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The changes are beyond recognition and incoherent.

Well written, keep up the good work

A mess.

Come on, come on, come on

Wonderful!

Water is too watery [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

Okay, pretty good-looking

A lot of bullshit

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What's wrong with not being in a group? ? What's wrong with Qun Ge? If you don't know how to write, just go and watch Swordsman and then write. Your Gou can write better than this.

I asked you to change it in the snow, it's beyond recognition