Fitzgerald's Who's Who

The scroll written by you is like a jade carved by a good craftsman, with unique ingenuity; like a landscape painted with rafters and brushes, it has a myriad of atmospheres. The first person is used to explore the heartbeat of the group of portraits, and the details are revealed; the third person is used to drive the main line of the story, and the context is clear; with the ambition to keep upright and go against the popular customs, the character is awe-inspiring. When the Internet is buzzing with articles and everyone abandons the first-person narration, you are like a pine in a deep forest, not leaning up with the grass; like a candle in a cold night, only keeping an inch of dim light, listening to the voice of your heart quietly, not following the good times. The world described in his writings contains not only the grandeur of mountains and seas in other worlds, but also the subtleties of human emotions. May your writing be endless from now on, like a long river, never giving up day and night; May your writing be endless, like stars shining brightly, forever shining in the sky, and eventually become a great chapter, and live up to this intention!

This first person is okay, it's very dull. The top priority is to update it quickly 😭😭😭😭😭. I feel the story is perfect. Then I have to ask whether there can be a single female protagonist.

A great novel, although there are some minor problems at the beginning, it gradually gets better at the end. The multiple perspective changes make the character portrayal more delicate, especially Winnie's growth portrayal. She has grown from being arrogant and withdrawn to a good girl who can understand others. Every time I write a secondary perspective at the end of the volume, it reminds me of the Harmono I watched a few years ago. The author likes to write secondary perspectives at the end of the volume. When writing the secondary perspective, he does not write any character names and only uses the first, second, and third person names. This allows you to guess who is talking to whom when the perspective changes from the inner description of the character and the character's characteristics. @Yuyuuyy If you are interested, you can try it

It was indeed because of the abstract title of the book that I got attracted to it at first, but now that I have followed it, I found that it is a book that suits my taste. The author's writing style is very comfortable. It is different from the brainless novels on the market. It can be regarded as a poetic novel. The writing style is fresh and natural, and the characters are three-dimensional. What is even more rare is that the article carefully analyzes the psychology of the characters and writes some in-depth content. Among the impetuous Internet articles, such a book is quite refreshing and refined. I hope it can be completed perfectly.

A new book with great potential. Readers who like the jobless style are in luck. The narrative of this book is really comfortable. The plot is narrated from multiple perspectives and multiple lines and uses the first person. It has a strong sense of substitution. The writing style is also quite delicate and strongly beneficial.

It's a slow start. I basically read novels from a bystander's perspective. I've already finished the first volume. It looks very comfortable and has a strong sense of immersion, although I don't know who I brought into it. At my sister's place... Suddenly I really thought about the suffocating feeling if there was a sister with whom I had a close relationship or if my sister changed boyfriends very quickly... I almost wanted to leave immediately. It was easier to watch it after I suppressed the weight of this character in my heart. I seem to have heard that there is a similar situation regarding unemployment? This part may be a bit difficult to accept.

It's a very good book. I can accept the author's writing style and I think it looks good. Secondly, I like the system settings in it very much. In addition, the author's writing skills are superb. It doesn't seem to have any bad points. It is a great book in Tomato. However, there is something I want to ask you about the author. Can I use the settings in your setting set to design my OC? If not please answer me. I will delete the settings. If you agree, thank you very much.

The genre is a serious Western fantasy adventure like Jobless. I hope that the subsequent plot development will not be too similar to Jobless. After all, I still want to see different growth. The writing is good, but this kind of slow-burning novel is destined to have little popularity (about the fact that the novels I like are very easy to be sold out). I hope the author can update more [I learned it] Another thing is that there are very few dramas with multiple female protagonists. Most of them are multi-female dramas with love as the main line. Is there any good friend who can recommend something similar (even if it's not Tomato)? Falling in love for the sake of falling in love is too boring. It's healthy to fall in love after taking risks together through various journeys. [Think]

This review is only for the first volume I have read so far. The plot is okay and so far it is not bad. The most important thing is that the writing of first person + third person dressing is extremely good. It is the first time I have read it written like this. More comfortable than traditional third-person viewing

. It can be seen that the author is very careful and polishes the book very, very seriously. It is different from the flowing template text on Tomato. The only disadvantage now is that the number of words is too few. Finished? What do you mean... I said this was good before... ε=(´ο｀*))) Oh

This book is quite good, but what can I say? There are too many first-person narratives, of course the author has said so, but the first opening statement of each person's heart should be carefully written. There are some flaws, but it still needs practice. You can read it. It is not a masterpiece, but it can be called a masterpiece. I still need to practice. I would like to express my personal complaint. There are too many inner dramas. The author still needs to think more about it. Of course, as a third person, it is already very good to be able to write this. It can be called a masterpiece. Please practice more.

It's a very interesting book, and it fully meets my idea of ​​western fantasy novels from another world. It's more daily life, and there aren't many battles. The current main line is the advancement of the protagonist's and other people's emotions. One of the biggest features of this book is that it provides various descriptions from different people's perspectives and describes various inner thoughts of different people. The advantage is that it makes the characters more three-dimensional. The disadvantage is that it is a bit redundant and the main line advances slowly. All in all, highly recommended

Although the story is not particularly innovative, the content is okay. As long as the author writes with care, it is still good. Come on and update the author. I hope to write a wonderful story [Like]

It's very beautiful, and it feels like watching a jobless person. It's a breath of fresh air in Tomato.

It's a very delicate writing style, and it's very interesting to use this very traditional subject matter.

It's a rare first-person novel, but the author writes it very well and it seems very immersive. I must keep writing. I will keep reading.

A very good Western fantasy novel, Love Comes from the South of the Lake

It's very beautiful and the pace is very comfortable. It would be nice if the author could write more

It's very real. I see my own shadow in the protagonist of the previous life. Come on, author!

The taste of Jobless Reincarnation Andy is very strong, but many details are different. This book is not a group portrait, right? There are a bit too many characterizations of people other than the protagonist. Although it is not boring, it is indeed a bit too much... [Thinking]

Well written, with a lot of inner drama

Promise me that you will write it down [blowing kiss]

Can be as wide as possible

So pretty!

I think this is good

It's not why it suddenly ended. I really beg you. Keep writing and I'll give you gifts. I beg you. Come back. Please.

Use less knives [Note] Originally, reading mathematics was just like reading on the roadside. I hope it can be easier to read.

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good

I finished reading it in one go. I really like this type of novel, but I still want to sigh. I, Reggie, am a little miserable.

You can eat it. If you like other worlds, you can check it out.