DNF Savior, Liver Explosion Skill Proficiency!

There are no problems with the plot, just a small suggestion. The harem is good, but don't turn it into a bulldozer. I understand the mentality of wanting to accept it, but some characters are dumped without any foreshadowing, such as Skadi, which is quite interesting. I will continue to pursue it and hope to write better and better in the future.

Very nice! Non-toxic and edible! The writing is also very good without stressing the strength of the battle!

A very good dnf fanfic. There are fewer and fewer dnf writers these days, and this is a story with multiple female protagonists, which is very good. Who hasn't fantasized about those beautiful female NPCs and their cool skills? I just feel that although the male protagonist's strength can be improved quickly, he is still waiting for the plot to follow the original work, and the plot has not changed much. The male protagonist's strength has not shown much, and he is not famous enough. Many people still look down on the adventurer male protagonist. But it is also understandable that writing slowly according to version events means that it is more stable to have a built-in outline. It is my personal hope that, if possible, the male protagonist can show off his strength a little more, and he can also take the initiative to change the plot in advance, change a little more, and be more pretentious, so that there will no longer be a situation where passers-by will look down on the protagonist. Then the source of the male protagonist's information has not been explained. I think it can be said that the male protagonist was reborn in the apocalypse and was sent back to the past by the lion head, so he acted around. It would be okay to directly talk to the female protagonists about the situation, which can spoil the future for others. But it all depends on the author's ideas, as long as it can be kept updated and it doesn't explode. Good luck to you.

The only thing that dissatisfied me about this book is Chapter 12. Celia, because the protagonist accidentally broke her fur and said, "I'm going to kill you." I'm very satisfied. It would be better to replace this sentence with "you idiot". Starting a harem is a way I'm familiar with. It's very comfortable to read.

Noble big guy, I have practiced all the routes of the Paladin, including telekinesis, guns, swords, and all those other messy things. I have practiced all the professions. Oh, it will blow your mind.

I wish it was more focused on the protagonist's perspective. Since going to heaven, there have been too many chapters describing other people's perspectives.

It's okay, maybe it's because the fandom is relatively unpopular, and there are too many girls in it, which may be a bit toxic. Others are okay. After all, there are very few DNF fans, and those who understand it are all old players. It's not surprising that old players basically have a few favorite NPCs and have many female fans.

It looks good and makes people feel like replaying the initial DNF. Especially the protagonist is a priest, the only profession that I would never touch in normal play [face covering]

Quantomato may be the only DNF fan that is basically still updated and can be read, and it is 99% rare.

It kind of feels like the Arad savior above, okay?

Write quickly, I know you must have saved the manuscript [laughing evilly]

Not bad, the last time I read a DNF novel was The Ghost Swordsman

Just take down Kelly and strengthen it for free [laughing]

The author's writing is very good. I rarely see anyone writing about DNF or traveling to this world. They are basically games.

I have read relatively few DNF novels. This one is quite interesting. It is similar to the route of playing games, and it is enough for hanging.

Yes, the overall life and the advancement of the main plot are okay. Compared with other authors, many characters are more vividly written (most of the female characters)

Can't even 309 break Held's curse? Can purification break the curse of Ghost Hands?

If you make a mistake, you can

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Still very good.

I'm a country boy, I like to watch

Very possible! ! Let's see what happens behind the scenes

A good soy milk powder fanfic

Childhood dream of Arad continent

Nice to watch, love to watch, like to watch [cool][cool][cool]

Fun, interesting hahaha

Oh my gosh, all the better fan fictions have been removed from the shelves now. They weren't even finished yet, but they were written down to 20,000 or 30,000 words, and then they were removed from the shelves very suddenly.

There are so few, men have poisonous milk powder that can be seen

[Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] We Arad warriors eat well.

Not bad, at least I can watch it