meaningless if you torture for the sake of torture. After all, people are either perverts or reading books just to see how you write about torture, and there are so many books on this kind of subject that can easily make people feel aesthetic fatigue. I have already read it, and there are more than 40 chapters, which means there are not many. I've just finished reading it. Most of what you wrote is for the purpose of abusing people, which makes it easy for people to look tired. I still hope that you will change the way you write it later. It can be seen from the word count that there is no rating yet, so you'd better give some candy later, otherwise everyone will come to see how to abuse a person.

It's beautiful, yes, but it's too slow. The author knows what I mean, right? [Laughing]

Categories: Total Abuse, Schizophrenia, Yandere [Sneaky Smile] There is also profile fraud, which is not as lively as the profile [laughs] Things got better after Chapter 96. I admit I was a little anxious [face covering]

哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈很好啊哦不对我是说哦哦哦哦锁死了哈哈哈哈哈哈好啊锁死好啊胃有点痛啊不是不是是有点爽不对是痛得好爽哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈太好了果然还是死了好吧不对不对不对锁死了哈哈哈哈哈锁死好啊呼

I'll be conservative and give it 4 stars. Judging from what I've heard of episode 18 so far, it feels quite frustrating. The protagonist is almost pushed by the plot, rather than the protagonist pushing the plot. Everything is passive. Everything the protagonist has done so far is instinctive to save life. There is no wit, no plan, it's all instinct. , It feels like the author wants to describe the protagonist's powerlessness and confusion when he has just traveled to this world, and the fear of facing the reborn heroine, but I don't know whether he wants to write this deliberately, or the writing is not enough, which makes it seem that the protagonist is acting instinctively throughout the whole process, just to save his life, and why he plays He Xiaoqian. I don't know if it's to make the plot seem reasonable, to make the reborn heroine pay more attention to the protagonist, and to promote the plot, or what the reason is. These are the only issues I can think about at the moment. I haven't heard anything about it yet. In fact, this article gives me the feeling that I can no longer listen to it, but the title of the later plot still seems a bit exciting, so I am also considering whether to continue listening to it.

Pure sweetness, no knife at all. Very nice❤️❤️❤️Boss, the writing is very good❤️❤️❤️, I hope the boss will become He Xiaoqian [Love]

It's very beautiful. Although it's a little fluttery and restless when you touch it, but it's very sweet and fussy and superfluous in the back. It's very beautiful and worth recommending.

Overall, it's very good. I'm looking forward to the next book.

It's pretty, but it's a bit sharp, but luckily it's he in the end There are no traditional routines, and the author's writing is good.

Good book. Although it is a relatively common theme of a reborn and revengeful heroine, the plot is not old-fashioned. It is a pity that the author seems to have stopped updating it (sad)

Is it really necessary in many places?

How to make a phone call

It looks good, but there are too many abusers and a little less sugar.

Come on, your writing is good.

It feels like it starts to go a little faster in chapters 16 and 17. It feels like there is no sugar. In the end, it seems that He Xiaoqian hardly brings any smile in her life.

You're so cunning, it's a pity that I only saw tomatoes now. We are finally approaching the much-loved escape stage (Happy) Also, when will the author dress up as Xiaoqian? I'm really looking forward to it.

The writing is very good, good news

It feels like the extra is the most like the normal ending

The emotions are delicate and worth watching. It's just that there's a little less sugar and it hurts╯▂╰

I didn't understand before why I wanted to play He Xiaoqian

I feel sorry for the heroine, she is so pitiful😭